Eterna - The Story Unfolds

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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:13 pm Post subject: Eterna - The Story Unfolds

OOC: Sorry ti took me so long to past this. I don't have any excuses but I can explain myself. 1) I was busy helping you guys with your templates 2) I had diaper duty 3) I had to come up with some material for this story in terms of missions. If you have any basic idea's send them to me.

Well, let's begin. first, I would like to say that I have updated the stats system, so if you have not read it yet do so now.

IC: The clouds spewing from the dungeon's chimney were as black as coal. Even though it was early in the morning, it looked as if it were late at night. Not only that but, the heat from the lava was unbearable. Today, Newbie members of Rave were getting an inside look at what Rave members do daily in the sake of peace. Ultamax looked at the Newbies. There were about 30 of them but, of the whole lot, only about 4 or 5 interested him. They all assembled them selves in forms of 4.(rows of 4 people) Ultamax smiled at the group and said, "This is going to be good."

He turned around and took a look at the dungeon. The dungeon was surrounded by several mountains that enclosed it from the outside world. Underneathe it was a pool of lava that flowed down a waterfall. The entire dungeon itself was being held in mid-air by chains of Edra,(A special metal created by Blacksmiths, similar to steel but much lighter and stronger) although the design of the dungeon was plain. It was a simple two floor dungeon with over 4 miles to it's course. The dungeon seemed to be inside of a volcano however, this was no volcano. This seemed more like hell.

"Alright, you Crabs!" Ultamax screamed at the top of his lungs. "Today's lesson is going to be simple if you pay attention. We don't want any unwanted deaths. So pay attention!!!" He looked at the dungeon and said, "This dungeon is where you will be taking your final exam. If you can survive this dungeon then you will officially be Rookies in our guild." He paused for a moment and took the time to admire the infrastructure. "This, is your worst nightmare, Albaska."

Suddenly, the smoke coming out of the chimney stopped. Ultamax then turned to the group and said, "Alright, time to begin. We have to be quick about this, so I'll explain fast. Albaska used to be a jail here in Garage nation however, it was abandoned after the war began 45 years ago. Most of the prisoner contained here were bloodthirsty muderers and crime leaders. it is said that some of them stayed here because when the place was abandoned, they forgot to unlock the prisoners. Your mission is to form teams of 3 and find treasure hidden deep within the dungeon. Be careful because there is a 45% chance that you will come out in less then 3 pieces. With that, I'll give you 10 minutes to form your teams. When you are ready, come to me and I will open the gates."

The orc looked at the dungeon, and remembered his times of a Newbie conquering the dungeon with his team. He then looks back at the group of Newbies and says, "Oh yeah, and be careful not to turn on your own comrades. Albaska is known for playing tricks on people."

OOC: Sorry if my spelling is a little off. I'm working with a faulty keyboard and my spell checker is broken.
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Sench · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 11:23 am Post subject:

OOC: I updated my profile, but not the spells. Kinda felt inclined to keep them that way, but it's up to you to decide the damage dealt really.

IC: Malcolm listened to their orc instructor and observed the dungeon. Marvelous, - he spoke to himself quietly, - A brutally efficient way to sort out the newcomers and get rid of the trash with no traces. Kinda reminds me of home, except wasn't as fiery back there. He decided not to waste time looking for companions. There were thirty people, so nobody would be left without a full team, but he didn't want to have to join forces with those who nobody else wanted. A mage with a wide variety of attack spells, the best group choice for him was a tough melee fighter and either a healer, ranged combatant or a melee supporter, in order of importance. However, a healer was a must if he couldn't find someone who used heavy armor in battle. Thinking for only a single moment, he decided that most of the people here must be melee fighters as it was easier to play a moving fortress than have real skill or learn magic, and so finding a healer was a priority. Not one for socializing much, he just looked through the crowd for a little while, mentally noting those who looked like people with magic, and then picking ones who could be priests. Not much to his surprise, he only found two: one was an aged human male and the other a young woman, also human. Not even seeing anything to think about, Malcolm made his way towards the young woman. Of course, priests were usually the goody-two-shoes types, so before talking to her, he not only lost the hood, but also tried to give his black hair a little combing. It didn't turn out too well, but he decided it would do, and he also didn't have time to just waste. He was not particularly worried about coming out of the dungeon alive, but he did want to achieve the best possible results, and for that, he needed to minimize the potential mistakes of his teammates - hence the whole careful choice. Excuse me, - he addressed the young female as he made his way ever closer, putting on the most friendly smile he could - But I was looking for a team. You are a priest, am I right? In which case, I believe our talents could very well accentuate each other.

