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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 6:04 am    Post subject: Islyum Shiro - Genin Reply with quote

Name: Islyum Shiro
Alias: Darkstar
Age: Nine
Gender: Male
Height: 4'1
Weight: 71 Lbs.

Appearance:
This child stands at possibly, four foot one inch tall. It's the possibly correct height for a child of his age. His weight equals up to seventy-one pounds, rather shrimpy. Darkstar rarely did any hard physical body work, other then when his mother or father would ask him to gather up fire wood or bring in some food from the markets of nearby towns. Slight degrees of muscle tone show from his slightly fleshed abs. In all respect though, the child lacks real strength, the kind that makes you grow guns atop your biceps, the kind that bulge out in an intense fashion. Establishing that this child is not a body builder now, he does have a strong individual muscle group in his calves and lower body. Darkstar's speed was practiced daily by him, not to mention weapon proficiencies. He loved the art of fighting.

Eyes of an eager student, burning with determination and anticipation. The pupils of this Uchiha are standard black, nothing too special. He often shields his eyes from view spite being shy with his heavily yellow tinted goggles which he carries atop his forehead. A bushy stack of hair lays atop his head being a light shade of blue. His bangs often soak over his eye view while in wet situations, and even when just in the wind, it often blows over his face irritating him accordingly. A cute little nose is stationed above his thinly grooved lips which take their luscious red color from his mother's side. His cheek bones are well-presented. Other then this, he looks quite standard to the average child.

    Race: Caucasian
    Hair: Jet Blue
    Eyes: Default Black
    Body: In-shape
    Ethnicity: Fire Country



Rank: E-rank
Reputation: 0
Village: Kirigakure

    Fame: 0
    Title: Genin

Bloodline: Uchiha
Main/Favored Weapon: A wakizashi
Element: Katon
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu[Primary], Taijutsu[Secondary]
Starting Inventory:

  • A wakizashi  (Main Weapon)
  • 4x Kunai
  • 9x Shuriken
  • 20 yards of Wire
  • 4x Smoke Bomb

Personality: The personality of an Adolescent child like Darkstar is quite complex to understand like most. There are many natures of Darkstar, which he displays sometimes at random and unknown times. If he feels like being open, he'll speak his mind. If he feels like muting himself, he will do so. There are many categories for his many personality traits.

  • Perseverance: Darkstar is dangerously stubborn, never wanting to give up. He fights through any pain, this doesn't mean nothing can stop him, but it has to be something he hasn't felt before. The kid has fought through a lot of tough emotional and physical pains. Backing himself up with some big talk, he knows when to roll in on his enemies with this intimidating trait we like to call perseverance.

  • Selfish: A phase/trait nearly all teens go through. The world revolves around Darkstar! Therefore he must be the main character at times, hopefully not breaking the fourth wall in the process. He has to be the person in the limelight and seems to despise and envy others who steal it from him when they might not even realize it. If it doesn't go his way, it sure as hell won't go any other way.

  • Love...?: Love for his family, for his friends, for his comrades. He will never intentionally betray a true friend of his.

  • Battle-Mode!: Darkstar will do anything to end a fight as quick as possible, other than coldly killing another living creature. If he is enraged, he can't be liable for what he does.




Special Abilities:
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Name: Sharingan
Requirements: 3-point kinjutsu training for each stage
Description: Sharingan is the bloodline limit doujutsu of the Uchiha clan. It possesses several powerful abilities, though it is developed through three stages. When just awakened, it is in Stage 1, with only one tomoe located above the pupil; in Stage 2, another tomoe appears, and they are now located to the left and right of the pupil; all three tomoe appear in Stage 3, and they are located in a triangle shape around the pupil: one directly above and the other two to the bottom left and right. The Sharingan is activated by sending some chakra into the eyes. It does not cost much, but only a true Uchiha can have it activated for prolonged periods of time without risking their health.
  • Stage 1: The initial stage of the awakened Sharingan, it only gives the clan members some basic abilities. Among these is the ability to see movement somewhat faster than what they would normally be able to and to detect chakra. This allows them to react better and gives them higher accuracy than most. Thanks to the chakra detection ability, many camouflage techniques are rendered ineffective. This stage also allows them to see clearer than normal.
  • Stage 2: The second stage of the Sharingan allows those who possess it to see everything with even better clarity, including objects that would normally fall out of sight because of their speed. This allows them to dodge and attack as if their taijutsu skills were one step higher. Additionally, visual genjutsu of rank B or lower can be dispelled instantly, without any chakra cost or a need for a special technique.
  • Stage 3: The third and final stage of the Sharingan opens even more possibilities for the clan members. Their vision of moving objects improves further. Their ability to see chakra and movement allows them to memorize the techniques used by their enemies and copy them, one of the abilities the clan is highly famous for. Additionally, visual genjutsu of rank A or lower can be dispelled instantly, without any chakra cost or a need for a special technique.



Jutsus:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Gennin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.

Name: Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Gennin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsus for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobi. The user uses speed to their advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsus or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.


Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This is a rather basic technique that does not require any hand seals to be used. Ideally, it temporarily paralyzes a number of targets. However, this is not likely to work on strong opponents, unless they are considerably weaker than the user themselves.



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D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: It all started with Darkstar's grandfather, Onikuus. This man was a strong clansmen of the Uchiha. Back when the prime founders of the nations were afoot, he was one of the Uchiha who would bind themselves to Konoha as it was written in history. Through the passing years as the next generation grew, his son, Darkstar's father was not fond or adapt at the Shinobi life. At the rank of Chuunin, the man retired and left the village with an honorable discharge from the Konoha Shinobi. Residing in Water Country, basic trades took him to places inhabiting around it.

Seto found a woman, fell in love with her, and eventually over the passing years had helped given birth to a boy by the name of Islyum. Both loved him dearly and were set on raising him to his best abilities. Poverty was in abundance sadly, his father thriving off the trade of fish while his mother ran the shop. Their child had a fondness for the outdoors, often leaving the house from sunup and returning at sundown. He slowly developed through this setting, increasing his abilities of perception and other essential components to becoming a Shinobi. This was done while being unaware.

Conflict struck! While Darkstar was at the age of six, his mother was assaulted and killed in a robbery at their fish store. A shank was embedded in her right forearm, one in her chest, and the final in her throat. Islyum's eyes shook in horror, the insides of him rattled, traumatized. The child's eyes had awoken merely from this pulse of rage deep within his core. The meager kid fell to the ground unconscious shortly after. He cried for days on end when finally, his father who was suffering just as greatly made the most important decision in Darkstar's life. They hauled up their belongings, all that was left in the Water country and moved up into the Kirigakure as settlers at first.

Citizenship came easily for the two. His father had left his maiden name behind, taking up his wife's one instead. Shiro Islyum, was what the boy was known as. Seto enrolled Darkstar into the Kirigakure Shinobi academy and passed through mediocrity standings. Now at the ripe age of nine, he's already been across Kirigakure for the most part, and is now ready to tackle the world head-on!

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Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Fame: 0
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Training Points: N/A
Inventory: A Wakizashi, 4x Kunai, 9x Shuriken, 20 yards of Wire, 4x Smoke Bomb

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry the Uchiha bloodline is closed.  even if it were open you'd need to be from Konoha.  so remove that from your bloodline and bloodline jutsus please

also, exploding tags are a B-ranked weapon meaning only C-ranked or higher can use them

i don't see anything else wrong...
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

shipangpang wrote:
sorry the Uchiha bloodline is closed.  even if it were open you'd need to be from Konoha.  so remove that from your bloodline and bloodline jutsus please

also, exploding tags are a B-ranked weapon meaning only C-ranked or higher can use them

i don't see anything else wrong...



What he said. With konoha being closed right now the Uchiha are closed. make those changes and then we would see ok.
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Shinobi Rank: D Genin ~E Genin~ E Genin
Village: Konoha~Suna`Kiri
Fame: 0
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Inventory: Nara~30x Shuriken 30x Kunai, 2x Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives//Hiro~20x Shuriken 1 Katana on back and 20x Kunai

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Evaluate it, regardless.

I wanna see what he can show.
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You have the same amount of girls, as I have money

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Zaraki Kenpachi (S Rank/Jounin)
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Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~S Rank/Jounin
Village: Suna~~~None
Fame: 2000~250~600
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

@ Kawada: Ok

remove this since it has to be trained
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Name: Sharingan
Requirements: 3-point kinjutsu training for each stage
Description: Sharingan is the bloodline limit doujutsu of the Uchiha clan. It possesses several powerful abilities, though it is developed through three stages. When just awakened, it is in Stage 1, with only one tomoe located above the pupil; in Stage 2, another tomoe appears, and they are now located to the left and right of the pupil; all three tomoe appear in Stage 3, and they are located in a triangle shape around the pupil: one directly above and the other two to the bottom left and right. The Sharingan is activated by sending some chakra into the eyes. It does not cost much, but only a true Uchiha can have it activated for prolonged periods of time without risking their health.

   * Stage 1: The initial stage of the awakened Sharingan, it only gives the clan members some basic abilities. Among these is the ability to see movement somewhat faster than what they would normally be able to and to detect chakra. This allows them to react better and gives them higher accuracy than most. Thanks to the chakra detection ability, many camouflage techniques are rendered ineffective. This stage also allows them to see clearer than normal.



Also remove the explosive tags since you can only use weapons up to C-rank.

besides that this looks good.
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Village: Konoha~Suna`Kiri
Fame: 0
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Training Points: 40
Inventory: Nara~30x Shuriken 30x Kunai, 2x Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives//Hiro~20x Shuriken 1 Katana on back and 20x Kunai

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is done... Thank-you all.

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Village: Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha I'm gonna enjoy hunting you. ^.^

Approved. Love the profile.



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Village: Iwagakure x2, Konoha, Kumogakure, Missing
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