Revenge On Spoiled blood [Rank Training]

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Shikon

Shikon jumped on to a high branch in the trees of the dense forest area before him. he was in a hurry, he had to move quickly in order to catch up. He couldn't loose him, he had to keep moving. If he got away, who knew how long it would be until he got to another chance. The branch under his feet broke from Shikon's weight when he landed on it. A resounding crack was heard and Shikon felt himself start to fall to the ground forty feet below. If he was able to still see then he was sure that his life would flash before his eyes. But all he knew was a a great feeling of dread that surrounded him. a tearing pain seemed to fill his heart and mind. Even though he did not hit the ground yet, he felt the agonizing drain of torn flesh and broken bone in his body. Though the pain was not physical, it was something else. A tearing emotional pain from within.

This fall was maybe the worst thing to happen to him in his life. He was so close this time. He knew the he was near, he knew his smell, the sound of his voice. The slow, so slow beat of his heart. He was only training in the forest when it happened. Working on a jutsu after his mission was pulled suddenly. The wind was his guide at that time, showing him where his targets were as the animals of the forest started to move around. Knocking them out of the air, trees and ground. it was easier than he thought it would be. But he never thought that he was going to come across someone who would change his forever, yet again. he noticed the beating of his heart first. The slow rhythmic beat that could only be mean Ookami. He had heard it so many times in his childhood. Just sitting around the corner playing by himself with a toy he made himself. that heart beat meant danger, it meant hatred. He knew to quickly move when that met his ears. Though now as he was falling it amused he to think this time he was running away from him this time.

Then the wind brought a smell over to him once he noticed the slow heart. the smell of flowers and rain. then the musty, sweaty smell of fur and bad hygiene. If any bear had smelled that they of course would have that it was the sell of a normal bear. A normal brutish and slow monster. But of course the hear beat Shikon heard meant otherwise. And the was something else as ell. the tiny hint of human mixed with the sweaty fur of the grizzly. So it came to think someone was standing next to the grizzly bear? they were eaten by the grizzly bear, something of that sort yes? But once Shikon seemed to be the only one to know the truth of these hidden messages. the smell of was gone from his person now. In the chase it seemed to disappear, and as Shikon continued his slow fall to the ground he thought of the words that he had heard as well. The meaning they might have had...

"Good luck Shikon, I do hope you achieve your goal someday" They were simply a whisper at most. As if he was speaking to himself. though Shikon heard it, he heard almost everything. And when he made that whisper he should have known Shikon would have heard it. But of course he could have forgotten that part of Shikon after all this time. Or perhaps he wanted himself to be heard. Perhaps the whisper was a chance he was taking, maybe he wanted to have Shikon follow. Just maybe... either way Shikon had heard it. the evidence was over whelming and Shikon turned towards the direction he knew him to be. Though, the was no more sign of him around, no smell, no heart-... but wait. Yes Shikon could still hear it. the slow heartbeat he knew so well. Moving off in the distance.

Could Shikon just let it go? Could he simply let him go, let this chance fly by. Shikon had no sign of his return for almost 3 years now. How long would it be until that chance came back to him. what where the chances that he would by alive then anyway. He had to be at least twenty by now. How much longer did he have? Shikon knew the cost of the clan, he had maybe four more years, five? No Shikon couldn't let him go now. Otherwise he wouldn't get another try. he wouldn't get to him again. that heartbeat would never be heard again. " Shikon, no, you know what happened last time. You haven't grown very much since then. You are not yet used to this new power. Your not ready." it was strange, Ailan seemed to be the voice of reason for once. Usually it was him who wanted to jump into conflict and start battles. But Shikon shook his head, he couldn't let go. No matter how much he tried, he couldn't let go. He had to chase him down....

