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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:42 pm Post subject: The Seer's Secerets [SA training.] |
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OOC: I totally made this SA for Karen, but I need something to give me an edge in the tourny so...
Learning Guided Palm: ( will be training to as high as I can go until the tourny starts. .:Max 15 points:.)
Name: Tebiki-hira (Guided Palm)
Requirements: My permission, 3 point kin training for each stage.
Description:
Special Ability Points: 300
A Ninjust/taijutsu style developed by a great Seer who studied the focus of the human body and soul and how to connect those two parts in perfect harmony. He saw the way humans faught using thier fists and feet, throwing fire and water and such at eachotherlike brutes. Using the knowledge he had to develope a style of fighting that did ot require actually touching or hitting the desired target, getting rid of the need to resort to such violence. These strikes and moves used simple chakra to do damage to a target. This style is capable of putting out strong attacks with little body movement and little chakra usage. This Seer channeled the very chakra of the being, compresing and projecting it outward, Causing the strikes to bludgeon the opponent. The user of this ability never truly touches the opponent unless using the most powerful techniques, instead they strike outward releasing their chakra in persice control, using it to attack instead. Each attack striking a great distance outward at all times, exception if specific strikes that require contact. The guided Palm has five different stages to it, each one allowing more power and control on their chakra.
Though this style makes the user focus entirely on using only pure chakra in fighting, making the user unable to learn any element attacks, All except for bloodline jutsu dealing with only their main element, even then they cannot learn jutsu over A-Rank.The user will learn to focus and control their chakra at a much greater level, making more percise and accurate attacks with their chakra then they normally would have. Although the user of this ability always uses chakra to attack the target, there are various ways that they can do this. Each application of the ability has its various advantages, though none truly cover all the bases of a perfect offense. the vaious methods used by a Tebiki-hira user include Hira Projectiles, Hira Blasts, Hira waves, Hira needles, and Hira strikes. The speed and power of each variation is different.
* ~Hira projectiles~: Tebiki-hira users can gather up their chakra energy and utilize it in range attacks as projectiles. The user will gather chakra into their hand and thrust outward releasing that chakra into projectile blasts that are each about four inches in diameter. These profjectiles can deliver a low amount of damage in the lower stages and move slower than one might think. though in the higher stages these projectiles are capable of devlivering high damaging hits at remarkable speed. These projectiles require almost no time to prepare and can be fired from each hand, making one capable of firing off these projectiles in rapid secesion.
Stage One: average speed, 50% hitting power
Stage Two: high speed, 70% hitting power
Stage Three: high speed, 90% hitting power
Stage Four: great speed, 110% hitting power
Stage Five: extreme speed, 130% hitting power
* ~Hira Blasts~:. Tebiki-hira users can gather up their chakra energy in high amounts and utilize it in range attacks as blasts of chakra. The user will gather a moderate amount of chakra into their hand and thrust outward releasing that chakra into large blasts that cover the area of an average human body, casusing damage on a large scale. These Blasts can deliver a moderate amount of damage in the lower stages though in the higher stages these projectiles are capable of devlivering very high damaging hits. These blasts are almost instantanious though they require a longer time to prepare and must be executed with both hands. Making it impossible to fire them off in quickly.
Stage One: +80% total damage
Stage Two: +120% total damage
Stage Three: +160% total damage
Stage Four: +180% total damage
Stage Five: +220% total damage
* ~Hira Waves~: Sharp cutting projectiles of the Tebiki-hira user. The user will gather chakra energy into their palms and concintrate it carefully. then by swiping thier hand in front of them very quickly they will release the chakra in a steady stream and fire it off in a chosen direction. the result a thin wave of chakra that can cut the opponent. Though the actual size of the wave and the cutting ability of it increases in the higher stages. These waves of chakra move at about the same speed as a normally thrown weapon. These waves are easy to prpare and can be fired off at a moderate speed.
