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 Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:36 am Post subject: the cave of the undead beasts (rank training) |
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(ooc. rank training starts now Key: Fou, Hidari, Yankunote:every name presented on this list are npc's exclusive to this thread except Fou of course (my character) )
It was a silent and sad day in the shinobi village Kumogakure , a member of the Raikage's council fell ill two months before this day and passed three days before this day. Everyone in Kumogakure attended the funeral , usually at funerals everyone would wear black and it would rain, but this day was even more sad and the people of Kumo knew this man well, he would always wear white attire , white ties, white shirts, white pants, etc. Instead , everyone wore white clothing in honor of this great and powerful man. Fou also attended this funeral, with her white lilies, and her white dress on, she also wore a white tiara and white earrings in honor of this man, the saddening expression on her face , could make anyone who looked at her drown in extreme sorrow. Ironically, Fou did not know this person , but this person helped Fou live alone in Kumo to begin with. Fou's hair flowed in symphony with the white petals scattering through the deep blue sky. This man made the earth sad , along with the many villagers of Kumo , one of the many tragedy's that has impacted this village.
Fou looked around, she sees many people old and young, as she looked around at the citizens in white a woman approached the man's grave, she was a pale skinned woman with beautiful, curly hair, she wore a white turban with a clear sheet covering her face, she was very tall in comparison to Fou , and she wore a black dress with sparkles top to bottom. The woman planted a white flower on the man's grave. She then grasped her sight on Fou and asked an obvious question to Fou who was apparently wearing a shinobi headband on her forehead.are you by any chance a shinobi?, Fou then responded to the lady saddened by everyone's expressions um...yes...yes I am. The woman smiled and introduced herself Hidari, Hosutsuki she then took out her hand in a polite way expecting a handshake. Fou looks curiously at the woman's soft and pale hands and wondered why she pulled her hand out Um what are you doing?Hidari looks at Fou and responds , uhh .. its a common gesture for a formal greeting , do you know what that is? Fou responds in rude way Yes I do, but I didn't want to shake your hand, by the way my name is Souketsu Fou. Fou then walk's away from the woman in dismay as she yells her to wait a minute. Hidari told Fou about how her father died from an illness, and explained that it was hereditary , she also told Fou the antidote was located in a cave about 4 miles away from the village she then asked Fou to bring the antidote to her and warned her the cave was extremely dangerous.
Fou did not fully know who this woman was or her mysterious father , but she accepted her request, as she was ready to head towards the cavern she asked the woman a question What is the name of this man?As Fou points at the dead man's grave. Tears start to fall from the woman's eyes as she responds .........Yanku,Hosutsuki. As Fou glared at the woman she felt sympathy for the woman's lost , because she too lost her parents. Fou headed to her house to change into her shinobi clothes as the funeral ended, she wore small blue shorts, her headband, her white earrings, her black shirt, and her black, shinobi sandals. She equipped her tool's pouch to her right hip, her stuffed lion Jiji tied to her back, and her wakizashi tied and sheathed to her left hip. Fou ran out of the house and approached the mysterious dungeon said to have the antidote to the late Yanku's disease. Fou gazed at the dungeon, and was shocked to see what it looked like, the cave was charcoal black and was like a small passage in a mountain range, As she glared inside she noticed it was pitch black, so she illuminated a fallen tree branched and entered the mysterious dark cave. Suddenly,Fou heard the footsteps of someone other than her inside the cave, she then became frighten a little and walked very quietly through the cave , each step she took was like running through a steep hill, the cave was rigid and uncomfortable, as her every step resembled walking through pebbles. Fou then feels breath approach her face, and was timid for a half a second, she then pointed her torch to the source of the breath. ...it ...was...a..rocky like pipe sending out air to the cave, Fou looked curiously and wondered why there was an air pipe in a dungeon. She then looks up and points her torch in the air to see five small creatures above her head. The creatures were slimy, filthy , amphibian like creatures, who sticked to the cave walls. When the light from the fire exposed, the abnormal beings ...eyes opened, their pupil's and iris were deep red shining on Fou's body.
The slimy creatures, retaliated by throwing small sphere shaped weapons that explode on contact with skin, As Fou elegantly avoided the weapons thrown at her, she reaches in her tool pouch and throws two shuriken at the ceiling. These shuriken simultaneously struck two of these creatures and the two wounded creatures descended from the walls. Green blood splattered from the two corpses, Fou quickly reaches for the small sphere shaped weapons with gloves on she acquires these weapons and throws them at the other creatures residing on the ceiling while avoiding their weapons which were thrown at her. Before Fou was about to kill the last creature she suddenly heard and felt an explosion of fire fry her arm. Five of the weapons came in contact with her arm. Fou's arm was burned so out of anger and frustration Fou reached for a kunai and ran towards the ceiling and slashed the last creature with her kunai green blood, splattering from the corpse and green blood on her kunai, Fou felt depressed and sad she had to kill the creatures who were defending their territory. Continuing through the rigid tunnel, Fou hears the same foot steps she heard earlier, Fou ignores them and proceeds through the cave , only to find a dead end, 40 paces north, as she advances backwards, she suddenly trips, she looks down to see a foot print the size of her, probably frightened, she thinks to herself Where am I? After getting on her feet she raises her torch and sees people all around her, the cave suddenly illuminates and shows about ten people in white robes with yin and yang symbol's above their foreheads, then a lion like beast with white fur appeared behind them.
