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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 4:13 pm    Post subject: Jager (henjay, Kishi's Nin- Falcon) Reply with quote

Name: Jager
Age: 4
Gender: Male
Height: 1'8
Weight: 18 lb

Appearence: has mixtures of white black and brown feathers through out its body. the white maily makes up spots on the wings. the brown takes up most of the body. has a white chest and black legs. has 3 in long talons 1 cetemeter thick. has grey beak. black rings around green eyes. has a leaf shape on beak showing it being from the wind shire clan

Race: Falcon
Hair: app
Eyes: app
Body: falcon like
Ethnicity: Konhagakura

Level/Rank: Nin- falcon
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Bloodline:N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Talons, Wings, Beak
Element:N/A
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu

Strengths: Has high hearing and sight abilitys. Jager Has very good stamina (can fly for a long time). also has knowledge of weak points on the human body and attacks there when open.

Weaknesses: Not very involved in the battle, and also cant take very much damage. lacks physical strength. has a weaker than normal sense of smell putting it equal with a humans.

Fighting style: jager waits upon a branch or goes high into the sky watching the battle. when there is a opening the bird will dive down and try to injure or possibly kill the opponet below. this is done by falling and rolling to increase speed to 200 MPH then it rolls once more to postion its self right to slam into the opponet with out harming its self. It can also fly up real close and start beating the opponet with its wings, beak, and claws.



Background: One of the flacons breed with in the windshire clan for the purpose of supporting a shinobi. Unlike the other's this one doesnt pocess chakra and is unable to use the clans falcon feather shuriken no jutsu for some reason. He was giving to Kishi at birth, and was trainined along side him. He has no true bond or ability to verbally communicate with Kishi either. No one is sure why but he appears to be a through back in the breed.



ATLEAST have 2 paragraphs here. (remeber a paragraph is ATLEAST three sentences.)

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 4:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

1. Jager Has very good stamina, and also cant take very much damage

2. also has knowledge of weak points on the human body and attacks there when open, Not very involved in the battle,

1 and 2, both points in there contradict each other...
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 8:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

1. stamina is the ability to run or in his case fly for long periods of time, what your thinking of is endurance

2. He only attacks when those are open other wise he stays clear the hell away, like if some how the back of th eneck is exsposed for a period of time or the ribs or something to that extint.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about more details on him as being a falcon, since most of us don't know exactly how one would fight and such.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i added how it fights syra.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One last thing: Sight and Hearing are two strengths, so maybe say his sense of smell in non-existant or something, or really poor.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dude its a bird techniquly that should be developed as well. Just cause it has those doesnt mean it will have any major effect on battle since it can only attack once then it has to wait a while before another opening if any are there.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Still, they're really good senses out of combat as well.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

there i made it weaker than the average bird lol
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fair enough.

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