Shikon let hi arms out as he fell, the wind rushing past his body and through his hair. Really, he felt free from everything in the moments that were just before his death. The wind swirled around him easily and he felt his jacket rub against his body. He let himself fall to the ground, content with the way he lived his life. he accepted really, and that almost surprised him. He always thought he would try to find a way to cheat death, to end the limited time he had in the world. So as he readied himself for it all to end. He was surprised he was enjoying the fact he didn't have to worry anymore. That he could die... without regret.

A loud crash could be heard echo through the tees. Birds took off as they were startled by the noise. Shikon coughed up a spray of blood, crimson fluid leaked from his chest as a rib showed through the skin and clothing. True physical pain finally erupted from his body. Searing agony burned along his chest and arm. He felt warmth take over his torso as blood began to pour from his wound. he sucked in a breath as it seemed that even breathing hurt do. He was sure that is he could see this is the time that things would get blurry and start to fade. Though such things were not there to distract him as others had. he could only focus on the pain that pulsed through him. Each second another torch seemed to be set upon his bare skin as the pain got worse. he took shallow breathes after the coming seconds, waiting for it all to end. Though it seemed that it never would.

It just got worse, and he almost began to beg for it all to end. He was used to pain yes, but he had hoped for it to be quick, this wasn't what he wanted. Yet sure enough, Shikon began too feel cold and numb. Sleep seemed to slowly over take him, he felt as if his body was rising up, being taken away to his resting place. He must have died now, for the pain was gone, he was floating, floating in a dark abyss. peace flooded him and he let it take him. He slowly slipped from consciousness...

((OOC: He is not dead, just so you know. I will continue this perhaps tomorrow, but grade this when you can ))
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Sometimes life seemes to
Expects us to
Never stop
Clenching down,
Holding tight
So that deep
Underneath that
Courage we just
Keep feeling will
Stay with us.

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airknight12 · Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:37 pm Post subject:

tries to understand what your saying has to do with sench sucking, and um +1.5
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Shikon · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 1:56 am Post subject:

((OOC: Just so that it is known. i am going for all three of Shikon's rank trains ( the two standard ones and the one i bought him ) So I will be working until I get a total of 15 points. ))

IC:

Shikon standing in the middle of a small clearing. he was only about nine years old at the time. Ailan stood next to him, being fully grown the wolf was even a few inches higher than Shikon himself. Though because of this Shikon could often ride along Ailan's back. But he did not really have time for such things now. The wind kicked up, sending Shikon's hair in a fury as he stood waiting for movement in front of him. he stood with a kunai in hand, knees bent and poised for action. His piercing green eyes where focused intently on the figure in front of him. The person let out a sigh and straightened up. They were tall, and had on large black robes. Their reached down to the small of their back. A wakizashi sword held in hand, which was pointed towards Shikon. The wind sent the man's hair out in front of him, making it impossible to really see his face. Though the way he held himself showed that he was a man of awesome power and skills. Someone that a simple nine year old kid could have to hopes of winning against in a battle. though Shikon knew that he would have to try. otherwise he was sure this man would find no regret in killing him. If he just let himself be destroyed, then no mercy would be shown, but perhaps, if he was to fight back. If he tried as hard as he could, life would be given that day.

Only utter silence filled the area. the wind made even no noise as if passed through the clearing. Leaving no audible sound in which could give away either Shikon's or the man's intentions. All movement except the flow of hair and leaves from the wind stopped. If an onlooker came across the scene on would think that they were statues set for a memory of a long battle. They seemed to stay that way for some time, even Ailan being immobile during the duration of the silence. It seemed to drag on for eternity until suddenly, a lone raven broke through the trees and flew off into the sky. at the sound the man suddenly sprung into action making a quick slash at Shikon's shoulder.

