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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yasuo can I point out that even a distance of 2 metres is far more then enough to nullify any magnetic object thrown at you.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

True, but that's pretty much where it's capabilities cease.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is how far my attacks work.  yes magnetic powers are mighty, but since i was limited on what i could do, i wasn't allowed a magneto like character Sad

So i can't pull someones weapon away when 1200 meters away.  Perhaps an SA can be made where you can feel someone with a metal weapon has entered or an SA to feel when someone enters your area. but really...in a village that would be worthless.   But if I can't see you, it wont effect you.

1200 meters away with only a small amount of iron sand wont destroy cities.  Well, if they don't respond in 7 days perhaps.  Unless you think a jug the size of 2 large humans is enough to do it quicker?

SS sand can't be moved due to the shear size of it.

Garra was able to move his entire cities worth of sand to protect his village.  That should be about 2400 meters long. in diameter.  He just left it under the city for such a case.  He couldn't drag it along with him.  Same idea.  Unless you want to carry a cloud of iron sand around with you, put i think that might stick out like a little.

Based on above, this would seem more then fair.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gaara is not only a Canon Character (which always breaks the rules) but he also had the power of a demon backing him up, something that is impossible for you to get....

Ill put this in terms that you will understand. Change the range or it is autodenied
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

after an extremely short conversation, a middle was agreed upon.

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Sucal surly has something stuck up the ass.



I did talk to someone who had some diplomatic knowledge, and a set amount was agreed upon  Razz

I also have 4 members that want to join up.

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I can tell you where that AutoDeny can be stuffed though it might be to late.

1. Never said I had a Demon, stop making shit up.
2. Pretty sure Gaara wasn't using his tailed demon powers.
3. The sand move is in the allowed ninjutsu section, and is described exactly like he used it.  So it is possible.

Oh if you couldn't tell, people who choose to use their powers as if all mighty, yet give no good reasons, choose not to listen or be reasonable, should be beaten to death.


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mkay, now that the distance is ironed out I'm going to wait another day or two to see if anything else comes up that I may have missed due to it being after work.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Take your time, Requires D rank ninja anyways. Don;'t think any appliers are able to.

Though,  If you can look at my character pretty please
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meh, looks fine, though I'm still again it.  Objections?
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GWM Gaara's sand control was given to him by the demon, the fact that he was using it at all, means that he was using the tailed demon powers. Also 1200 range means you could have completely disarmed large chunks of a Ninja Village... I'm pretty sure that is enough of a reason to Autodeny.

I still have the a problem with the fact that they get a 30 point SA for free (Both Levels of Sand manip.) Yes I know that they don't get all the powers and that they don't have as much Iron Sand as Normal Sand, but they still get 30 kinjutsu points worth of effort, without it taking up any slots or requiring any training.

There is also the fact that The Bloodline is based around Magnatism, but can affect any metal weapons, even if the weapon itself doesn't include anything that is magnetic.

Finally

Endless Manipulation.. allowing someone to use 10 jutsus at once, Please tell me I'm not the only one who thinks this is a bad idea, especailly when so much trouble was raised against the possiblity of people using one handed seals to use 2 jutsu at once.

Also I thought that Wings which allowed unlimited flight for people were illegal, such as the ones presented by Iron Sand Daemonic Wings

Yes I know it seems like I am rather Biased against this Bloodline, but it is extremely easy to abuse it, making practically all posting skill worthless. Right now, all you need to do to win, is use the wings to fly out of your opponents reach, break any weapon thrown or shot at you, and use Endless Manipulation to spam Desert Funeral and Desert Imperial Funeral
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Endliess Manipulation: Forming an object takes all the attention.  It is moving them afterward that is the focus of that jutsu.  And you can always call godmod on them if they are controlling 10 different items to fight 5 different people over a huge area and are doing it fantastically.  Just like you can do that for any person fighting someone(s).  Like this said, it is best shown when using large objects.  1 jutsu = a large object.  They can't form 10 jutsu, launch, then 10 more launch.  That is impossible, for anyone to do.

Sand: Your 30 point SA for free isn't for free.  First they have to be equal to the rank to control within a certain distance.  Then they have to do a mission(s) to get enough sand to do the jutsu.  And the Missions are made by me and a Mod.  Plenty of requirements are placed.

All elements but a very very few can be affected by Magnetism.  And I was required to remove Chakra infused weapons cause they are "Special".  ????  This still seems wrong to me when other bloodlines I have seen get a special immunity to actual jutsu.

Flying: Their is a sand jutsu that lets you fly.  Also this move was Canon.

Spam desert Funeral.  No different then a sand user.  Though, Iron fillings are much easier to see then sand.  Sand users can use several jutsu as well, though they aren't limited at all.



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