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| Uchiha Katsuga wrote: | | Quote: | Name: Sennen-Ryu
Requirements: Taijutsu Major or Taijutsu Specialist, each level must be trained separately as a jutsu of your character's current rank (S-rank with twice the post amount for SS-rank characters) and in order. Additionally, this style requires a katana and to have genjutsu as a minor style.
* Level 1: Taijutsu Specialist: E-rank; Taijutsu Major: E-rank
* Level 2: Taijutsu Specialist: D-rank; Taijutsu Major: C-rank
* Level 3: Taijutsu Specialist: C-rank; Taijutsu Major: A-rank
* Level 4: Taijutsu Specialist: B-rank; Taijutsu Major: SS-rank
* Level 5: Taijutsu Specialist: A-rank
* Level 6: Taijutsu Specialist: S-rank
* Level 7: Taijutsu Specialist: SS-rank
Description: This Taijutsu style revolves around sword techniques from various mundane styles, combining battou styled assaults with standard streamline kenjutsu. However this style combines something unique when compared to other taijutsu styles; It combines the use of basic genjutsu to throw off opponents and disable one's ability to read the movements there in. This style's main starting stance is with the sword in the sheath with the legs spread and knees slightly bent.
* Level 1: Speed and Agility +5%
* Level 2: Speed and Agility +10%
* Level 3: Speed and Agility +15%
* Level 4: Speed and Agility +20%
* Level 5: Speed and Agility +25%
* Level 6: Speed and Agility +30%
* Level 7: Speed and Agility +40% |
Looks good to me.
| Quote: | Name: Bushi no Me
Type: Genjutsu - visual
Rank: D
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: This is a basic genjutsu that requires eye contact with an enemy. Once eye contact has been made, the target will be placed under a sight based illusion and will view the user of this technique in the same position they had when eye contact was first intiated; this allows the user to move without the opponent realizing that they have. Bushi no Me lasts only a moment after it is used before it disperses on its own. |
English translation of this would be nice. Looks good otherwise.
| Quote: | Name: Battou
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user draws their blade from its sheath and arcs it so that it will slash an opponent at a high speed. |
This is an actual Sword Style, so no need for it. And it's Battoujutsu (Sword-drawing Art)
Exactly, the style is called Battojutsu, the sword drawing art. This skill is just Sword drawing, and in order for this style to have a drawing technique above the mundane this taijutsu technique seems appropriate.
| Quote: | Name:Burst Break
Type:Genjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user stands at a ready stance with their blade drawn. The target will suddenly see 100 different strikes all being performed by the user at the same time. Only one of the strikes will be a real attack, but which one? |
B-Rank at least.
That is fine, I've already gone through and changed it.
| Quote: | Name:Genkiri
Type:Genjutsu - visual
Rank: S rank Kinjutsu
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user molds chakra around their katana. The moment that an enemy's eyes lock onto the weapon they will be trapped in an illusion. The target will see the user suddenly break through their defenses and slice off their legs. For as long as this jutsu is maintained the target will think that their legs have been cut off. The Target will not be able to feel their legs and will feel pain as if their legs had really been cut off. |
English translation please? S-Rank Kinjutsu. This is more along the lines of what Tsukiyomi can do.
A very drastic opinion, but I will do as you ask.
| Quote: | Name:Senkou
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: After utilizing Bushi no Me, the user will move so fast that they suddenly appear near the enemy and perform a battou strike. The speed of this attack gives the opponent little reaction time to avoid or block this attack. |
English translation please? S-Rank most likely.
This technique has been border line S rank anyways.
| Quote: | Name:Zanmoto
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The Target will see a giant chain shatter the sky and burrow into the ground. The chain will then begin to retract and seemingly pull up an alter with a katana stand on it. They will then see the user drop their current weapon and pick up this new katana. Cherry blossoms will then begin to fall as the user pulls the blade from its sheath. They drop the sheath and at that instant the user appears in front of the target and stab them through their chest. This hostile Genjutsu will drain a target's stamina as it puts a lot of stress on the target's heart. If the target does not have the stamina to withstand the jutsu they will die of a heart attack. |
English translation please? What kind of Genjutsu is it? S-Rank Kinjutsu.
I had this as an S rank kinjutsu, but some of the other members felt that it wasn't that powerful and could be lowered a level. |
Comments in red ^
Also adding a new technique:
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Name: Ryuusei kanadzuchi <Meteor Hammer>
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: This is a stronger version of Battou; the user slices so fast that they create a vacuum in the wake of their blade. It makes a loud crash sound due to the vacuum sucking up nearby things to fill up the void.
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Take out the Battou... ~_~ It's useless as a Jutsu.
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