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Here's the final chapter I have typed up so far. I've handwritten all of these chapters first, so they seemed a little longer on paper. And I'm up to chapter seven right now total.
Chapter Two
Naruto’s Observation;
Prelude to Battle
“Naruto!” Iruka said, his eyes gleaming. “Oh, Iruka-sensei! Old Lady Tsunade! And… who are you?” he asked, looking quizzically at Velidina. “Hey, Naruto-kun…” she said, waving to him. Naruto’s eyes widened. That voice… it seemed familiar, somehow. “Velidina?” he asked uncertainly. Velidina nodded. “Hai.” Naruto’s eyes closed and he smiled. “Long time, no see, eh, Velidina?” Velidina simply gave a light chuckle. “It has been a long time, Naruto-kun…” The pink-haired girl sighed. “Although he hasn’t matured at all…” Velidina couldn’t help herself. She threw herself upon Naruto, giving him a quick hug. Everyone’s eyes widened, including Naruto’s. “V-velidina…” he stuttered. Velidina seemed to take no notice, as she just said, “It’s good to see you all again… even you, Sakura-chan.” Sakura blushed at Velidina’s remembering her name. “You too, Velidina.”
Velidina looked around. “Hmm…? Where’s Shizune-san?” Tsunade sighed. “She’s off doing errands and such. Naruto, there’s someone I want you to fight, now that you’re here.” Everyone’s heads turned to the door as it opened harshly once again, revealing a dark-haired young man that had a bored look in his eyes, and a small ponytail in his hair, with a blonde-haired lady that had a huge fan, one of those traditional fans, except a lot larger, upon her back. Sakura once again pointed at Naruto. “Hey you guys, look who’s back!” The dark-haired young man’s eyes widened, as recognition took over his face. “N-naruto? When did you get back?” Naruto smiled gleefully, looking back at the man. “Just today, Shikamaru! Long time, no see, eh?” Shikamaru nodded. “Yeah, it has… You’ve sure grown.” The lady with the fan just stared in awe. This is that shrimp? She thought with amazement.
Naruto continued, not really looking at the lady with the fan quite yet, “Wait, Shikamaru is my opponent?” Shikamaru looked confused. “Opponent? What are you talking about? It’s a pain, but I was picking up some documents here.” Naruto went closer to the lady with the fan, whose face backed away from Naruto’s. “Umm… who are you again?” he asked. The lady responded with shock in her voice. “You don’t remember?” Velidina shook her head. “You’ve forgotten Temari? She asked wonderously. Naruto looked back at Velidina, then back at Temari. “T-temari?” the lady with the fan smiled. “You got it.” Shikamaru looked past Naruto, to see where the voice had came from. When he saw Velidina, his face lightened. “Velidina, you’re back too?!” Velidina gave a small giggle and nodded. “Just got back today as well.”
It was at that time Tsunade spoke up. “Alright, that’s enough catching up for now. Your opponent is over there.” Tsunade pointed to the window, and Naruto walked over there and opened it up. When he looked outside, he saw someone familiar. “Kakashi-sensei?” he asked when his eyes came over a man with spiky hair like his, only white. The man’s own forehead protector was over his left eye, if you looked from the man’s point of view. The man looked up, and he raised his right hand. “Oi, Naruto. Long time, no see.” Naruto’s face lit up with excitement. “Hey, that reminds me.” Naruto said, jumping out the window to get to Kakashi. “I got a present for you.” Naruto took out a green-covered book when he got to Kakashi, with the title Make-Out Tactics. Kakashi’s eyes widened with surprise and pleasure, as he took the book gingerly from Naruto’s hands. All Naruto said was, “That was a really boring book, you know…” Just then, Jaraiya stepped into the room with everyone else, with Sakura and Velidina hanging out the windows, and started up a small chat with Tsunade. When Naruto gave Kakashi the book, Sakura and Velidina put their heads back inside.
When Naruto and Kakashi came back into the room, Naruto asked, “So Kakashi-sensei’s supposed to be my opponent?” Tsunade was the one who replied. “You’re only a third right, Naruto.” Everyone looked surprised, even Kakashi. Kakashi quickly got over it. “Hmm… change of plans?” Tsunade nodded. “See who just got back as well?” Jaraiya and Kakashi looked around the room, their eyes resting on Velidina’s frame. Kakashi smiled, only his eyes showing that he was. He knew where this was going. “Ahh, I see what you’re doing, Tsunade.” He turned back to the entire group. “You see, Naruto, you’re not the only one I’ll be facing. I’ll be facing Sakura and Velidina as well.” Jaraiya looked confused. “That girl over there is that little runt known as Velidina?” he asked, pointing at Velidina. Velidina blushed and nodded. “And I’ve become stronger, refining my known Jutsus and learning new ones.” She smirked. “All thanks to travel.” Kakashi cleared his throat to get their attention. “Well, you guys meet me at the third training grounds in an hour. Ciao.” With that and a wave of his hand, he disappeared behind smoke. Velidina voiced everyone’s thoughts. “He’s gone off to read that book, hasn’t he?”
