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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:03 am    Post subject: Takashi, Ritsuzen Reply with quote

Name: Takashi, Ritsuzen
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height: 5’ 2”
Weight: 115

Appearence:

Race:Native
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Body: slim
Ethnicity: Land of Sound

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Otogakure
Bloodline: none
Main/Favored Weapon: Tekagi
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu/Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Tekagi, Wakizashi, 50' Wire, 5 Kunai and 10 Senbon.

Strengths: He is a natural a moving around in silence and spying for his age.
His highly skilled in Genjutsu, Taijutsu and close range combat.
He is also very good at designing and setting traps.

Weaknesses: His not good in dragged out battles.
His Ninjutsu isn’t as good as must most ninjas.
He is weak against long range type ninjas
He trust women and can be fooled by them easly.
He can't handle a hot environment like the desert.

Jutsus:
Bunshin no Jutsu
Henge no Jutsu
Kawarimi no Jutsu

Jutsus that wants to learn:
Kirigakure no Jutsu
Genjutsu Kai
Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu
Tsutenkyaku
Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu

Missions Completed:
D-Rank: 0
C-Rank: 0
B-Rank: 0
A-Rank: 0
S-Rank: 0

Background: Ritsuzen past has not much to it. His father, Igou Takashi was a ninja in the Otogakure ANBU as a field interrogator. After a fail mission that went bad his fathers leg was injured to the point that he needed a walking stick and could never be a ninja again. Ritsuzen’s mother, Rei Takashi wasn’t a ninja at all but a shop owner of one of the villages many weapons shops. She wasn’t a ninja but she was very good at handling the weapons and could hold her own if she was attacked.

Ritsuzen’s father knew that Ritsuzen would become a ninja and wasn’t going to get emotionally attach to him and never show him a fathers love. He did this not because he doesn’t care for his son but because the village doesn’t approve of their ninjas showing emotions and it was for his sons own good. He did see this as a chance to pass down his skill of genjutsu and other skills to his son to get him better prepared for the hard life to come. His mother on the other hand was very attach to her son and loved spending time with him and show him how to use a great deal of weapons and how to set up the traps her shop sold. His life was as normal as it could get in a village like that and he didn’t mind it one bit.

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Ritsuzen looked up at the man that called him by name. He stared at Ban for a second trying to remember if he knew this man or not. "I'm sorry but I don't recall knowing anyone like you." Ritsuzen said calmly. Ritsuzen took another look at the village and back at Ban. "If you don't mind could you tell me what has happen to this Village lately? Because it looks like there are hardly any ninjas around. See I have been gone for a very long time traveling." Ritsuzen said rubbing the back of his head.

Ritsuzen had more questions for this man but he didn't want to be rude and ask too many questions at one time. After a half a second Ritsuzen notice that the mans face did look like he seen it before but something wasn't right. "This man seems like I have seen him before but something is out of place. He also looks strong so he maybe a Jounin. Haha, I beat I’m as weak as a green Genin and would lose in one move against someone like this. Maybe I'll ask him to train with me once I get a handle on things going on." Ritsuzen thought to himself thinking things over about the guy infornt of him.


(I'm not sure if I did everything right. So just let me know what I have to fix.)


Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Otogakure
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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Last edited by Ritsuzen on Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:22 am; edited 2 times in total
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is very good. We're getting good RPers lately (no offense to the ones already here, lol). I see only a couple of things.

Grouping 3 strengths into 1 sentence does not make them one strength. You need one mental and one physical weakness to balance out the strengths, as I'm counting the first and last strength as mental (I'm being generous there).

Also, put the amount of wire you have. It's too easy to godmod without a set amount.
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Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin
Village: None ~ Konoha
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mm, another tekagi user. I'm getting more competition. Anyway, Kirigakure is closed. The only two open are Otogakure and Kohonagakure.

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Syra Ozanaru
Tetsuga Setare
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I fix it. If there is anything else let me know and I'll fix it as soon as I can.

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Village: Otogakure
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Everything else seems in order. Just need to wait for moderator approval.

Roleplaying Characters:
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Tetsuga Setare
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RPG Stats:
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Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good catch on that village thing Syra.

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