Homepage  FAQ   Search   
Memberlist   Advertise   Join! (free)   		  Profile   Log in to check your private messages   Log in 




Remove These Ads By Registering!


Starkin
Goto page Previous  1, 2, 3  Next
 
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Naruto RP Center V3.5 Forum Index -> Custom Bloodlines, Jutsus, Organizations/Groups, and Weapons. -> Custom Bloodlines
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 12:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Konoha, that's Allie's home village.

_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Eric Hatake
Status: Offline

Honored Retirees
Honored Retirees

Joined: 20 Mar 2007
Posts: 1185
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This clan seems really powerful when used right, but I'm glad to see sideeffects from using the more powerful stuff.

However, a few things here worry me and AJ.

One is that Jounins can 'stablize' the chakra bleed. I doubt that kind of thing can happen unless they are a medic nin or a Gonin/sannin/kage something that requires perfect chakra use. I would be ok with they could hold it off every now and then, but not for forever and a day.

Another thing, if this clan passes, you had better make sure all members RP the sideeffects accordingly. I can see new members joining this clan, and abusing the power without the consequences.

Finally, it should be a LOT of pain for Genin when they experience chakra bleed (since their chakra pool is underdeveloped), moderate for Chunin, and then slightly painful for the Jounin when they can't hold it in.

AJ: Agreed.
_________________
Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin
Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address MSN Messenger
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
The wings don't lose much chakra as a jounin, until there dimissed. Then all that chakra is gone.  I'll edit where the bleed still occurs.
It's edited.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Well if Prowl gets Konoha, can I be unspecified? Haldur suggested it, saying I can take the "unspecified" slot of his clan.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Uchiha Katsuga
Status: Offline

Head of Forum Moderation
Head of Forum Moderation

Joined: 11 Jan 2007
Posts: 3747
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you're going to have an "advanced" version of the Morning Peacock, then you'll need to put down that you'll have to open up to the Sixth Gate, and it's going to be a Kinjutsu.
_________________


Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It's not really an advance, it's a weaker technique that Allie develops. It doesn't require gates, it's just named the same thing because of the similiar appearance it creates when striking.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Uchiha Katsuga
Status: Offline

Head of Forum Moderation
Head of Forum Moderation

Joined: 11 Jan 2007
Posts: 3747
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ah, nevermind, read it wrong, heh, sorry.  ^_^ '''''
_________________


Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
And if you're wondering, Ginrei Kujaku is going to be her Starkin weapon. Meh, maybe I should do a clan sign up. It's already me and Haldur....
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Rin Shouten
Status: Offline

Trainee
Trainee

Joined: 01 Oct 2007
Posts: 793
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 6:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'll make a character for the bloodline, I have two chara slots left.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Rin Shouten
Sazaku Norimune
Tsubame Inuzuka
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Gonin ~ Jounin ~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 800
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 0

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
YuweaCurtis
Status: Offline

RPG Moderator
RPG Moderator

Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1206
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 6:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Additons Made;
Bloodline Limit - Constellation
Bloodline Jutsus - Starstream, Semiauto, Assimilate Familiar, Abduct / Retrieve

Well so far it's Me, Haldur and Rin. So after those are looked over pwease approve.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Naruto RP Center V3.5 Forum Index -> Custom Bloodlines, Jutsus, Organizations/Groups, and Weapons. -> Custom Bloodlines All times are GMT - 5 Hours
Goto page Previous  1, 2, 3  Next
Page 2 of 3

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum

Card File  Gallery  Forum Archive
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group

Skinned By Lavathing9, of the Naruto RP Center, This Skin Is ONLY For Naruto RP Center, Unless Given By The Creator.

Forum Topics and Posts Are Copyrighted and Protected by a Creative Commons License.
Forum Best Viewed In Firefox (Optimized For Version 3.0)
Forum Best Viewed In A Screen Resolution of 1280x1024.


NRC Affiliates
Naruto Legends Forum
Visit This Topic
Create your own free forum | Buy a domain to use with your forum