On their walk, Naruto noticed Velidina didn’t take her right hand out of her pocket, and her left hand was covered in a bandage that Rock Lee might wear. When Naruto asked why that was, Velidina just looked away blushing, and asked if they had any fingerless gloves. Sakura gave Velidina an extra pair of her gloves, but confusion was evident on her face. “I have two sets of gloves, and I can always get some more later, if need be. If you cut off the fingers, then you have your fingerless gloves… Why did you want some?” Velidina didn’t answer, only silently took them from Sakura with her left hand, and turned into an alleyway as to not be seen. “What’s up with her?” Temari wondered.
Velidina, once in the alley, took her right hand out of her pocket. Naruto tried to look on, to see what all the secrecy was about. All he caught a glimpse of before Velidina put the now fingerless gloves on was some sort of black tattoo, in the shape of a slightly curved teardrop. Or that’s how it looked to him, since he didn’t get the best visual ever. Velidina seemed to notice Naruto’s presence, and turned around quickly, blushing. Naruto’s eyes widened, fearful that he had gotten caught. “H-hello, Naruto-kun… Shall we resume our walk to the rendezvous point?” Her voice was calm and held no hint of anger. Naruto sighed. <I’m safe… for now…> He thought. He nodded, and said, “Hai. Let’s go.”
Naruto and Velidina walked back to Sakura, Shikamaru, and Temari, who were in a deep conversation. Temari looked at Velidina’s hands, as the bandages had been taken off of her left hand, to be replaced by one of the gloves. “Everything went well, I presume?” She asked. Velidina nodded, and began to talk about jutsu either Shikamaru or Temari could teach her. Naruto saw his opportunity, and seized it. He called Sakura over and started to whisper. “Hey, Sakura… you won’t guess what I saw in the alley… Velidina’s hand that she’s covering up… it held a weird black tattoo thing…” Sakura looked astonished, and Naruto went on to describe it. “What do you think it was, Sakura-chan?” Sakura glanced over at Velidina, then whispered, “I don’t know… but to me, from what you described, it sounds like it could be a curse mark.” This time, Naruto’s eyes widened. “A curse mark? Are you sure?” Sakura shook her head. “Of course not, but still… you have to face the facts, and that’s what it sounds like to me…” At that, they both stared at Velidina. Naruto said after a moment, “Are you sure it isn’t a tattoo or something?”
Sakura shook her head. “Naruto you twit, what else makes sense? Why else would she try to hide it as much as possible, eh? Why else would she not want us to see what is on that hand? It fits.” Naruto pondered this. “But before, you said you weren’t sure…” Sakura glared at Naruto. “So I’m not allowed to think on it and change my mind?” She said rather angrily. Naruto cowered back. “Sorry, Sakura-chan… But think about it… Couldn’t it just be a burn or something? You generally don’t want to show those, do you? Don’t you think you’re just thinking of the most extreme thing possible?” Sakura nodded to Naruto’s own explanation. “Good points, Naruto… but I guess we’ll see what it is soon enough, right? But it will be on her terms, not ours.”
With that, Sakura walked back to the group, whose members were still talking to each other. Velidina noticed them come back and ran to them. “So, you guts ready now?” Sakura and Naruto looked at each other. “Hai. Let’s go.” Naruto grinned devilishly. “Let’s go kick Kakashi’s butt!” he shouted, pumping his left fist in the air. They all laughed except for Naruto, although they silently agreed.
Shikamaru and Temari waved to them as Sakura, Naruto and Velidina walked away. Naruto put a hand in the air, his way of waving back. They were going to where Kakashi awaited them, and where they’d have, hopefully, their final test.
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| Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 8:10 pm Post subject: |
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Oh no, Team Seven isn't in there long, actually, and there's actually a twist to what you might think will happen.
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| Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, I guess? As soon as I stop being lazy and type up the third chapter, I'll post it here.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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Haven't worked on typing this stuff in a while... I've been busy with completely original stories. v.v
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