Appearance:Yuutsu has shoulder blade length white hair and wears a leather no sleeves vest studded with gold tiger heads (her family symbol). She wears leather gaunlets on her forearms, and never leaves anywhere without her schimitars. Wears leather long shorts.
Level/Rank:Genin
Village:Iwagakure
Bloodline:Mikake clan (like the Kiba clan except with big cats w/ tigers as the main branch)
Main/Favored Weapon:twin schimitars (a middle eastern sword with a sharp curve)
Element:fire
Fighting type/Style: Genjutsu and taijutsu
Starting inventory:Kunai x10, shuriken x10
Strengths:Genjutsu and taijutsu
Weaknesses:ninjutsu
Jutsus:
Bloodline jutsu:Yabure Tamashi no jutsu{Tearing Soul Technique-Genjutsu} Benitora no Tsume no jutsu {Crimson Tiger's Claw Technique-transformation like Kiba and Akamaru's jutsu}
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Background: Yuutsu is the only daughter in the Mikake Clan and is usually shunned for her unique features. She is the third in her family to earn the title of Benitora (Crimson Tiger) at such a young age and aims to pass her father in skill and strength. She is highly defensive and short tempered but compassionate. Not one to trust people much, Yuutsu's only companions are a panther named Fushigi and a white tiger named Aoi. Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
1. Race is not human. Its white, black, asian, and such.
2. You need your bloodline approved
3. There is no Iwagakure at the moment.
4. Genin can't wield scimitars
5. More strengths and weaknesses
6. Ethnicity means what country do you come from, such as Fire Country, Wind Country.
7. You start off with the three basic jutsus. Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi
8. Need more information in your history _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
Another thing to add is athletic / tall / slim are three different body types. They're not quite the same either. And for that matter your character is extremely tall and heavy for her age. _________________ Syra's Theme - 463
Roleplaying Characters: Syra Ozanaru Kidaku Itichi No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure Training Points: 185 Inventory: 1 Katana Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 5 FC
1. As far as the Bloodline, as Kaeor pointed out, you'll need to get it approved because that's a Custom Bloodline. If you want it approved, you can ask someone who meets the requirements to post it for you, or take another Bloodline, or not have one at all.
2. Though they are three different body types, one CAN be like that. I'm 6' tall, slim, and kinda athletic. ^_^
3. Iwagakure is the Rock Village, since we don't have that, you'll have to fix it to either Konohagakure, Otogakure, Kirigakure, or Sunagakure.
4. As noted, can't have Schimitars. Genin can only have basic weapons like Kodachis, Wakizashis, etc. Basically, small weapons.
5. Definitely need more Strengths and Weakness, as well as putting a little detail into them.
6. Work on everything else that was noted. _________________ Lammergeier (Pet-Nin) Roleplaying Characters: Uchiha Katsuga Shikami Aoshi Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku) Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 12.5
1. As far as the Bloodline, as Kaeor pointed out, you'll need to get it approved because that's a Custom Bloodline. If you want it approved, you can ask someone who meets the requirements to post it for you, or take another Bloodline, or not have one at all
4. As noted, can't have Schimitars. Genin can only have basic weapons like Kodachis, Wakizashis, etc. Basically, small weapons.
Custom's are closed.
Scimitars are allowed and also they must be come made, Do not say, He can't. _________________
Little piece of heaven' wrote:
"Must have stabbed her fifty fucking times,
I can't believe it,
Ripped her heart out right before her eyes,
Eyes over easy, eat it, eat it, eat it! "
Roleplaying Characters: Ballian Mizunaka Fuji Aomori (The Joker) Kawada Sun Kogi RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~A Rank Missing nin Village: Suna~~~None Training Points: 0 Inventory: Fuji's sakura, Summon scroll, Kantana and scroll of rasegan, Holy grail Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 121
Due to inactivity, this RPC is denied! PM me, or another Mod./Admin., if you wish to continue. _________________ Lammergeier (Pet-Nin) Roleplaying Characters: Uchiha Katsuga Shikami Aoshi Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku) Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 12.5
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