Stage One: Kunai sized wave, low cutting ability ( can only make shallow cuts on skin and cotton )
Stage Two: Tanto sized wave, Standard blade cutting ability
Stage Three: Wakizashi sized wave, moderate cutting ability ( able to cut wood objects easily)
Stage Four: Katana sized wave, High cutting ability
Stage Five: Nodachi sized wave, Great cutting ability ( able to make large gashes in stone and rock objects )
* ~Hira Needles~:. Pin point strikes of the Tebiki-hira user. gathering chakra into the tips of their fingers, the user can concintrate this chakra in order to use it in a very accurate manner. the user can fire off needle szied chakra projectiles from their finger tips. these needles don't cut the target at all, but instead hit the target with a hard blast of chakra in a very small point on the body. Making pressure points and vital points prefered targets. these neeedles can cause quite a bit of damage if used by some of great skill. Each needle deals about the damage of a punch in the pin point area. Though the amount of needles fired and the damage that they deal are increased by each stage.
Stage One: 5 chakra Needles, +0% total damage
Stage Two: 10 chakra Needles, +25% total damage
Stage Three: 15 chakra Needles, +50% total damage
Stage Four: 20 chakra Needles, +75% total damage
Stage Five: 25 chakra Needles, +100% total damage
* ~Hira Strikes~: Power-focused blows of the Tebiki-hira user. These are truly devastating in power. These attacks are performed at quite a fast speed, but they require a little time of gathering chakra into the hand you're going to use. The chakra is used to increase the strength of the blow by releasing the stored chakra on contact in a massive blast. Since it is not really physical strength, it won't deal fatal injuries but these strikes require actual physical contact to use. these Hira strikes increase the total amount od damage done on contact hits, but the higher stages can really pack a punch.
Stage One: +150% power
Stage Two: +200% power
Stage Three: +250% power
Stage Four: +300% power
Stage Five: +350% power
I jumped across to a high handing branch, my hand grasping on to the trunk of the tree as I landed. To afraid to even take a look behind me I kept moving forward, I my feet hitting against brown bark every second. I could feel my heart starting to work frantically as I ran, each time pumping my blood to my now oxygen deprived body. Only taking in shallow breaths each time, I tried to fuel my now aching limbs, driving them to keep going. It was only a matter of time until I exhausted myself, only a matter of time until they caught me. My eye search around the now blurred images of leaves and bark. I didn't really know what I was trying to find, but I knew I needed to hide, or to escape.
I heard a small crack of a stick breaking behind me, and my heart almost stopped as a shrill laugh reached my ears. My eyes shot wide open, though I was too terrified to even think about looking behind me. I didn't want to see those cold black eyes. Though I could feel them watching me as I tried to get away. The icy glare so cold, it was almost burning hot on my back. I scrambled forward, feeling the intense burning in my legs starting to creep up on me. My body seemed to start hitting a limit. It was only a matter of time before it fully gave out.
I made another grab for a branch, my tightened around it and I swung my body upward trying to break through the tree tops, once I did that and was out of sight, I could sneak away, and hide. Though just as I was about to make my move, I heard the same shrill laugh from behind my. something flicked through the leaves and went past my head then. A cold voice filled the area... [color=Dark Blue]" I don't think so, you can't get away that easy." [/color] suddenly there was tiy pop and I noticed small smoke trail coming from an item on the tree next to me. Looking at it I saw an exploding tag about to go off.
Damn it, when they threw that Item. This was their plan, they missed on purpose. I thought to myself frantically, suddenly the smoke erupted into a large ball of fire and I felt myself knocked back into a tree. I felt a crack in my ribs and I fell to the ground. Pain flooded my body like a damn breaking open a letting loose all its contents. within a few seconds I felt myself slip into unconsciousness. shadows surrounded me and I could barely feel the presence of someone started to slowly walk towards me, fear entered my mind for a few seconds before everything went blank.
Light his my face with a searing warmth as I was quickly roused my deep slumber. Blinking I lifted my hand in front of my face to shield my eyes from the glare. Though a jolt of pain shot through my side and I felt my arm fall to the floor. I hissed through clenched teeth as I fought back the urge to cry out. I sat up slowly, My hand pressed on my ribs as I did so. the slight pressure help alleviate a bit of the pulsing discomfort, but not be much. Squinting slightly in order to hide from the suns glare, I searched the area around me.