The monster stared at Fou with vicious and murderous content in his eyes , he suddenly raised his giant white claw, like the foot print earlier the beast's claw was the size of Fou's entire body, Fou attempted to step away from the claw and was viciously scratched by it, The giant scar appeared on her body dripping blood. As Fou tried to close the wound the beast struck again, Fou was not going to be slashed by that enormous claw again , so she ascended into the air and threw a shuriken from her pouch at the beast, the beast avoided the shuriken with a sudden movement resembling a flash in the eyes of Fou. Fou shocked at the speed of the beast felt terrified at the beast staring at his red eyes and white mane, she knew she had to kill it by targeting those points, The beast charged towards Fou, Fou suddenly reached for a kunai and stabbed the beast with the weapon, the weapon had an explosive tag placed upon it and caught on fire, Fou quickly ran upon the ceiling drawing a shuriken from her pouch as she foreseen the explosion from the tag. Fou remembered she still had some of the amphibian's weapons and took all of them from her pouch readying herself for another attack. The smoke cleared to only see the monster completely unharmed by the explosion or the kunai formerly stabbed in his leg. Fou then noticed her kunai broke as she seen it laying on the ground chipped. Looking terrified at the beast miraculous ability to become immune to anything , she suddenly threw the sphere shaped weapons and appeared behind the white beast and threw two shuriken with chakra enhanced in them. Surprisingly, the beast was hit by the chakra enhanced shuriken, but Fou did not escape assault herself, as she was tackled and blown back by the beast into a wall. The beast quickly stabbed its claws into Fou's body, as Fou screamed with agony, she drew her wakizashi from her left hip and swiftly used chakra into her sword to cut the beast's left front leg completely off. As blood dripped from Fou's sword Fou retaliated and repeated the same action to the beast's right front leg, the monster screamed in pain and attempted to bite Fou's head off, the beast failed as Fou entered the beast's neck and beheaded him the blood flooding through the ground and splashed upon Fou's face . The beast fell to the ground and incinerated into ashes , right in front of Fou.
Fou stabbed her wakizashi into the ground and pushed herself to stand up. She looked up from her head at the people around her, a man then opened his mouth to exchange a few words.Who are you? and why did you kill our chimera and trespass through our settlement. Fou then sadly answered the man in the white robe I came here for someone who's family member died three days ago, I wanted to save her at least so i came here to find the antidote to the Calicious Disease, passed generation through generation of my friends family.The man then answers in a frightful way as he draws a knife behind his backUnfortunately, I do not know what that disease is ,I'm afraid i'm going to have to kill you ....you have seen to much. The man exposes his knife and attacks Fou, suddenly the other people follow the same action, blood dripping from Fou's wound , each person in a white robe stabs Fou's right arm, the agony and pain from Fou's arm felt for two minutes extremely painful, like breaking a tendon, or ripping a muscle, blood dripping from her , Fou uses her left hand and slashes her sword against every person who held a knife, Fou then ripped a piece of one of their clothes to wrap her entire right arm in bandages, Fou then attacked the strange people with chakra in her sword, striking with one hand she strikes and slashes, each and everyone in the entire cave. She then realizes as she is assaulting her victims their souls are coming out of their bodies, with the last slash from her bloody red wakizashi she falls to the ground tired as ever. Before passing out she hears foot steps passing through the horizon, and continuously stabs her sword in the ground to move her body in which she could not move her legs. Her blood stopped dripping as she struggled to move eventually finding a white light in the horizon. Fou advances to the white light ,and eventually passes through it seeing the clear blue sky, and the grass and tree around her, the meadowy Savannah she missed, she then closes her eyes with a white rose in the horizon, before shutting her eyes she picks the flowers and becomes unconscious under the guardianship of the beautiful Savannah. As she wakes up she sees a white ceiling and hears weeping, she then looks to see Hidari siting right next to her. Fou then talks to hidari in a sick tone then smiles please don't cry Hidari I'm fine Hidari looks at Fou and hugs her and then says to the ten year old girl Thank you...........my friend Fou Fou smiles then closes her eyes and rests in the Kumogakure hospital.
Roleplaying Characters:
Souketsu, Fou
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Rank B genin
Village: Kumogakure
Fame: 10
Reputation:
Training Points: 1030
Inventory: 1wire,5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 15 makibishi, 5 explosive tags, one wakizashi
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