Shikon was barely able to move in time to block the attack, putting his kunai in front of the sword, a loud clang echoed through the trees. Though the force of the hit knocked Shikon backward. He stepped out behind him and caught himself on his right foot before he fell. Shikon grunted and shook his arm as he felt a jolt of pain go through it. The attack was strong one, Shikon thought that perhaps he ripped a muscle in his shoulder blocking the blow. He looked and found that the man was already upon him, laying down another strike with his sword.Shikon moved faster this time, adrenaline now in his veins. he slapped always the blade with his kunai, though before he could counter attack the man twisted his blade and attempted an upward slash from the other side. Shikon chopped down with his kunai again and stopped the man's attempt. Shikon jumped away from him, getting some distance. Once he was able to get away another, more powerful wave of pain thought down his shoulder and arm. He barely was able to lift his arm now. the trikes that Shikon kept blocking had so much power behind them that it strained his arm to take the hit. he shook it out, but the pain only increased when he did so.

Shikon looked back up to the man now, he could see dark green eyes looking into his own. he seemed to be locked suddenly in the gaze. Being unable to move, a chill ran down his spine. each of his muscles started to twitch as fear started to creep into his mind. " You are weak Shikon, just give up now, why continue to fight it?' The man began to circle Shikon, taking slow lengthy steps in a clockwise motion. Shikon started to move the opposite way.." Why wouldn't I fight? Should I simply try to take death wholeheartedly?I won't take death curled into a ball on the ground like a bog." The man laughed at Shikon's words then, it was a menacing laugh. Having a hint of stored power and energy in each tone. One could think of it as the laugh of death itself. Burning into Shikon's body in a way that a red hot blade never could. Shikon almost missed a step as he was circling as the laugh seemed to pierce into his mind. Shikon stumbled slightly trying to gain his balance while he watched for the man in case he tried to make a move.

The man seemed to simply continue circling around Shikon as he stumbled, moving at the same pace. Shikon over stepped, getting himself to be back on balance. Though as he did so the wind picked up again, throwing his hair in front his face. Shikon tried to brush it out of the way with his free hand. When he did the Man was already upon him again. He slashed out at him with lightning speed. Shikon moved as quickly as he could being only just fast enough to bring his kunai between the sword the man held in his hand. Each strike caused Shikon to almost loose the kunai as his hand was blasted backward with each block. Each time he was even almost knocked off balance, but he kept his ground. Shikon blocked on last attack before he was finally sent crashing to the ground. He landed hard on his back and the air was knocked out of him. He looked up gasping for air at the figure above him. The man stood looking down at him, the un shining brightly behind him, making the lone silhouette have glowing yellow around him. The very angel of death towered over him.

" Don't you see Shikon, you fight yes. But it is useless, in the end you would have been better off just accepting while laying on the floor like dog as you said. Because now you lay on the floor, you body weak, your emotions now taking hold. And the outcome was the same either way. " The man flipped his sword around and brought it high over his head. The blade pointed downward directly at Shikon's chest. Shikon's eyes starred open wide at the blade. It was a deep silver color, and soon, it seemed it would be covered in crimson. " if it comes down to it, if you know that death would be your only outcome. at least accept death like a man Shikon. don't try to run away from it. it will do you no good" the man then started to bring the sword downward towards Shikon. he closed his eyes in fear, not wanting to see his own death coming. He was only nine after all, he didn't expect that it would all end so suddenly.

Suddenly a mass of black fur crashed against the man that stood above Shikon. he was knocked away and dropped his sword at Shikon's feet. the man stumbled backward as he seemed to struggle to get the mass of fur and muscle away from his chest. As Ailan seemed to be clinging to the man's body. A bit of blood was dripping onto his teeth that were clenched between the mans shoulder and neck. Though the man brought a quick fist into Ailan's ribs and yelp escaped from his jaws. Ailan let go and dropped to the ground with a thud. the man clutched his shoulder and spat at the wolf on the floor. " Stupid animal. you fight the inevitable just as your master." the man stomped down on the wolf as he spoke. another yelp could be heard and Shikon crawled to his feet. he looked at the man with blazing eyes, a silver colored Wakizashi in his hands. " Stop it, stop it now" The man looked at Shikon, the nine year old boy that tried to hold his sword in his tiny hands. It shook savagely as Shikon's tried to support the weight. the piercing laugh dug deep into Shikon again. And he felt tread and fear creep into his very soul. ' very well boy, you shall take his punishment"

