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The Prize for Guts (Kinjutsu Training)
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The training doesn't start till the three paragraph one anyways. Isn't just five lines for none training rp?

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: Yes, just five lines, or one paragraph. Also, Yuwea, learn to use IC(In Character) and OOC(Out of Character)
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: I normally do, anyway wanna grade what i have so far? So I can have a basic Idea of how long to go on the next part.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

how about

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being realistic

It is not about length rather the training itself. To me atleast.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He makes another clone, this one infused with the healing chakra of his medical technique. It stays for a moment but then disperses into smoke. Caleb sighs and once again attempts the jutsu, this time just adding normal chakra. This clone is stable, but once again it's a mere illusion and has no life to it. Caleb spends hours on end training the master the jutsu but with no luck.  He decides to take a break and go get lunch. "I wonder what I'm missing," he says walking up to the ramen shop, "One pork deluxe to go." he looks at his bag and thinks for a moment. "On second thought make that a standard pork." he says sitting down. He hadn't planned on being gone that long, so he didn't have all his money with him.

Smelling the intoxicating aroma, he turns to get his food just as the person set it on the counter. He pays for his meal, then heads back to Tamotsu's residence. He sits down outside when he arrives, opening his noodles. He pulls out a small scroll and a pen. "Alright let's look at this logically." He draws a rough sketch of himself. He creates a normal clone which he has sit
down by him. He draws a picture representing his theories on making the clone fully physical. Alright, in order to do this I have to put some of my chakra into the clone. Which I can easily do, but the problem is solidifing it. He takes one last bite for the moment and raises to his feet, the bunshin doing the same thing.

He looks over the clone and thinks about how the illusion is created in the first place. It's a projection of chakra at it's base form, at least how I learned it, so I'll have to go back to basics. "Alright," he dimisses the clone. "I'll forget I ever knew Bunshin." He studies the scroll and follows the handseals that are on it. He cycles through the handseals for an hour or so, until he grills the seals into his memory.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC:
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Just a tip; put more description.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: This thread is kinjutsu training. Kaeor cannot join unless he was invited by Yuwea. I'm not even going to mention how in characterly this is (not)

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 10:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: I will continue this later

IC: Caleb sighs, "My mind isn't in the right place for this right now. Besides, I've outstayed my welcome." He rolls the scroll up and carries it to his bag, placing it inside. He packs the rest of his few things, and exits the house." Besides he could just learn it back at home, he was sure his family missed him. He walks out off the illusionary estate, looking back one final time. "I should write a thank you note..." Caleb pulls out a piece of paper and begins to write a message. A sudden flurry of leafs kick in up a small whirlwind and two Leaf Chuunin are standing there. One speaks up, "Caleb Umoki? Here." They hand him a scroll and walk away. His eye widen at what's written within, "Time to go tell my family."

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