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 Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 3:51 pm Post subject: Okami (Kumo-Genin, finished) |
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Name: Okami Ryouken
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 118lbs
Appearance: Okami Ryouken stand 5’6, with a thin athletic build. Her skin is relatively quite pale from sever lack of sunlight, she has missed matched eyes, the left being a deep shade of blue the right been a deep green, her hair is a jet black that seems to have a bluish sheen when ever light shines upon it that falls to just below her shoulder blades and is always tied back with a strip of dark cloth.
She has a scar of her left cheek and one going across her throat, but that is normally covered by a her headband that she wears like a choker, a black tribal tattoo of a wolf adorns her left shoulder. She normally wears black jeans with a dark gray t-shirt that is covered by a black jacket and her hands by black fingerless gloves, her chest seems extremely flat dew to how tight her chest wrappings always are, when she is out on a mission she normally wears a cloth mask to hide the bottom half of her face.
Tattoo:
Race: Caucasian/Asian halfbreed
Hair: Black
Eyes: Left is blue, Right is green
Body: athletic
Ethnicity: Lightning Country
Rank: E
Reputation: 0
Village: Kumogakure
Bloodline: Dorment
Main/Favored Weapon: Tekagi
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style:
1st - Taijutsu
2nd - Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
1 Tekagi – when not in use it’s in its holster that is strapped to the top of her right leg.
2 Tanto – one strapped to the bottom of her left leg and the other strapped horizontally to the bottom of her back, concealed by her jacket.
2 Nekode – the two are kept in a pouch that is strapped to the top of her left leg.
3 Smoke Bombs – in jacket pocket.
Personality: Okami is normally a quite individual, watching patently before deciding upon what to do and acting, after that she is unflinching in her resolve to see it thought, regardless if it’s her own life on the line, knowing too well the difference of what seems right and what IS right, she does not strive for idlest dreams like vast power over a large group of people ‘world dominion’ as some put it, nor attacking randomly in a self proclaimed title of being some keeper of balance, such things in her eyes were not things to be grasp by like likes of men, dreams like that are as hard to grasp like ones breath on a cold winters day.
Special Abilities: None
Jutsus:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell.
This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be set up a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: ] Still trying to make up my mind on this, but would like to work on pet (Inuzuka) clan jutsu if I can get permission.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
[I apologise in advance for the crappyness of this background]
Okami has always been picked on from her joint heritage, her mother being of Caucasian background (that is somewhat akin to British) whilst her father was a shinobi from Kumo, but how they came to be is another long winded story for another time. Along with her, some would consider odd heritage, her eyes where two different colours, yet she had one place she could always get away from the endless teasing of the other kids, her father trained and cared for a verity of animals for use in ninja mission and since she was 4 years old she has been helping him take care of them, from feeding the tracking hounds to cleaning out the rat cage (Rat’s being one of her favourite animals) she always loved to help out. By the time she was 8 Okami was already comftable and confident around large animals like Tigers, having fed the large carnivore several times.
It was easy to see from then on that she was always going to follow her father’s footsteps than her mothers, who was a classically trained singer, yet she was born with her mother’s talent for it but Okami always insisted that she hated to sing, even after her father caught her singing to the wolves one night.
When she joined the academy it was a joyous occasion for her family, yet when all the introductions was over it was all the same, endless teasing. At this time Okami seemed to shut herself away from the others her age, only socialising with older ninja’s or the mass of family animals, her mother was worried about this but her father, who did pretty much the same at her age, saw no harm in it, she was happy with her furry (or scaly) company and she was doing well at the academy. And it was true, she was far happier with animals, they were not judgmental, wont mock you for things that you could not control, yes, in her mind animals where much, much better.
The scars she got was from a.. Reckless spar with someone, there was worry over her neck wound but she got over the physical wound fast, but the injury made her doubt her still growing skills, lucky her old man had the remedy for that, her own personal companion. He dropped it in her lap one evening, a strange little runt of a beast covered in black fur, it looked like a dog but... was not a dog, the beast was called a ‘Hyena’ she had heard of the animal before, it was not native to this area and her father had never raised one before, he was really putting a lot of faith in her skills, she named it Tsukiyo for its, at the time, black fur.