The man clapped his hands together and then straightened up his posture. Shikon could see his mouth begin to bulge out a bit and finally he opened his mouth and the a large stream of fire erupted from his lips. the fire crashed towards Shikon and all he was able to do was hold the sword up to the flames, blocking only a small portion of the flames. The rest was sent along his neck and face. Shikon felt the fire lick at his nose and forehead. But most of all a terrible agony burst through him as he felt his eyes seem to be ripped out with a rusty fork. He dropped to his knees and the flames died down. Shikon cried out in pain as he felt his the cornea of his eyes burn away like dried grass. Everything around him went blank and Shikon could not see anything. though he didn't care in the least about that. He curled into a ball on the ground as pure agony took him over. He stayed their on the floor as he hoped that the pain would soon die out, but after thirty seconds of unbearable waves of heat washed over him that felt like eternity. The pain still did not die down. Shikon can hear the man walk over to him and he stood before the boy on the ground. He reached down and picked up his sword, sheathing it in a furry of moment. The man looked down at him, piercing green eye unemotional as he watched Shikon cried out in his own personal hell. " What are you doing? get up son, your training isn't done...' Shikon's father brought a foot down on his chest.....

Dream Exit:

Shikon sat up quickly, screaming as loud as he could as his hands reached out in mid air. Only blackness was around him. Only a silent abyss and black veil sat before him. His hands dropped to his side and he could feel a soft fabric between his fingers. A woven cotton with what felt like silk underneath it. Shikon could feel this fabric resting over his entire body. He began to reach over to his right. Shikon's hands found a small desk next to him, a small circular cylinder resting upon it. Next this was a large item that felt like a high bowl. Shikon flipped the switch on the lamp, he felt a small bit of heat start to come off of the area. Letting him know his had turned it on. Shikon fell back on to the bed. He sighed and felt his hands. They were shaking again, as they always did after that dream. It was one that he always had, when he first went blind during training. His father never trained him after that day. he just saw it as a waste of time. "How can a kid who is blind ever learn anything" he said. Shikon had accepted that for some time as his grades slipped in the academy. But somehow he got back on life. Shikon heard someone enter the room as he laid there. the door opened with a small creak and footsteps came to the edge of his bed. ' Shikon, are you alright? what is wrong?" Shikon simply shook his head in response. Nothing was wrong. he had that problem all the time now. that same dream over and over again. " No, I'm fine mom"....
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Sometimes life seemes to
Expects us to
Never stop
Clenching down,
Holding tight
So that deep
Underneath that
Courage we just
Keep feeling will
Stay with us.

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Ookami-iki, Shikon
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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 4:47 am Post subject:

1.5=3
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Shikon · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 11:52 am Post subject:

((OOC: 1.5 for that? come on, it showed a great and important time in Shikon's life. The day he went blind. As well it should the realationship that he and his father had. It tied an emotional appeal throughout the story. As well with the the glimps on his father's action in the end it leaves the reader wondering if his mother was the same way. The battle itself had many aspects in it that many people never RP. Such as actuall physical drain and reaction to massive trama on the body. It also took in surroundings into acount as the wind blew his father's hair in front of his face, as they circled around Shikon's hair covered his eyes when he took up his father's position giving him a moment of weakness. I was really expecting more.... ))
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Sometimes life seemes to
Expects us to
Never stop
Clenching down,
Holding tight
So that deep
Underneath that
Courage we just
Keep feeling will
Stay with us.

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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 12:06 pm Post subject:

OOC: Okay, okay I admit that was a bit harsh for rank training.

+2 Added towards original that I gave.

Total +5

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