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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 10:56 pm    Post subject: Maruko Aka Reply with quote

Name: Maruko Aka
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5  
Weight: 105 lbs

Appearance:
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    Race: Asian-American
    Hair: Long, black
    Eyes: pale grey, long thin scar from her left cheek across the bridge of her nose to her right cheek.
    Body: thin/normal
    Ethnicity: Kaze No Kuni



Rank: E Rank
Reputation: 50
Village: Sunagakure Konohagakure

    Fame: 0
    Title: Genin

Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Bow and Arrows
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Starting Inventory:
Bow/arrows-50 arrows
senbon-35
kunai-10
shuriken-10

Personality:
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Maruko is pretty independent as far as relationships go.  She doesn't push people away, but her cold, sarcastic manner isn't exactly inviting either.  She tends to be rather negative, always seeing what could, and probably will, go wrong in every situation.  She's mistrustful of people when she first meets them, but will warm up to you quickly if you prove yourself trustworthy to her.  She's extremely clumsy, her long limbs getting tangled alot, usually in the most impromptu moments.  Maruko tells lies and truths whenever the time calls for it, she doesn't tell either exclusively.  While she isn't very strong physically, she's got some book smarts and has alot of speed for someone as clumsy as she is.  Secretly she dislikes sleeping due to the occasional bad dream of her parents, but still gets it.  She's still deathly afraid of fire, and will freeze up the moment she sees it, taking her a little while for her to come to her senses and run.  A secret of hers is that she is fascinated by cooking and wishes to learn how when she gets the chance.




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Jutsus:
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Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: A very basic skill, without which a shinobi would become the laughing stock of the village. It allows them to escape ropes and similar simple restraints. However, advanced knots and heavier restraints than a simple rope may be too much for a basic skill like this to handle.

Name: Doku Kiri - Poison Mist
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: Without the need for any hand seals, the user will take a deep breath. By using a moderate amount of chakra and this special technique, they will then exhale a large cloud of poisonous gas. A very versatile technique, it can be more harmful than useful if not used correctly.


Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A skill that every self-respecting shinobi must have. It is based on concentrating chakra to the soles of one's feet and using it to stick to objects, which would allow one to walk on vertical surfaces and even upside down. This is also often used as chakra control training, since the soles of the feet are said to be the hardest place to control your chakra.

Name: Star Shower Style
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Bow, Good Chakra Control
Description: Practice of this style greatly improves the shinobi's rate of fire when using a bow. Also it lets them channel chakra into each shoot. This can be a quick charge that add a little when shooting rapidly, or alot into a single shot. This chakra increase the range of the arrow and adds extra damage. Lastly practioners of this art can add a flash of light at the end of a Flicker technique (or anything like it) rather than dirt or leaves. This is only a visual effect.

Name: Suiton: Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will expel a strong jet of water from their mouth. This attacks deals considerable pressure damage and is quite fast, but it's also very direct and, consequentially, not that hard to evade.



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Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:
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She's born in Sunagakure when her parents killed themselves and tried to kill her too by shoving her into a fire. That is why she's afraid of fire now.  She wasn't like other orphans in the fact that she just didn't care about the fact that she had no friends or family, she liked being on her own and to kill mercilessly and flawlessly.  Her purpose in life is to become the kazekage of her village.  Despite how cold and unfeeling she may seem on the surface, she's just scared of what she's becoming because she doesn't know why she likes to kill or why her head screams at her to kill every single hour of the day. Maruko is also afraid that she might be going crazy.

Maruko was an archer-ninja, so when she heard of an archer in Konoha that could train her, she was fairly excited and left with Shizuka, a fellow ninja who was going to visit the Hokage.  Along the way, Shizuka and Maruko started to form a friendship.  When they arrived in Konoha and met with the Hokage, Shizuka was offered to stay, along with Maruko.  They accepted and decided to stay in Konoha, becoming Leaf ninja.  While staying there, Maruko formed a stronger bond with Shizuka and began to train with the archer ninja Alli.  After some training, and with the Chuunin exams coming up, Maruko decided to enter and was sent up against a boy named Locron, losing to him.  This embarassing failure led her to train even harder, beating herself up for the fight.  Not long after this, she met up with Shizuka again at night, who turned her into a vampire.


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Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Konoha
Fame: 0
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Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 50 arrows, 35 senbons, 10 kunai, 10 shuriken

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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 11:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bloodlines from the show are closed, please pick something else.
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Shinobi Rank: Hokage, S ~ Chuunin, C ~ Jounin, S ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Iwakagure ~ Konohagakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 80
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 100 ft. of Metal Thread, Shinsou, Fan of Furious Flames, Righteous Guard of Madara, Summon Tattoos (Shuriken, Kunai, Windmills), Summon Scroll (Large Med Kit), Small Med Kit, Summoning Jewerly, Symbiote. Inversion Summon Scroll Located In His Office In Konoha ~ Customized Shortbow, Summoning Quiver (Customized Arrows, High Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ See Inventory

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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 12:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're strengths and weaknesses are not balanced, it's impossible to have 'none yet' without an actual bloodline, and your background is too short. It must meet the five line requirement.
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Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 4:31 pm    Post subject: oops Reply with quote

oops sorry about the yet thing... i had a bloodline and changed it and must have forgotten to change that as well...
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 4:39 pm    Post subject: edited Reply with quote

changed and edited
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 5:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not very strong and bad at taijutsu are quite similar.
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Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 6:34 pm    Post subject: actually... Reply with quote

i beg to differ. what i meant by taijutsu was the actual movement and not just how strong you are. you can be very strong and still not be good at taijutsu. i meant the actual forms of taijutsu.
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Village: Konoha
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PostPosted: Sat May 24, 2008 11:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, here's what I see wrong:

1.  Not to pick on ya, but 120 seems a little big for a female who's 5'4'' at 13.  But, I'll leave that up to you.  ^_^ ''''
2.  Your "Race" is what ethnic background you are (Japanese, which is what it looks like, American, etc.).
3.  Your "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from.  Seeing that you're in Sunagakure, you're more than likely from "Kaze no Kuni (Wind Country)", unless you can explain in your "Background" otherwise.
4.  Take out the "( )", please.
5.  Please put down how many of each weapon you have in your Inventory (Arrows, Senbons, etc.).

Other than that, looks pretty good.
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Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
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Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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PostPosted: Sat May 24, 2008 9:11 pm    Post subject: heh Reply with quote

Maruko went on a crash course diet.^_^ Also i changed the weak taijutsu to pessimistic or a negatin=ve outlook on life. Hope that's ok.
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Village: Konoha
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Inventory: 50 arrows, 35 senbons, 10 kunai, 10 shuriken

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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Move the "Kaze no Kuni" to the "Ethnicity" part, and put "Sunagakure" back in the "Village" part.  Also, put a space between "Fighting Style" and "Starting Inventory", looks cluttered by the way you have it.



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Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
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Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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