I was in a small room, the ceiling was high over my head, though the walls were close together. I could see a lone door off to my right, where the fun filtered through the rice paper window covers, casting the strong yellow beam around me. there was a small chair in the far corner, a bright red and orange Kimono draped over the side. I could see a small piece of paper attached to it. I had expected to wake up to water splashed on my face and awake to find myself in a stone cell. Though this is certainly not what i had expected.
I stood up, shaking a bit from my still weak legs. Looking over myself I could see that my side was already bandaged, clean white cloth wrapped around my ribs. I looked down next to my bed to find a small bowl of crimson water, next to a small pile of blood stained cloth. It looked myself over quickly, though I could find no other wounds besides a few small burns on my leg and arm. Most likely from that exploding tag going off right next to me. I sighed, realizing that I was both ok, and alive. though i didn't know how that was.
My dress was ripped and dirty, and my white sash was now coated in a thin layer of black. my eyes fell on the Red and orange Kimono that lay over the chair. Walking over to it slowly I took off the paper that was attached. I was surprised to find that it was a note, I read it over carefully, trying to figure out what was going on...
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If you are reading this now, you will most likely be confused, scared, and in pain. when you feel a bit better, put on the Kimono and come outside.
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I looked down at the clothes again, the note still in my hand. I wasn't sure exactly what to do. I could leave everything here now and run, sneak away and find my way back to Konoha, maybe. Or I can follow this letter, not knowing who wrote it, why they treated me, what they wanted, or where they were. I stood there for a few minutes, before making my decision, a stupid one, but a decision none-the-less. I quickly and carefully got undressed, slipping my now torn dress, and fitting myself with the many layered brightly colored attire laid out for me. Once everything was on neatly, i walked over to the one door in the room. Pushing it aside I stepped out onto a hardwood platform. A set of small stairs led down to a large concrete area, surrounded by grass and cherry trees. Off in the left corner I could see a tiny waterfall, which flowed downward into a tiny pond, which narrowed out into a stream which made its way though the middle of the concrete area, findings its way under a small red bridge, and finally out of site past a opening between two buildings.
Up in front of all of this stood an alter, a red archway opening up to a small three walled room. In the room was a lone window, opening out to the view over what I now noticed as a cliff side overlooking a forest. A small trail of smoke flowed from a lit incense stick. In the middle, a man sat crossed legged on a pillow. I looked at him carefully, noticing a large amount of wrinkles and liver spots on his skin. he looked almost a hundred years old, surely no where capable of doing much of anything, let alone get up and move to the garden for meditation.
I stepped out on the concrete platform. The cool stone soothing my feet as I walked. Moving over the tiny bridge over the stream, I glanced down at the water, and was surprised to find large gold fish swimming quickly in and out of the reeds. I brushed my hand over the smooth wood of the archway as I made my way towards the small alter. Once i was in front of the man i stopped, i opened my mouth to speak but he seemed to already know I was there. for he spoke suddenly, not even opening his eyes as he did so. " Please sit... tell me about yourself child. Explain how you got yourself into the situation in which i found you."
Slightly taken back I did as I was told, sitting upon my knees in the grass. I folded my hands in my lap and looked at the man for a few moments before speaking. I usually didn't take orders so well, and it felt strange listening to this old man, whom I knew nothing about. But I let loose all the info I knew about my pursuer and how I was hit by the exploding tag. finishing on how I woke up just a few minutes earlier. The man before my simply nodded and then resumed his motionless state. I peered at him, not knowing exactly what to do. But my anger suddenly flared inside me and I felt a piercing cold flood my system.
" Will you tell me who you are or what? Where is this place, how did I get here, what happened to my attacker, how do I get home?" I starred at the old man in front of me, but my words seemed not to phase him. he simply sat without moving, his eyes closed, his chest not even moving. he was probably dead if anything. I stood up, roughly brushing off the Kimono i was wearing. And i turned around and began to storm off.