OOC: I am interacting with Velidina's character. Just thought I'd clarify...

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Velidina_Shiatamme · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:45 pm Post subject:

Mizuhaka stood somewhat away from the group, not really liking what they had to do. Yes, she was here, but maybe not for the reasons that others were in here for. They might be looking for personal glory, or to get rich, but the reason that Mizuhaka was here was for answers. She had found a peculiar rock-looking thing, and she figured that this place was the best area to start looking for answers.

A Dark Elf came up to her, and she smiled. "Oh, sorry... I'm not a priest, although I come from a family of priests. I'm actually a mage, but I do know a healing spell. Is that good enough for you?" she asked him. "I'm sorry if I cannot help you..."

After that, she turned back to the orc guy that was supervising the last "exam." She wasn't too sure if she liked him all that much. Not because he was an orc, but because of what he said.

She turned back to the Dark Elf after that glance to the Orc. "And you don't have to act like your in nobility. Here, everyone is equal. Although I do appreciate the thought." She gave him a smile while waiting for his answer.
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Yoh-Kun · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:54 pm Post subject:

OOC: Sorry I haven't replied to your Pm's Zeke. I had a few issues but I updated my profile so I'm ready to post.

Since the day Yoh left his family he searched for a master to train under. He found one and studied under him with a few other people. He needed to survive grave dangers and Now the day had come to take the final exam, Yoh is ready to do his first mission, maybe his last:

The orc screamed that they had ten minute's to form a group of three people. Yoh looked at Teryura. "Well boy time to find ourselves some team mate's." Yoh said. Yoh saw a lot of people making them self ready to do the test. He saw a girl, she was studying to become a priest. 'Hmm she might come in handy.' Yoh thought. While he and Teryura where walking to the priestess someone else started talking to her. He looked like a mage and was also an elf. Yoh examined the man. He looked only a few years older then Yoh. 'Well i guess I shall join there team if they don't mind that is.' He thought.

Yoh walked towards the man and the priestess. "Good day lovely lady and a good day to you too sir." Yoh said. "I was wondering if me and my dragon Teryura could Join you for this exam." He said. "Oh where are my manners, My name is Yoh Nessuka I'm a Dragoneir and this is my dragon Teryura nice to meet you all. So what do you say shall we do this exam together?" Yoh asked. He looked at the elf. Since he came closer he saw that he was a dark elf. 'A dark elf, It's been a while since I saw one.' Yoh thought. Yoh looked around. He saw that almost everyone had found a group. 'Well time to go hopefully they take me with them.' Yoh thought.
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Sench · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:47 pm Post subject:

This sucks, but she's better than an old fart who would get winded in two minutes. I don't seem to have a choice, and in the end, she would at least make a distraction. Might be all she's good for with that much confidence. Malcolm smiled slightly as he replied: Perhaps, but in a time like ours, it is important to act human in order to stay human. That is when another person came up to them. Great, a fruity elf, and a kid at that. However, a melee attacker could be useful, probably more so than a defensive type fighter as he'll draw more attention... Also, it seems all the others have already randomly, or being already acquaintanced, split into groups of three. I'm just going to feel like an idiot when I have to get back to these two in a few minutes. He stayed friendly when replying to the elf: I'd be delighted to. My name is Malcolm, - he said, offering his hand. Surely, he wasn't feeling exactly the way he was acting, but he could bear with it for now. There wasn't much difference and even less choice if he was to achieve his goals.

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evermember · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 3:59 pm Post subject:

shrig frowned and sighed "after all this training he just wants us to go threw a dungion" he thought to himself as he walked trying to find a group. his dark blue eyes scanned the room as his dark green arms moved those who got in his way as he walked. he wiped the sweat from under his dark brown hair and ajusted his dark silver armor and made sure his large axe was in place. he kept walking and saw a small group of people that included a dark looking man and a woman in robes. shrig walked to them and looked at them. "it seems to me that your missing a warrior"he said to the group as he crossed his arms on his chest. "names shrig of the nega clan and i offer you guys my services how bout it?" he said as he hoped he would be excepted into the group.
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Jcc7 · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:44 pm Post subject:

"Your mission is to form teams of 3 and find treasure hidden deep within the dungeon." Kirai looked up from his magazine to Â actually pay attention to the orc. "Be careful because there is a 45% chance that you will come out in less then 3 pieces." Kirai looked over to some of the other newbies and noticed some of them tremble. He snorted. " So what, Just hope those three pieces are limbs." He thought before paying attention to the ork again.

