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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: Post 4
Seiko looked over to Sazaku and wondered if he was alright. He would offer him lunch soon but it seemed to be the wrong time as he could see he was busy. He went back to his training and called forth the chakra into his sword. He calmed himself wondering how much more it would take to learn the jutsu he was trying to learn. The sword took it's familiar glint of chakra and then Seiko took a deep breath as he focused the chakra in the sword to envision a tornado. He then took a mighty swing in a circle and a slightly bigger last of wind shot forward. However, he noticed this wind was different as it cut some blade of grass and spiraled bit.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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"Shirotou - Kitsuo Shikon!!" commanded Sazaku as he brought his katana back to his shoulder, approaching another tree. Those cuts had been way too deep and had struck the wrong body points, the triangle was imperfect whereas it should have been perfect if the jutsu was performed successfully. Raising the katana again, he pressed himself outwards once more into at attack, the katana overlaying into a downwards stroke toward the left, snapping the hilt over and into a follow-up slash and slashing backwards, raising it's arm to it's pitch as he stood with his back to the tree, stabbing the sword backwards before plunging it back outwards..better but still not nearly perfect.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: Post 5
Seiko panted a bit as he had triggered Limit Break far too many times in one day. It wasn't that it was taxing on his chakra, but constantly straining to keep his strength up to hold the sword was a bother. He focused and relaxed to allow his body to go about collecting his chakra and could feel the flow go into the sword as it became weighted all over again. "Has to be bigger this time. Much bigger." He said as he looked at the sword for an instant and then took a massive swing forward in a circle. As he did, a small funnel shape took with the blast of wind that came out. It moved several feet but did nothing but cut some grass and move a few rocks. _________________ Tamotsu Says: Relax. No seriously... I'ma kunai you to death if you don't.
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Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
Riviere, Siela
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: |
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"Hmm, my swordplay is sloppy, especially since this is a new art, however my swordplay has never been like this, Hmm." Spoke Sazaku to himself, concentrating forwards before slashing outwards into a burst of slashes, lashing outwards towards the tree with everything he had. His rage was building underneath every single slice he lead until at last, he delivered one final slash outwards, nearly cutting down the three with the sword, however did not cut it down. He hung his head somewhat as he thought, he could not cut the tree completely. What was wrong with him? He should have been better than this. _________________

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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 2:24 am Post subject: |
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OOC: Post 6
Seiko relaxed and began to wonder how long it would be before this calm of the storm would last and the real tempest began. He had always been told he needed to be ready when the time came. He never let a person down, but his doubts began to take hold on him. He looked down as the thought of the many ways he failed his friend Tamotsu and the first love of his life. How his failure lead to the end of his team and his lover's life. He closed his eyes to hide the gleam of sadness and then made the sword light up with energy. He held it with a firm grip and then took a massive circular spin with all his might. As he did, a much larger funnel took shape and began a small path doing light damage before disappearing. _________________ Tamotsu Says: Relax. No seriously... I'ma kunai you to death if you don't.
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Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:08 am Post subject: |
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Releasing himself form his rage of battle that he had previously entered, Sazaku began to grow in determination, feeding on his own willpower as his gri over the sword changed, shifted. He was beginning to learn, or rather relearn, the art of the sword and this would be but a stepping stone to him, he knew as much. Hefting the sword with increased prowess, Sazaku prepared to utilize the art. He broke his calm into a forwards rush, his legs pressing him forwards as his blade sung low. He approached the three swiftly and before he knew it, he was upon it, his arms moving in unison. _________________

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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:21 am Post subject: |
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OOC: Post 7, Final post as I am using the last 20 TP I have to cut the cost down.
Seiko panted as he stood there holding the sword. His face was drenched with the sweat and made his body glow as he held his left arm out. The massive sword extend with it, as if almost an attachment to the frame of is body. His eyes showed the severity of his training as he pressed himself too hard and the shaking of his once still body was the clue that soon it would shut down. He took his breaths to relax his heart, for it rushed faster then the winds. The sword felt as if it were a great weight, almost as if he were Atlas and the world rested beside him. He collected the fragments of chakra in him and pulled into the massive 4 part sword. The sword gave an illumination to rival the sun and his eyes changed. This would the his last "Hurrah" and he would press all he had into it.
"Limit Break: Finishing..." He gripped sword as if to break the hilt and then took a massive swing in a circular motion. As he did the blast of wind that shot forward became a massive tornado and ripped through several trees, destroying a small chunk of forest. "... Touch." He said as dropped the sword and passed out from exhaustion. _________________ Tamotsu Says: Relax. No seriously... I'ma kunai you to death if you don't.
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Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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Exhaustion was slowly reaching him, however he would not let it, raising the sword into a mirage of slashes, his arms plunging the sword forwards and lashing outwards from his body as he progressed forwards. Sweat drained from his brow as Sazaku used his ability to control his muscles to place the blade's sword slashes right on par, however he could still sense that he hadn't quite completely perfected the art once it was over. Digging his sword into the ground, he decided to take a break and walked towards Seiko to find him unconscious. He pulled out his waterskin and poured some water down his throat, making sure not to drown him in water. _________________

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Tsubame Inuzuka
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:26 pm Post subject: |
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Seiko was in the dark recesses of his mind thinking about his life. He had long been hiding his emotions because of his past and secrets. How he lied about certain events and always had tailed Tamotsu to check on him every now and then. He then could feel cool rush of something flow through his body and the darkness began to fade quickly as his eyes opened. He could see Sazaku above him giving him some water and he began to choke a moment. "Saz.. zaku." He said as he regained his breath. "What's wrong? Why'd you stop training?" _________________ Tamotsu Says: Relax. No seriously... I'ma kunai you to death if you don't.
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Mitsuki Seiko
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:45 pm Post subject: |
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"You fell unconscious, There was no way I was just going to leave you passed out, stupid." said Sazaku, a tear straining along his countenance as he managed a warm and comfortable smile and offered his hand to Seiko. He would help Seiko back up to his feet and then returned to his training, walking towards where he had previously been training. Whispering the words 'Shirotou - Kitsuo Shikon' he rushed towards, his arms and legs moving in unison as he cut down the tree with little to no effort at last and smiles as he walks aside it, that was when the messenger bird flapped down and landed on his arm. "Sorry, gotta go, tell Tamotsu I'm not deserting, but there's one like me in Kirigakure, so I feel 'obliged' to train him."
Jutsu Learned
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Tsubame Inuzuka
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