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WizKid · Status: Offline Member Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 24

Comment and rate plz im alittle new so

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airknight12 · Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject:

the first one has a dispoportioned render which is bad, also bad text. Rather simple but interesting and not bad for a begginer. the last one is very plain, bad text (I suck at text too) I dont like it very much but you'll get better.
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WizKid · Status: Offline Member Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 24

thxs for the comment what do u mean by dispoportioned and yea im like horrible at text its so hard to get right lol

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Yoko · Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:34 pm Post subject:

Too blurry.

Renders look stretched.

Unreadable text.
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Joey P · Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 9:11 pm Post subject:

keep it up (Y), work on the text and background, try not to use stretched or 'squeezed' renders, look at some tutorials is my advice
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WizKid · Status: Offline Member Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 24

Ok thxs well i think it looks that way b/c i resized the render before i put it into sig and i have a few i was wonder how to make the large amount of light like on the right of this sig and how to make the rays of light in this sig below.

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Ballian · Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:25 am Post subject:

everything yoko said.
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