"With that, I'll give you 10 minutes to form your teams. When you are ready, come to me and I will open the gates." Â As soon as the orc finished kirai looked around the room. " These people team up fast." He Seacrhed in his vest's pockets to see if his gear was in order. " Explosive shells, Normal Ammo,Poison shells, Potions,Eyedrops . That looks like everything. Now to find a team." He looked around and noticed only two others who where without a team. He walked up to man dressed in black ninja Op. " Looks like it's me you and the ork." He said lazily as he pointed over to an orc who seemed to be talking to another team.
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 7:49 pm Post subject:

OOC: Sorry for the wait, all! Razz

It really sucks when you don't have Internet at your home. I have to go now, but I'll be back on later, and I'll post here.

IC: Kumori stands there with the others, hearing everything that's being said, and taking down some notes in his head. He makes sure that he has all of the supplies that he needs for this ordeal, then nods his head when he hears that he, along with two others, have to go into the dungeon, and that there's a slim possibility that they'll die in the process, but he's prepared for what's going to happen later on, then looks around to try and find someone who'll be best for his "team". He's looking for one who can heal, and one who can cast other Spells from the distance, while he goes in close for the kill, and will need someone to protect him while he lays down Traps to slow down, and/or possibly kill, the enemy, so he doesn't get too distracted, and/or possibly hurt in the process. He's also hoping that someone, hopefully the ones he's looking for, would be looking for one such as himself, which can use Illusions without fear of using MP, is very good for stealth Missions, and can create Traps, so he looks around carefully, making sure not to pick the wrong person. Hearing that there are Mages, Dragoneirs, and some other Classes, and not too sure whom to choose, he decides to just yell out, hoping someone will hear him, and take him in as their teammate, hoping to have at least one female in the group as well while he's at it, for he doesn't like the idea of having a party of strictly men.

If anyone's looking for a Rogue who's pretty-much a jack-of-all-trades, I'm here! My name's Kumori Hayato! I'm willing to join up with a group who's good in Magic-casting, and healing hopefully healing as well! A good frontlinesman would be very nice as well!
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:51 pm Post subject:

OOC: Okay, Jcc7, Kats and evermember, continue to form your team, post a reply to Katsuga's post. As for Sench, Velidina and Yoh, this is going to be interesting...

IC: Ultamax watched as the teams began to form. Eventually, all the teams formed together and the last people left were Shrig, Kirai and Kumori. Naturally outcasts stick together. Ultamax thought to himself as he remembered his masters words. "Aww, the good ole days" he said as he looked at his the dungeon. Once white smoke(instead of black smoke) began to pour out of the chimney the exam will begin.

At that moment, Ultamax remembered something from the time him and his team went in as a boy. He looked through the crowd of teams forming and saw a Dragoneir in the crowd, with his pet. He walked over to the Dragoneir and said, "Are you sure you want to take your beast inside, Yoh? It might get crowded and cut your chances of survival in half. Uh, not that cluster-phobia should matter but, it is something you should think of."

Only 5 minutes remained. Who ever needed to form a team should hurry. Those who do not form a team in time will have to repeat the Newbie course from the beginning.

OOC: Have fun, 5 more minutes....RP time of course....I would like to point out that there are several other NPC teams, and you might run into them once this starts. To tell the truth, I only know the ending, it's up to you to write your way to the top.

P.S - ever- can you learn to use correct Capitalization and punctuation? Grammar counts!

Also, nega sounds a lot like nigga....no joke.....
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Velidina_Shiatamme · Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:29 pm Post subject:

OoC: Guess I'll post, and who said I was with them? Razz

Mizuhaka nodded. "True enough, it is. But still... you didn't need to comb your hair or anything. It makes me feel more special than I truly am." After she said that, a Dragoneir came up. "Nice to meet you." she said honestly. Turning back to the man who called himself Malcom, she nodded. "He might be more benificial to your team. Two mages usually won't go good together, neh?" She had that habit of sometimes saying neh, especially in a question.

She heard another man talk about being a "jack of all trades." When he stated what he wanted, she grinned, but more of a girlish grin. That's my cue. she thought as she walked up to him.

"Mister, I am a mage, who knows one healing spell. Is that good for you? I come from a line of priests, so I think I can learn more later as well..." she added. She hoped that he would accept her. She heard most rogues that came here had gentler, and usually funnier dispositions. She hoped that rumour would hold true in this case. God knew that she could use some laughter right about now. And she didn't want him to go through the course again. She figured the Elf, and Malcom, could find another person. Wasn't there one that wanted to be accepted in anyway? Now that she was gone, he could be accepted instead.

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