The two quickly bonded, the small Hyena never leaving its new masters side. They ate, trained and slept together, Okami’s teasing seemed to die down as the small Hyena started to grow, her ones black fur giving way to her true tan and blotchy coat, thanks to Tsukiyo Okami’s confidence grew steadily, this being reflected in her work at the academy and they way she started to stand up for herself. By the time she finally graduated and became a Genin no one picked on her any more, maybe it was out if fear from her fuzzy friend, a new found respect for her or they got bored and grew out of it she did not know, but grew not to care, with Tsukiyo by her side she now hoped to out-class her father as an ninja-pet duo.
Roleplaying Characters:
Okami Ryouken
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E -Genin
Village: Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 Tekagi, 2 Tantos, 2 Nekodes, 3 Smoke Bombs
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The Pet = Bloodline thing is no longer a rule. That is to say you can have a bloodline and pet.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 5:12 pm Post subject: Re: Okami (Kumo-Genin, finished) |
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| Okami wrote: | Name: Okami Ryouken
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 118lbs
Appearance: Okami Ryouken stand 5’6, with a thin athletic build. Her skin is relatively quite pale from sever lack of sunlight, she has missed matched eyes, the left being a deep shade of blue the right been a deep green, her hair is a jet black that seems to have a bluish sheen when ever light shines upon it that falls to just below her shoulder blades and is always tied back with a strip of dark cloth.
She has a scar of her left cheek and one going across her throat, but that is normally covered by a her headband that she wears like a choker, a black tribal tattoo of a wolf adorns her left shoulder. She normally wears black jeans with a dark gray t-shirt that is covered by a black jacket and her hands by black fingerless gloves, her chest seems extremely flat dew to how tight her chest wrappings always are, when she is out on a mission she normally wears a cloth mask to hide the bottle half of her face.
Tattoo:
Race: British/Japanese
Hair: Black
Eyes: Left is blue, Right is green
Body: athletic
Ethnicity: Lightning Country
Rank: E
Reputation: 0
Village: Kumogakure
Bloodline: Dorment
Main/Favored Weapon: Tekagi
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style:
Taijutsu
Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
1 Tekagi – when not in use it’s in its holster that is strapped to the top of her right leg.
2 Tanto – one strapped to the bottom of her left leg and the other strapped horizontally to the bottom of her back, concealed by her jacket.
2 Nekode – in the two are kept in a pouch that is strapped to the top of her left leg.
3 Smoke Bombs – in jacket pocket.
Personality: Okami is normally a quite individual, watching patently before deciding upon what to do and acting, after that she is unflinching in her resolve to see it thought, regardless if it’s her own life on the line, knowing too well the difference of what seems right and what IS right, she does not strive for idlest dreams like vast power over a large group of people ‘world dominion’ as some put it, nor attacking randomly in a self proclaimed title of being some keeper of balance, such things in her eyes were not things to be grasp by like likes of men, dreams like that are as hard to grasp like ones breath on a cold winters day.
Special Abilities: None
Jutsus:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell.
This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be set up a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: ] Still trying to make up my mind on this, but would like to work on pet (Inuzuka) clan jutsu if I can get permission.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
[I apologise in advance for the crappyness of this background]
Okami has always been picked on from her joint heritage, her mother being of British background whilst her father was a shinobi from Kumo, but how they came to be is another long winded story for another time. Along with her, some would consider odd heritage, her eyes where two different colours, yet she had one place she could always get away from the endless teasing of the other kids, her father trained and cared for a verity of animals for use in ninja mission and since she was 4 years old she has been helping him take care of them, from feeding the tracking hounds to cleaning out the rat cage (Rat’s being one of her favourite animals) she always loved to help out. By the time she was 8 Okami was already comftable and confident around large animals like Tigers, having fed the large carnivore several times.
It was easy to see from then on that she was always going to follow her father’s footsteps than her mothers, who was a classically trained singer, yet she was born with her mother’s talent for it but Okami always insisted that she hated to sing, even after her father caught her singing to the wolves one night.
When she joined the academy it was a joyous occasion for her family, yet when all the introductions was over it was all the same, endless teasing. At this time Okami seemed to shut herself away from the others her age, only socialising with older ninja’s or the mass of family animals, her mother was worried about this but her father, who did pretty much the same at her age, saw no harm in it, she was happy with her furry (or scaly) company and she was doing well at the academy. And it was true, she was far happier with animals, they were not judgmental, wont mock you for things that you could not control, yes, in her mind animals where much, much better.
