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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 3:30 pm    Post subject: charoo hanibi Reply with quote

Name: charoo hanibi
Age: 18
Gender: m
Height:6' 1''  
Weight:212 lbs.

Appearance:  Very cherfull, usually wears a long black robe with the symbol demon, has many scars from training with peaple above average height, white skinned looks like a thug kinda, wears earings in shape of knives (since they are) in his ears.

Race: white  
Hair: blue silver larged spiked
Eyes: dark blue
Body: large, muscled
Ethnicity: Hi no Kuni (Fire Country)

Level/Rank:  B-rank missing-nin
Village:  None (Konohagakure)
Bloodline:  none
Main/Favored Weapon: unikurin
Element: Doton (Earth)  
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu.  
Starting Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon, wire 50ft, Poison Senbon 30,  2 knives

Strengths:

Intelligent.
Fast Reflexes
Truthful
Able to think on his feet.
great  fighter
great tiajustu
above average ninjustu
high chackra pool
good friend  
trains hard
will never give up
great swordsman

Weaknesses:

Not as attentive as he could/should be.
Easily angered.
Rash.
Not a very good liar.
gets reckless
has no remorse
bad judge of charecter
no sense of direction
bad at genjustu
too serious
not that good at being sneaky
deaths of father and mother hount him
easily swayed by genjustu

Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, Kawarimi, Nawanuke, Kinobori, Suimen Hokou, Genjutsu Kai

Sennen Goroshi [One Thousand Years of Pain]
Rank: E
Requirement: None
Description: An end-all Taijutsu maneuver involving just the first two fingers of each hand extended together and then driven into the ass of the ninja's opponent. Surprising and painful, this technique not only inflicts damage, but also thoroughly humiliates the ninja's opponent. Anyone with fingers and no morals can use this technique. A variation of this jutsu is also used with a kunai and explosive tags.

Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial]
Rank: S
Requirements: None
Description: The ground quickly loosens below the opponent and causes everything in the area to completely sink hundreds of meters deep within the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure on the opponent will immobilize their ability to even move a finger.

Doton: Kekkai Doroudomo [Earth Release: Earth Barrier Prison]
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: A Doton (earth element) ninjutsu technique where the ninja plants their hands on the ground and creates a dome of pure dirt and rock around their enemy. The dome has a layer of chakra inside it that keeps it together, so that any damage done to it or the ground is instantly repaired. While in control of this clay prison, the ninja using this technique also draws out the chakra of their enemy or enemies, taking it for them self. In this manner, the ninja can keep this clay prison up almost indefinitely, making it a very incredible ninjutsu.

Kakuremino no Jutsu [Magic Cloak of Invisibility Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique that momentarily turns the user invisible, and allows them a quick escape if need be. The user however can still be smelled or heard by the opponent.

Konoha Shunshin no Jutsu [Leaf Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from previous current position in a flurry of leaves and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.

Bloodline jutsus:   




Jutso want to learn
justo that make me stronger

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Born in the Leaf Village, Charoo was raised to be a fighter by his father and a healer by his mom. His life was a decent one till his mother and father were killed by a strange man. Charoo promised to get revenge and is going to the Acadamy to learn how to become a ninja to kill the man who killed his family. He trains every day to learn how to do justu, and control his sword with little success, but his Taijustu is above average. He loves nature and technology, he loves to fight to swim, to dance, and to eat. He loves people and will go out off his way to help them. He hates bullies and thugs, and he'll fight them till they give up. He is a Genin since he just started wanting to be a ninja since he family just died like 5-6 mounths ago.

during his new life as a ninja his friends have become enemys he left his village so he would not have to deel with it


Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 36

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 3:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your template isn't bad. Though, you need 2 more weaknesses. Also, I think the Shinigami Clan belongs to Sunagakure. I could be wrong though. Ask ballian.

Also, But some more creativity into the character.
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Village: Sand~None(Mist)~None(Sand)
Training Points: 5
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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 4:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zeke it is 2 per village and 2 missing ninja
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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yea, village doesn't matter. Also you can have Shunpo starting out. And you won't have your father's zanpakuto. They are a part of the shinigami, so in you hands it's useless. But if you want a sword that you can't release, knock yourself out.
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Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 5:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YuweaCurtis wrote:
Yea, village doesn't matter. Also you can have Shunpo starting out. And you won't have your father's zanpakuto. They are a part of the shinigami, so in you hands it's useless. But if you want a sword that you can't release, knock yourself out.


Actually it isn't, shinigami receive their zanpakuto from the shinigami teachers, The zanpakuto would be more arrogant to the new user, since he/she is no longer with the previous.
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Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~Sannin~~~Chuunin
Village: Suna~~~Suna~~~Suna
Training Points: 240
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 1:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, here's what's wrong:

1.  Need more description on your "Appearance", and/or provide a pic.
2.  17's too old for a Genin, unless you can explain why.
3.  Edit Height and Weight, if you edit your age.
4.  Don't put "mut" for your Race, please specify.
5.  Your "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from, and seeing that you're going to be in Konohagakure, then you're more than likely from "Hi no Kuni (Fire Country)", or, if you're going to be in Sunagakure, then it's going to be "Kaze no Kuni (Wind Country)".
6.  Need more Strengths and Weaknesses.
7.  Though it's not necessary, it's good to put down what Jutsus you would like to learn, just name a few, so that you'll have a better chance of getting a Sensei.
8.  Being a "good cook" isn't a strength.
9.  Can't have "great" as a Genin.  Must be either "above average", "average", or "below average".
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Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hows that let me know by pm
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Shinobi Rank: missing nin B/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
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Forum Credit: 36

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 2:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, looks a LOT better now!  Objections to accept?
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
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Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok all done now can i rp please please please =O
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Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 36

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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gah, a shinigami in Konoha... he can be Seiko's student... >.>

Anyways, I'll let another mod look it over before saying yes.
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Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure
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