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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:43 am    Post subject: Edoken-su. Reply with quote

Bloodline Name: The flying Dove's style
Clan Name: Edoken-su
Leader: Grand master Edoken Blasken (NPC)
Village: They are dispersed amongst all the villages

Clan Description: A Japanese clan of swords-masters that was formed in the 1800's. The clan was formed by a man who's name has been forgotten in the clan and now simply called "The Original."; he was a wandering swordsman more a mercenary than anything noted for several political assassinations. He was noted as one of the best Battōjutsu users in the world, however later on he simply wanted a home. He married a woman her name also forgotten simply referred to as "Head of the clan." she was also a sword user. Notably the only person to defeat the original in battle. They both opened a dojo later on accepting anyone willing to join, they taught The flying blade style of Battōjutsu.

They later had children that also had amazing skill in the art of sword fighting. The three's names were Hidekio, Kyo, and Amaya. Each branched out to different countries eventually Amaya founded a dojo in Kumogakure married  afterward she had several children. They spread to each village opening their own dojo within each major village.

The members have fought in every major war since their coming to the ninja villages, they are known as honorable people all in all it's a rarity to see a missing ninja in this clan. Although there have been several bad eggs that are notable in the clan one in particular "Ai", who helped start a war within the clan. This lead to the death of near every member of this clan which is why their are so few many; due to this theirs a rule that no member in the clan may name their child Ai.  


Iaijutsu starts in the clan: After the clan had spread across the lands of the ninja country a young man named Heshitosu Groseken, had decided to further the clan's techniques past just kenjutsu. He was a pacifist in nature deciding never to cut anyone down instead using Iaijutsu to protect himself if one ever attacked him. He used the extreme speed of the clan to draw his sword just barely to block any strikes the enemy had decided to strike with. Much later  a young man that used both Battōjutsu and Iaijutsu named "Edoken Blasken", (who much later became the grand master of the clan) figured out a way to use Iaijutsu offensively combining the two styles, once someone attack him he would block with the blade strike then sheath the blade in a lightning speed he would repeatedly do this until his enemy was dead or unconscious.

Clan Traits/Characteristics: They are usually extremely varied because they let anyone who wants join. However the pure blood members are usually short skinny and have long fire colored red hair, and deem a tattoo on their left arm of their Katana indicating that they are a pure-blood member of this clan. The tattoo stretches from the shoulder to the tip of their index finger and can be found on the left arm for girls the right for boys.  As well of course of having Japanese features.

Clan Personality: It varies for all non pure blood members.  The pure blood members are often cold and distance to most at first, later on however they often become quite bubbly and happy. They often are very passionate about their ideals and are willing to debate any contradictions someone they see as a friend has. However not with strangers or acquaintances, whom they will more than likely just ignore.

Bloodline Description: The members of this clan are amazingly good at the art of sword fighting, most are amazingly agile and fast as well although having a short and somewhat skinny appearance which could be considered a set back for this. They most in Battōjutsu out of all the sword fighting styles, their speed is often increased as well as damage done from attacks landed, however this goes for all other styles.

Battōjutsu is the most practiced making it easier to teach and excel at than the other styles within the clan.

Iaijutsu Some users use the grand masters style of Battōjutsu and Iaijutsu which involves blocking with a semi sheathed blade, pulling the blade out fully attacking then resheathing as fast as possible. This is more of an defensive technique  to the Battōjutsu / other style offensive techniques.

Bloodline Limits: Depending on if the user joined or is a pure blood.



Name:Pure Blood domination:
Requirements: Edoken-su pure blood
Description:

E rank: 5% Speed and agility boost Not allowed element

D rank: 10% speed and agility boost Element still not allowed

C: 20% Speed and agility boost/ 30% boost in all weapon techniques involving the sword 40% if Battōjutsu or Iaijutsu is their techniques. No element involved

B: 35% speed and agility boost/ 40% boost in all weapon jutsu 60% if it is using Battōjutsu or Iaijutsu. Element gained however you may not use any element required jutsu over C rank.