The scars she got was from a.. Reckless spar with someone, there was worry over her neck wound but she got over the physical wound fast, but the injury made her doubt her still growing skills, lucky her old man had the remedy for that, her own personal companion. He dropped it in her lap one evening, a strange little runt of a beast covered in black fur, it looked like a dog but... was not a dog, the beast was called a ‘Hyena’ she had heard of the animal before, it was not native to this area and her father had never raised one before, he was really putting a lot of faith in her skills, she named it Tsukiyo for its, at the time, black fur.
The two quickly bonded, the small Hyena never leaving its new masters side. They ate, trained and slept together, Okami’s teasing seemed to die down as the small Hyena started to grow, her ones black fur giving way to her true tan and blotchy coat, thanks to Tsukiyo Okami’s confidence grew steadily, this being reflected in her work at the academy and they way she started to stand up for herself. By the time she finally graduated and became a Genin no one picked on her any more, maybe it was out if fear from her fuzzy friend, a new found respect for her or they got bored and grew out of it she did not know, but grew not to care, with Tsukiyo by her side she now hoped to out-class her father as an ninja-pet duo. |
Pretty nice looking profile for a beginner xD. Most of the marks i put (Bolds) were grammatical errors (more exist, but I stopped worrying about it). Some questions/concerns
1. Kumo and British? i was uanware britan existed in the ninja world.... as it does not. This is a relatively easy fix, just pick the closest thing in the ninja world to britan, I would suggest the islands from one of the naruto movies, i recall one that had a circus of some kind, most people their were high class.... leafninja.com has a map of the world (as we know it)
2. Same topic, different area. British/Japanese for Ethnicity... She isnt half white half asain so your going for a mix then? seems alright but the area you put this in is to describe skintone, IE: Caucasian, Asian, Black (African/Whatevers Politically Correct), East Indian.... so just add like Halfbreed or something to the end of it I guess....
3. Inuzuka, Im unaware of its current condition. I do believe it was closed.... but it could have opened without me being aware, Ill check into this for you (unless someone who knows posts first)
4. Nekode, These claws would be considered custom to my knowledge. Just take a look at the topic and template then pm me what you think they should be, Will get em posted xD (I advise not posting it yourself as the thread requires 100 posts to have your topics considered xD, so pm me the info and I will post it for you.)
Welcome to NRC! I look forward to rping with you.
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Fame: 0
Reputation:
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Inventory: (Kunaix12, Senbonx15, Puppet)(Tekagix2)[Kunaix10, Tanto, Journal, Penx3, Tinted Sunglasses ]
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| Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 3:33 am Post subject: |
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uh the Inuzuka, are an SA now I believe, and thusly always open, as long as you earn it ^^
I think british is allowed nothing against it, (Acent wise) however I believe if you put an actually human race there it might just work out better in the long run since right now you could be anything.
Edit: I am stupid you put japanese >_>
Oh, and.... >_>
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Description: A pair of claws similar to the Tekagi, only shorter. Useful as a climbing tool or a combat weapon.
Rank: D
Other Requirements: None
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They are D ranked weapons, that are in the library, (Yay someone who read it for once ^^)
I also assume you are Tai spec, and Nin minor since that is the order they are placed in no? Since if you are going to have a bloodline, you can't be a spec unless you only have one style, since the bloodline takes up that secondary style.
Other than that this profile looks good, it kinda makes me think of a female kakashi (Idk why, but meh I am weird like that XD) Good job~
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Changed Race to - Caucasian/Asian halfbreed
Changed in background - her mother being of British background whilst her father was a shinobi from Kumo - to - her mother being of Caucasian background (that is somewhat akin to British) whilst her father was a shinobi from Kumo.
Marked up Tai as first and Nin as second (sorry i did not do that before) the bloodline thing was a simi-last moment think as was working it out thinking that the pet = no bloodline rule was inplace (Then YuweaCurtis informed me it was no longer a rule)
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E -Genin
Village: Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 Tekagi, 2 Tantos, 2 Nekodes, 3 Smoke Bombs
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Shifty, you're an idiot.
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