Over the limit. [Rank Training/Complete]

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TriggerHappyTurtle

Slevin looked around a few older looking men were standing in front of the door to a large dojo he walked up to them and plainly said, "I'm here to meet the master here." both men dispersed immediately. Slevin pushed through the mahogany double doors walking into the dojo, the floors where made of a light wood it shone interestingly. Their was no light other than several candles students arranged by rank of first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, and tenth, "brothers" and "sisters" he laughed thinking he was going to have to fight at least half the people in the room. At this time an older man came through, he was Asian carrying a wooden cane with a bald wrinkly head and a long white beard he commented on Slevin's look saying, "Why so serious?" which his reply to was "Me serious, funny." they both smiled sharing a moment of silence. Finally after a few minutes saying, "What would you like young brother?" Slevin said "I'd like to learn." the man afterward looked around sighing saying, "Prove you are ready to learn, then." afterward signaling out several novices of this dojo.

Slevin looked at each two younger men around his age both around five foot nine and one lady around five foot six, he sighed not particularly in a fighting mood but non the less. He looked around to see if he had any particular advantages in this small building, not really. He put up both fists not allowed to use weapons (A rule which was implied before this bout) each of the students also took their stance, circling him. Slevin made the first move rushing the man which was now behind him by simply rushing backwards slightly to knock him over the lady however caught him before he could do this with a sweeping leg kick which, knocked Slevin to the ground. The master of this place looked down with no empathy Slevin thought to himself 'Don't rush counter!" this was somewhat hard for him being an extremely aggressive fighter. The man to his left tried to punch however countered with a grab of the arm then a judo stylized heel flip afterward landing him on the ground. The woman being the smartest of the three stayed back using Slevin's technique as well. The man from behind tried to land an axe handle style punch landing on Slevin's back. The both of them fell, he was going to have to be a bit more aggressive with him both down he drew and landed several elbows to the face of this young student after a few seconds the student passed out with two black-eyes and a broken nose. After this stopping for a half second the woman taking her chance rushing jumping then delivering a kick to his stomach. Slevin cringed in pain his breath gone he threw her off of his stomach with a flip, she landed on her back down for now however not out. He made his way up seeing the last male student recovered, he stood back with one hand down by his leg the other by his face. This was a boxing style, which not many shinobi knew of the user would strike quite a few times then going into a defensive position the repeating this.

Slevin looked at him puzzled at this, the man gave a quick jab catching Slevin's left shoulder then another on the right cheek. Slevin was thrown off by his odd style and by the time he realised what happened the man was in a defensive position. 'Screw it' He thought rushing the man pulling his left arm back then slamming through the young man's defense he flew back against the wall nearly hitting "Fourth sister.", he was out cold now only leaving the woman now, grand master smiling at this display of fighting he had already mad his decision but he continued to watch the fight. The woman had now gotten up and backed up not on steady feet. Slevin backed up bleeding and bruised now, readying for a final jutsu to end his initiation "Shunshin no justu.", he whispered under his breath placing his right hand in front of left after a few seconds he was behind her and with a final punch to the back of the head it was over. "Enough, Grand master!", an older woman said coming from what seemed to be the back of the school, "Grand master" looked at his feet then swung his left arm to indicate the Slevin passed. Slevin yelled out, "Thank you Mrs and may I ask who you are?" she nodded and said, "I am master Jing Tse." Slevin nodded spitting blood onto the wooden floor falling backwards after this display of fighting, something got to him.
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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:16 pm Post subject:

OOC: If you think it's a bit sloppy, this wasn't the original. Thus hate the auto log out >.>

Slevin awoke in a small room downstairs happy with his performance of earlier he kicked some novice bum. He had gotten up and walked out from the room to see first sister as soon as she saw him she said, "Masters want you upstairs." Slevin sighed and nodded at the thought of 'stairs' he looked around seeing a rather short flight which he took up. He was greeted by both masters congratulating him on beating the novices saying, "Your an official advanced novice, you may take on tenth brother tomorrow if you choose." Slevin nodded and said, "Yes, I'd like to get back to sleep however!" he laughed at this. After a few minutes and a bow he walked back downstairs to his own little room it looked brilliant right now. After undressing he fell asleep in his new bed. He was awakened by a bell the 'breakfast bell' he assumed he walked to the kitchen where, third sister and fourth brother (Both, were apparently a married couple." had made breakfast today, oatmeal and whole-corn.