" I am the Seer Teirald Jeire... but you will call me Master Jeire when speaking, do you understand? this place is my home, and I brought you here. Your attacker... he is dead."
" What do you mean you brought me here, your so old you can most likely barely walk. Who really saved me?"
Jeire opened one eye as he sat there, I looked at him with rage in my own. Then, before I even knew what happened the Seer jumped up on top of the archway that was behind me. Hopping down from it he spun in the, slowing his decent and landing silently on the concrete. he folded his arms in front of him and bowed. " I did bring you her child, and I assure you I can do more than walk.
I blinked, trying to make sure what I saw was not an illusion. This man was surely older than anyone I had ever seen, and yet, he was faster and more agile than even the most powerful taijutsu specialist. I took step back then, not knowing exactly what he was capable of, I didn't want to be caught in any of he movements, most of all a move men of a foot crashing near my face while he spun in the air. he stepped towards me, a smile now on his face. he motioned me to walk with him and he started to head down a path of cobble stones in the grass. After a few seconds I went after him, keeping my eye on his ever movement. He lead me through the garden, and up another small flight of steps, walking to a building he slid open a door and motioned me inside.
I walked slowly through the opening, finding myself in what looked like a dojo, but it had none of the weapons or tools that i was used to. Simply the padded floors and walls, Jeire slipped past me and then stationed himself in the middle of the room. He looked at me with a smile and motioned yet again for me to stand in front of him. I did so with cation and waited...
' You were trained in the art of battle yes? But you were taught a brutish, and ungrateful style of battle. hitting your opponent and throwing...metal weapons at each other. It is crazy human ideals like those that get people killed. if you wish, I will teach you the true art of battle, so you may easily win your opponent, without even touching him. "
I simply nodded in response to his words. I didn't really know what to expect at this point. After seeing a man at his age spin in the air like a top, i wasn't sure what he could do. But the thought of "winning your opponent, without even touching him." seemed like a bit over the top. Jeire chuckled and shook his head.
" You seem unconvinced, perhaps you would like a demonstration? "
" Well, I don't think that doing such a thing sounds possible really.Ii mean you have to hit your opponent to win. I mean even Genjutsu can't kill someone, You have to make contact at some point."
The Seer laughed again and got into a battle ready stance.." you misunderstand, here let me show you. Try to block my attack if you can." Jeire quickly waled towards me then, bringing his hand back and then thrusting it forward towards my stomach, I saw the movement and quickly move to knock his hand away though Jeire suddenly stopped his arm and I felt the wind knocked out of me. Staggering backward and gasped for air. Jeire stood motionless, still in the position he was when he attacked me. I looked at him with surprise, he hadn't hit me. I was sure of that, his palm never even came close, but this pain was real, and the fact I couldn't breathe meant the hit was quite strong. Jeire returned to his normal standing composer and walked towards me.
" Do you understand now child"
I stood up, taking the breath that I could now fully feel in my lungs. I cherished deeply after having it previously stolen from me. I turned towards Jeire, now intent on learning this new style. I wanted that power, this is what i have waited for, something to prove that Destiny had no hold on me.
" How did you do that?" _________________ ****Midnight Shadow****
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| Quote: | | OOC: I totally made this SA for Karen, but I need something to give me an edge in the tourny so... |
Other wise I won't really have anything in the tourny. I can learn chakra burst or desturctive mountain. But chakra burst has very limited uses and DMF damage at the rank I can learn it has almost 0 damage or power. I am learning it to give Emily something to attack with, other than basic punches and jabs since Hyuuga member don't have weapons, I can;t do anything else. _________________ ****Midnight Shadow****
--Made by Yoko
The supreme irony of life is that hardly anyone gets out of it alive.
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Sharingan points 991/1000
Roleplaying Characters:
Dante Uchiha
Karen Daikonran
Emily Hyuuga
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S.Genin---D.Genin---C.Genin Village: Konohagakure--Sunagakure---Konohagakure Fame: 0---0---0 Reputation: Training Points: 150 Inventory: Empty
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