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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:47 pm    Post subject: Mizunaka Alanna Reply with quote

Name: Mizunaka Alanna
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 100 lbs

Appearance: Alanna wears a black tank top and green cargo pants. She has a holster on each leg for a kunai, and a small beige pouch for her other equipment at her belt. The two foot-long blades are sheathed in bleached leather at either hip, and their hilts are wrapped in thin, bleached leather cords for a better grip. Her sandals, when she even wears them, are halfway between green and beige, and the cloth of her village headband is beige, though worn around her waist.

Race - East Indian
Hair - Black, shoulder-length
Eyes - Crystal Blue
Body - Slim yet athletic
Ethnicity - Kaze no Kuni

Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Bloodline: Sabaku Ken Fu
Main/Favored Weapon: Tanto
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Genjutsu
Starting Inventory: 2x Tanto, 2x Kunai, 5x Shuriken, 15 ft. of wire

Strengths:
Physical - Alanna is exceptionally fast and agile compared to normal shinobi, allowing her to outpace most and draw weapons quickly.
Mental - Alanna is very calm and focused, allowing her to catch details others might miss. This attention to detail gives her a better chance at detection Genjutsu.

Weaknesses:
Physical - Alanna has less muscle mass than normal shinobi, preventing her from using most of the power-ralated taijutsu. Her body, being so small, is also more frail than most normal shinobi.
Mental - Alanna is very paranoid, even if she doesn't outwardly show it. She will make few friends, if any, and will likely live her life in solitude. She refuses to take criticism is any way, shape, or form unless it's from someone who stands well above her in power (at least one rank higher, and sometimes not even then).

Jutsus:
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Replacement Technique]

Suna Shunshin no Jutsu [Sand Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from previous current position in a flurry of Sand and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.

Kankaku Gyoutai [Sensory Delay]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu operates on the principle of "the hand is quicker than the eye", a phrase the user will often say just before activating it. It delays the target's sensory perceptions by one second, making it seem as though time has paused. The pause is only one second long, so it seems as though it never really happened. The user will then continue the battle, but the opponent will think the user is one place, while they were there a full second before. This allows the user to usually get in two or three hits before the target becomes aware of the delay. After this the target might realize it is Genjutsu and use Genjutsu Kai, or they might not realize it and just try to anticipate one second in advance.

Jutsus to be Learned: (I plan on making custom jutsus later.)

Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]

Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Skill]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A genjutsu technique that makes the victim believe that he/she is in a totally different surrounding than they really are. This can create an advantage for the user because only the user would have the true idea of the layout of the battlefield, while their opponent does not.

Kankaku Gyoutai [Sensory Delay]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu operates on the principle of "the hand is quicker than the eye", a phrase the user will often say just before activating it. It delays the target's sensory perceptions by one second, making it seem as though time has paused. The pause is only one second long, so it seems as though it never really happened. The user will then continue the battle, but the opponent will think the user is one place, while they were there a full second before. This allows the user to usually get in two or three hits before the target becomes aware of the delay. After this the target might realize it is Genjutsu and use Genjutsu Kai, or they might not realize it and just try to anticipate one second in advance.

Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Willow]
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirement: 2 Blades
Description: To perform this technique, the user must have two blades in their hands. The user can then use these blades to stab, slice, or even impale their target in the movements similar to that of dancing. With quick movements and fast jabs, this is a formidable dance.

Magen: Niju Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Double False Surrounding Skill]
Rank: B
Requirements: Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Skill]
Description: A second atmospheric layer of Genjutsu is placed among the first illusion performed firsthand.

Futae Kakkou Datsuryoku [Double Form Strength Sap]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: After activating this jutsu, the user will usually launch a series of swift taijutsu attacks at the target. The target will think the user is growing stronger with each hit, when in actuality it is they who are seemingly growing weaker. This is also a double form jutsu, so even using Genjutsu Kai once will not stop it, and it is not visual so an eye Bloodline cannot see through it.. The strength reduction is gradual, usually ten percent every minute for five minutes, but it is enough to make a difference. What this jutsu actually does is trick the mind into limiting the muscles of the body even more than it already does, and in this manner the strength reduction becomes real. This jutsu will last half an hour or until successfully dispelled twice.

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Alanna was born in the desert when her parents went out for a walk. She was born prematurely, and so her parents could not have known she was going to be born then. She survived the ordeal, and quickly grew healthier. Her parents believed it to be a miracle for her to be alive, considering the circumstances of her birth.

Her parents never pressured her, and so she was thirteen years old before entering the academy. She graduated in two years and started training harder on her own. On a mission, her team was attacked by a member of the village, though fortunately the team leader defeated the traitor. She started becoming paranoid, and her parents could not understand why. She remained calm and focused, though, and her bloodline manifested on her sixteenth birthday.


Roleplaying Characters:
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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Training Points: N/A
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mm... both your physical and mental strength outweigh your weaknesses. If you were of higher rank this would be no concern, but genin must at least equal and preferably be of lower strengths. Otherwise I see no problems, although I am not quite sure how the Sabukenfu bloodline works.

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Tetsuga Setare
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
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Forum Credit: 5 FC

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought I balanced them well, since speed and agility kinda go hand-in-hand. Still, I see your point. I added a physical weakness.

Also, the recognizing genjutsu goes with teh attention to detail, which I specified. Still, to avoid argument, I added another mental weakness. I hope this is satisfactory. Smile

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Unfortunately those do both count as two as they are separate strengths (speed is the quickness of running and movement, etc. and agility is the ability to react and flexibility). And the other two really don't relate whatsoever...

Anyway, I hate to still badger but the dislike of authority counts as a social weakness, not mental and would be closer to the traits category. Something like, " Misses the bigger picture" , " Becomes frantic when losing" , " Has a great fear of ___", are all examples.

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Tetsuga Setare
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Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What the bloody Hell Frodo?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ballian Mizunaka
Zaraki kenpachi
Kawada Sun
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~Sannin~~~Chuunin
Village: Suna~~~Suna~~~Suna
Training Points: 240
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Forum Credit: 88

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What are you talking about Balli?

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope this is more to your satisfaction, Badger-san. lol

EDIT: Uhhh... fordo?

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know. Approved.

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Training Points: 185
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WTF?! Check the IP Syra
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Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Wahrheit Aria
Frederick
Mutou Kazuki
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage ~ Chuunin ~ S-rank Missing-nin ~ Jounin
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
Training Points: 35
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