Ayane Hyouton

hans8chan · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:45 am Post subject: Ayane Hyouton

Name: Ayane Hyouton
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6
Weight: 105lb

Appearance: Like most of her clan, her skin is eerily pale. She is quite tall, good figure, and athletic. Her hair is jet-black and reaches to her waist. But it is kept in a ponytail. She also has ruby lips and sparkling blue eyes. She wears thin eye-liner as well. But her voice is soft like summer rain. She wears a short sleeveless black shirt that exposes her stomach. But she wears her head protector as a belt so her stomach is only partially exposed. Her skirt is also short and black. She wears leather boots that reaches her knees. Her gloves are also long that reaches her elbows. The fingers are cut open so that you can see her fingers. Her nails are sharp and painted blood-red.

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Rank: E-rank
Village: Kirigakure

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Bloodline: Hyouton
Main/Favored Weapon: Senbom
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Primary: Ninjutsu Secondary: Genjutsu
Starting Inventory: 30x Senbom 10x Kunai 20x Shuriken

Personality: Ayane doesn't talk much to people but she is very charismatic. She doesn;t normally just butt in, in a conversation like some people. She also like getting things done, making a good ninja, because she wishes to fulfill her duties in any mission to the best of of her abilities. She is also VERY modest....so modest in comes to a point were it can get annoying...But she has a great sense of friendship, when you make her a friend you'll never lose her.

Jutsus: Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be set up a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell. This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Suiton: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: The water clone technique is a simple Ninjutsu that creates a replication of the user with a physical body. Because it isn't purely illusionary, it can attack and use ninja techniques, just like the Shinobi themselves, but it still disperses into a puddle of water when it takes a hit. The clones created by this technique only possess one tenth of the user's physical ability and chakra level and they are unable to go far from the user or utilize ninja techniques of a rank higher than C, which limits them a lot, but a smart Shinobi can make a lot of use out of them. Any special weapons the user may have had on them when using this jutsu will be copied partially, losing any special qualities the original has and only having the same power as a common weapon of that type.

Bloodline jutsus: Name: Blizzard Creation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D/C/B/A/S
Requirements: Hyoton Bloodline
Description: A crucial jutsu for the Hyoton Clan; it allows the use to blow out snow by forming water chakra in their throat. This is used for setting up future Jutsu's when there is no source of Ice in the area. The amount created depends on the user.
E Rank: Enough for 3 Jutsu's
D Rank: Enough for 5 Jutsu's
C Rank: Enough for 7 Jutsu's
B Rank: Enough for 9 Jutsu's
A Rank: Enough for 11 Jutsu's
S Rank: Enough for 13 Jutsu's
SS Rank: Enough for 15 Jutsu's

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:

Even before her academy years Ayane already showed proficiency in her ninja skills. Her parents, both powerful ninjas, were very happy to see their daughter showed signs that she will follow their footsteps. But both of them were very cautious people. Barely made contact with other children. And 0 contact at all to people outside their clan. Unfortunately they both died in an S class mission

After her parents died Ayane lived with her grandmother an ex-ninja. She did not like how their clan are so secretive among the people outside their clan. So she taught Ayane just the opposite of what her parents taught her. She convinced Ayane that the downfall of the Hyouton clan was their secrecy among each other. Even among their own clan.

So, with the teaching of her grandmother Ayane became a little more sociable. Though she can't completely change and talk to all she sees. But she a little bit more sociable than most Hyouton clan members. And because of her some other children also became a tid bit more sociable. She said that Ayane might see the day when the Hyouton clan will make contact with other people.

In her academy years, her teachers could see that she has great potential within her. She passed every test they through at her with flying colors. She became powerful figure among her peers as well. Her skill and looks can give anyone the chills. The teachers even predicted she could become the leader of her clan. But Ayane just smiles her winning smile and said that she does not wish to become the leader... like we buy that.....

When Ayane graduated and became a true ninja she went back to the field where her parents dies. She looked up at the orange sky, touched her protector...and went back to her faint memories of her parents...

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Pikminavenger · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:54 am Post subject:

Ok first of all not bad overall, just a few tiny things to take care of.......

1. She seems a bit too skinny almost like a toothpick O_O idk just seems to be off a bit to me with that height.

2. More personality would be nice just overall, being as it is just 2 sentences right now, don't worry this can change later, and is frankly expected to.

3. Full jutsu descriptions are nice to have on the basic's but not needed, just would be a plus.

4. You get a free C-Ranked Water jutsu because you are joining Kiri

other than those good job ^_^
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hans8chan · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:32 am Post subject:

ok, sory didn't really know the weight=height thing so..

anyhow, so how do fix my application thing, do i just do it in the quick reply thing, or is their a more complex operation that i have to do to fix it....

or is their just a VERY simple thing that i have to do that...as usual.... i over-see.....and i over-see A LOT of SIMPLE thing XD

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:29 pm Post subject:

There's an edit button at the top of your post.
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

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hans8chan · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:58 pm Post subject:

O lol.... lyk i said.... i oversee stuff XD

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Velidina_Shiatamme · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:59 pm Post subject:

Please put the full jutsu down for the Bloodline jutsu...

And Syani has a sister... interesting...
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hans8chan · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:17 pm Post subject:

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:47 pm Post subject:

No, no clan jutsu for your bonus jutsu.
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Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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hans8chan · Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:55 pm Post subject:

okidoki my bad...

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hans8chan · Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 3:49 am Post subject:

soo..... is it ok now??

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