After eating he managed to walk his way outside to see tenth brother a lrage tall man seven foot two and three hundred and twenty pounds. He was also bald and not very talkative to be quite frank about it Slevin challenged him with a point saying, "Get ready to fight big man!" which he was they both bowed and the fighting commenced. Tenth brother rushed and Slevin jumped the big man hit the wall with a 'thud' afterward rubbing his head snarling. Slevin laughed which apparently enticed him to do this again with the same results. After a few more minutes of this the big man pretty much ripped a piece of the wall out flinging it at Slevin which was kicked back and hit the man. The rock crumbled as it did tenth brother wobbled back and Slevin saw his chance. He rushed and jumped kick which knocked him back on his back then delivering the same amount of force and elbows he had to the novice the other day after a few secinds of this tenth brother was bleeding, and laughing.

Slevin was completely thrown off by this which gave tenth brother an opening, he took it and threw Slevin a good fifteen feet into the air. Slevin fell with a thump, immediately getting up and saying, "Shunshin no jutsu" getting into normal position and now out of site gathering himself readying for another punch. He rushed and tenth brother and gave him a massive round-house kick to the back of his head, which left blood on his heels. Tenth brother did not take kindly to this turning and giving Slevin a back-hand sending him flying into the dojo slamming through the door, which got the attention of both masters. Slevin rushed out with another jumping kick to the face, met by a punch to the stomach he was nearly out now about three more attacks to over the limit. Tenth brother held his now bloody face with no change in expression. Slevin coughed up blood once more rushing him and being knocked back again. Once again he rushed hopping before being hit this time. Giving a kick to the face knocking tenth brother back and onto his back once again, 'Finish it!!!" he thought running and jumping into the air making sure his knee was aimed at tenth brother. After landing this tenth brother cringed breath-less, grabbing Slevin by the head and slamming him into the ground which Slevin barely got up from looking at tenth brother knowing the last shot was lethal, 'It's over' Slevin thought now over the limit jumping again and repeating his attack ending this bout.

Slevin, stood up seeing both masters now standing in the door way somewhat impressed Slevin waved walking toward them passing out about half way from the door.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:16 pm Post subject:

OOC: +3; Total of 3/5
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:41 pm Post subject:

OOC: Excellent!

It had been a day since the beating he had received the beating from tenth brother, they had both recovered by now Slevin soar and aching once again. Grand master had came into his room to check in on him several times an honor most would not recieve but he was special, he had potential to convert. To kill Grand master had been scheming you see to take out second master, Slevin had no knowledge of this at the time however would know this soon enough. He wheezed walking out the door carrying the scars from battle that would fade soon enough. Ninth sister a short girl only age twelve a genjutsu specialist a follower of Grand master, she was told to kill him to save inconvenience, later. She had already equipped for battle a Bo staff and nothing else. Slevin scanned her over she seemed nice and innocent not ready for what he was going to have to face next. He coughed and bowed wobbling slightly and as soon as he did she rushed and gave him a side-swipe with the Bo then a smack to the back as soon as he was down. Slevin had gotten back up with minimal effort really she rushed again now with a plain offensive slash to the side which Slevin took over with a counter grabbing the staff and flipping it along with the small girl. She somehow landed on her feet with a smirk Slevin disarmed her and afterward broke the staff in half with his knee looking at her. She afterward drew a kunai throwing it a distraction to him which he did not fall for she stopped half way into the rush and retreated afterward she used a technique he knew very well she disappeared.

Slevin immediately called his own jutsu "Mist servant" he said under his breath. Several clones of him in all black clothing appeared around him one being hit with a kunai from above the dojo on the roof. Slevin hopped onto the roof seeing her again however as soon as he laid eyes onto her she rushed and kneed him off of the roof. With a loud thud he hit the ground his eyes closing in a puddle of blood. He had a dream in those moments of both of his parents his father saying, "Don't be a failure." his mother nodding her head. He awoke from this a large cut on his fore-head it was on. He was no longer fighting for a new place but for his life with new found agility jumping once more onto the roof she rushed once again. Slevin caught her by the arm and with a large slam she went through the roof into the dojo, he hopped down as well. She was on her back awake and alive, she pushed herself on with a loud grunt Slevin rushed and delivered a massive punch to her sending her once again into the ground. She was bleeding everywhere now crying Slevin once again pulled his arm back however regaining his humanity before he struck her again saying, "I'm....So sorry." he coughed out falling onto his bottom in shock at what had just happened. She took her chance getting up rushing him with a knee. He however caught it lifting her and himself up then throwing her slightly, the fight was over.

