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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 4:45 pm    Post subject: Sana Takeda Reply with quote

Name: Sana Takeda
Age: 15
Gender: female
Height: 5.3
Weight: 92

Appearance: Small, blue haired and golden eyes Sana attracts attention not always to her advantage especially because of her profession. Her hair is long and usually tied at the end with a red bow. She’s has a kind face witch makes her approachable accept when she’s in a rage. Her frame is small and slender witch often gives her the appearance of being frail witch is an epic mistake to make.



Race: Asain
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Golden
Body: Small…. Slenderish
Ethnicity: no clue!

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Leaf
Bloodline: Dominanto Kaze
Main/Favored Weapon: Two hand fans (Nothing special just stuff you can get in a shop.)
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Main: Ninjutsu Second: Taijutsu
Starting Inventory:

Kuni x4
Surken x5
Tanto x 1
Hand fan x 2
Wire x 4 feet

Strengths: Quick on her feet her mental process is quick and logical she seldom losses her cool. She never gets draw in too far in that she cant get out of a fight when she had to she understands her own strength and weaknesses and understand her limit. Also Sana doesn’t like to take un necessary risks she is clear minded and open to new ideas. Though she is not strong she is quick fast to get out of the way and faster to run if the occasion should arise.

Weaknesses: Sana is far to gentle and in a relationship she is far to giving of herself to the point where its no longer healthy she would give her own life for a friends if given the choice she blindly fallows someone she cares about to her death if necessary. She is not physically strong because of her small frame she also lacks stamina unable to stay in fights for two long. She has a strong fear of the dark still she was left tramatized by her parents murder.

Jutsus:

Basics:
Transformation
Replacement
Clone


Others:
1) Biransei no Jutsu [Poison Gas Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This ninjutsu technique creates a cloud of poisonous gas that erupts from the user's mouth in a stream. The cloud clears a distance between the user and their enemy, as not to capture the user themselves within it's area of effect.

2) Daikamaitachi no Jutsu [Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: Wind Creating Weapon
A Jutsu that, using a giant fan, creates huge gusts of wind mixed with chakra capable of cutting the target apart. This whirlwind is powerful enough to repel and destroy multiple types of throwing weapons and can even reflect sound waves right back at their original source. (for fan)



Jutsus that wants to be tought:
Tree Climing and water walking

Background:
Sana was originally born in Country of Wind. Her father was a drunken gambler who got his family in trouble. Soon dept collectors where lining up at the door demanding repayment, as a result they where forced to leave their home and soon found themselves in Fire Country, Because of their lack of money they became peddlers and begged for food and what little money they could get their hands on, but soon a bit of fortune hit them and her father got a job. They lived that way for a while even though life was hard at least it was peaceful at the age of 7 however their hard earned life style came to an end as well, the dept collectors had found their way to them. Sana hid in the closet as she heard her parents being killed she covered her ears and closed her eyes trying to block out the screams as tears ran down her face.

After they left Sana left the closet to find her father dead and her mother dieing. She was given a letter from her mother and was told to find her uncle. She had no way to give her parents a proper burial so she said her final fare well and left. She opened the letter it was written to her uncle that if he was reading this now then she was dead. It contained a map leading to the hidden village of the Leaf, She fallowed it to the village but when she finally reached the village she was a half starved little scarecrow. A older women found her and took pity on the little girl who looked as if she was near her death and took her home and took care of her. When she was coherent Sana asked the old women about her uncle.

As it turned out the old women worked for her uncle. When she finally met her uncle and gave him the letter his first reaction was not compassion but disgust. He looked at the little girl and sneered and asked her if she was a no talent like her mother was. Sana only tilted her head not understanding what he meant. He sent her to live in the servants quarters and work with the old women who had found her. They soon became good friends and their relationship slowly evolved to one of that of grandmother and granddaughter, But when she reach the age of ten her talent awakened at first it was only small things she could make a paper airplane and keep it floating for hours eventually she caught the attention of her uncle. He no longer treated her like a servant instead she was given a room and the old women was made sent to be her maid.

She was sent to the academy and graduated second in her class with in 2 years. She continued to live with her uncle not having any where else to go even though she was trying to find a way out of this family she hated her uncle with all her might but she had no choice. At the age of 13 her uncle took her out for private training teaching her about her bloodline about its history and about how to control it he was brutal and cruel pushing her to her limit every time sometimes leaving her on the ground bleeding, But because of his efforts she grew stronger but through all her hardships she never let him win instead she worked hard to meet his expectation s or exceed them. Soon she was able to use her bloodline freely though not all the skills that it could be applied to.

Sample Post:

The small girl stood in the snow as flakes fell on her jacket she breathed out and watched as her steamy breath drifted away her bright eyes light up with joy. She grinned a little foolishly to be sure, but her eyes showed her light heartiness as well as a deep intelligence. She scooped up a hand full of snow and slowly made it into a ball around the size of one of her small fists and with out a seconds hesitation she hurled it at an older man. Giggling uncontrollably she dived behind a tree as the older man pretended to look around as if he had no idea what had happened. “Who did that!” he called “If I find you your gona be in big trouble!” he looked angry but his tone was playful. The little girl continued to laugh but then as the man got closer she got off and took off running, laughing hard as she did so.

Then a older women appeared before the young girl as well. “Mommy Mommy!” the little girl called out for her mother grinning happily. She reached the older women and hid behind her back as the man came to a stop in front of them laughing. “Hand her over!” he said jokingly making an angry face. The little girl shrieked with delight as he tried to grab her , she ducked and moved to the other side opposite her father. The women picked the girl up and laughed as she said “Was daddy being mean to you Sana?” she said and hit the man softly with her small bag. Sana’s mother gave her a tight hug ,and then everything came to an end. The vivid pictures faded to nothing more then the dark night as Sana opened her golden eyes she felt tears running down her cheeks as she curled up under her blankets trying to stop her tears from falling.

((OOC: I know it sucks please tell me anything i need to fix))

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1. You cannot be in the Cloud Village. I also believe you must be in Konoha for Dominant Wind Clan, but I'm not sure about that.

2. You should have one physical weakness per physical strength. Same with mental and social.

3. I am not sure which jutsus you start with now that you start as genin, but i'm pretty sure it's just Transformation, Clone, and Replacement (Body Switch).

4. Other than those 3 things your profile looks good.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

your a genin you have to be taught the basic's theres no cloud and yess you have to join konoha to get dominte kaze.

you start with 5 jutsus three of which are the ones he named and the other two are ones that are no higher than C ranked.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think I'm done? @.@ changed the village changed the jutsu and i think i evened out the Strenght and weaknesses
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is Naruto. There is no China. There is no Japan.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol opse i guess that was a duh but i got it now Sorry @.@ anything else >.>?
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol they want you to put the village you were born in for Ethnicity

The reason for this is not all ninja are sided with the country they were born in.

Jeez guys if your gona complain about something tell her how to fix it...
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just put Tree Climbing and Water Walking at least under ones you want to learn and you're good to go.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

got it lol
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright.

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