A: 40% speed and agility boost/ 50% weapon techniques 65 if Battōjutsu or Iaijutsu. Elemental jutsu B=Rank

S: 60% Speed and agility boost/ 65% weapon technique boost 85 if Battōjutsu or Iaijutsu. Elemental jutsu A rank

Name:Enlightened swordsman
Requirements: Edoken-su non pure blood
Description:

E: 3% boost speed and agility

D: 7% speed and agility boost

C: 13% speed and agility boost/ 15% weapon techniques boost

B: 25% speed and agility boost/ 25% weapon techniques boost

A: 40% Weapon technique boost

S: 65% weapon technique boost.


Clan Jutsus:

Name: Dove's wings
Type: Kenjutsu/taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Member of Edoken-su
Description: The member has honed their sword skill to the point that they can literally swing the blade with enough strength to create a weak blast of wind that will knock their opponent over, the blast is usually too weak to harm them however if they focus extremely theirs  a small chance of minor injury.  



Name: Dove's beak
Type: Kenjutsu/ taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Edoken-su member
Description: The user uses their increase of speed due to the clans vigorous training to stab their enemy several hundred times. The stabs do only extremely minor and with focus they can be dodged. The only way this jutsu can inflict major damage is if the user gets the majority of the strikes hit.  



Name: Dove's heart-beat
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S kinjutsu
Requirements: Edoken-su member
Description: The user increases their chakra flow and heart-beat to extreme speeds acting as an adrenaline burst throughout the body. The burst in turns gives them a 75% speed boost. The jutsu may only be maintained for three post, afterward the heart explodes leading to death.



Name: Sharpening jutsu
Type: ninjutsu/kenjutsu
Rank: D/C/B/A
Requirements: Edoken Su member
Description: The user sends their chakra to their katana coating it and sharpening it making it easier to cut their enemies. It only works for a short time and may only be used once per thread, the jutsu often afterward breaks the blade of any blade not made by a member of the clan. D=2 posts C=4 posts B=6 posts A=8 posts.



Name: The dove's preparation
Type: Ninjutsu/ kinjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Edoken-su pure blood member.
Description: The user sits in meditation clearing all thoughts readying him/herself for the Dove's last breathes jutsu. They no longer have any regrets no thoughts if they do the jutsu will not work. Doing this centers the chakra and is now able to be pushed out to the blade.


Name: Sword disintegration
Type: Kenjutsu/ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Edoken-su member
Description: The user focuses all of their chakra into the blade eventually the blade with literally explode from the pressure of the chakra. It will go into hundreds of shards  that are chakra infused and easily cut skin causing major injury if not removed immediately.


Name: The dove's internal sorrow
Type: Kenjutsu/ninjutsu/taijutsu
Rank: S kinjutsu
Requirements: Edoken-su pure blood member & the dove's recuperation.
Description: The user has gone through the preparation of meditation at one with the blade, they are now centered and calmed making near no mistakes. They stab their katana into the ground then channeling their chakra into the sword causing an earthquake within 750 feet of the user.



Name: The dove's enlightened eyes
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Must be taught by an Edoken-su member.
Description: The user of this jutsu has a mastery of the sword and more than likely will die by the sword; it essentially increases aggression for five posts it also allows the user to continue to fight through near fatal wounds. However this does not mean it fixes the wound it simply makes them as if they were not there, the user will more than likely die if in these conditions however.

Number of Members Allowed: Any may join. Their are a certain number of pure blood members however [10 Pure blood members]






Notes: Each non pure blood member gains a Katana which has a small x carved into the base indicating that it was made by this clan and is used specifically for this clan the katana varies from user to user generally.

Pure blood members gain a Katana as well theirs however is bestowed at birth and is named by the parents directly after the naming of the child, this is an old tradition that still flourishes with the clan. The differences in this blade is that it has the complete name of the fighting style along the blade along with the X, and typically the blades are of much better quality than normal katana.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This done? If so, I'll start commenting on it.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

cool clan
cool idea
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I plan on adding many more jutsu, but criticism is welcome.

Edit: Also thanks.  Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What exactly is a weapon technique boost? BTW, clean up the bloodline limit. It's messy. I'll look at the jutsu later.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Will do might take a while, doubt it will get done today.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Egh, scrap this.


I decided it to be a bad idea.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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