He walked limping and bleeding up the stairs into both masters quarters kicking in Head Master's room seeing him he stared and said what had happened during the fight wondering why she fought so viciously during a sparring match. He began to sweat not knowing what to say, Second Master broke in around this time asking what happened Slevin explained again now getting dizzy from blood loss. He afterward walked downstairs and back into his room sensing both masters had something to talk about. The next day facing eighth brother a man around his age maybe a year older of similar build and hair style. He coughed barely able to fight this time he wondered what would happen. However it was cut short before it began by a novice yelling out, "The masters are fighting!!" Slevin had thought about the day before knowing that was what it was about he rushed in to see both Masters fighting.

"Wait why?!", Was all he got out before being punched by head masters flying through three walls back outside hearing, "Why didn't you die?!" having one eye barely open to see the two masters dueling each other Second Master winning with a Rasengan, it was the first time he had ever seen the technique been used before Head master barely being able to hold on then flying backwards getting up. Slevin wondered how one so old could move so fast but they both were he coughed blood into his slightly limited field of view and was now going in and out of conciseness. A few minutes afterward he could see a foot then a loud cracccckkk Head master fell beside him dead with a snapped neck. Slevin awoke several hours later in his bed with the majority of the students outside along with Second master. He walked out extremely injured but okay for now the new Head Master smiled and said "You took one hell of a punch." Slevin nodded he could barely do that at the time wondering what had set the fight off.

Head Master explained that old master had became worried at her advancing thinking that she would soon be head master he tried to kill her.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:17 pm Post subject:

OOC: + 1.5; Total of 4.5/5

If possible, finish this up in one post.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:29 pm Post subject:

OOC: Can do.

Slevin coughed at the story interesting enough he would have never expected this but one can never truly know what a person thinks unless you are the person. He coughed his injuries immense now aching to get to a hospital, 'intensive care' he thought still listening into the newest in a long line of "Head Masters" wondering if he was going to die then and there probably would. After the chat heading to the dojo's clinical area not that it would really help but none the less they could give him some pain-killers that would hold him over until he got back to Kumogakure. The room was all white walls with several cots and a small man about five foot seven sitting behind a large desk, Slevin walked to him and said, "Need something to hold me over until I get to a hospital." the man nodded mare than likely seeing these types of injuries once a week he got up pushing his chair back making his way to a medicine cabinet which contained a "First aid kit." and several drugs Slevin did not recognize. He pulled out a small bottle of antiseptic, several cotton balls, and a bottle of pills labeled "Pain killers" in bright red. Walking over to him and dabbing the cotton balls which he had wet slightly on the dried blood on his fore-head cleaning it. Then administering the antiseptic, afterward popping the cap from the pain-killers, two small blue gel capsules came out handing one to Slevin saying, "Take these and get going then." Slevin nodded then taking and putting both into his mouth swallowing. After a few minutes they began to work and Slevin felt better than ever wondering when to get going.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:17 pm Post subject:

OOC: + 0.5; Total of 5/5
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:28 pm Post subject:

OOC Awesome.

Slevin walked out of the dojo and back toward the city of Kumogakure and a hospital quite proud of himself he was now a "D-Rank" shinobi. Amazed with his new achievement he nearly skipped back however the pain from the injuries of earlier stopping him even with the heavy pain killers now nearly back seeing the hospital thinking, "Yes!!" walking in and being rushed by a young nurse saying, "You need to get to the ER now." Slevin nodded happily, the room blurring as he made his way there. After a few minutes falling onto his face passed out awaking quite a while later fully bandaged soar but in a decent enough condition. Clothing himself and checking out of the hospital back in Kumo going to his house to get some more sleep.

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