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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:25 am    Post subject: Migota Daikonran Reply with quote

Name: Migota Daikonran
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5'4
Weight: 123 lb.

Appearance: The first thing you would notice about Migota is her clan characteristics. She has two small cat ears on the top of her head. They both have fur that is white with a pinkish tint. She has long, chocolate brown hair with streaks the color of the fur on her ears. She usually dosn't do anything with it, exept on special ocasions when it is in a tight bun. She has silver cat eyes, which are covered most of the time by her bangs. Her skin is a pinkish color, which is the result of her clan. She almost always wears blue tee shirt with fishnet sleaves which are attached to silver rings. The shirt has two holes in the back because she has pale, white feathered wings. She also wears rather loose denim capris with the usual ninja sandals. Her leaf headband is on her upper arm. She keeps her Nunchakus in a holster on a leather belt which also holds other things. Over the outfit her she wears a blue, loose fitting robe type outfit. She has a long cat tail which has the same colored fur as her ears and often keeps a red ribbon tied to it, becuase it's her good luck charm.
Race: Nekojin
Hair: Long chocolate brown with natural white streaks that have a pink tint
Eyes: Silver cat eyes
Body: Skinny and a few curves, but thats about it
Ethnicity: Hi no Kuni

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Leaf
Bloodline:  Nekojin Isan
Main/Favored Weapon: Nunchakus
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: 1 Nunchakus, a long rope, 5 shuriken, 10 kunei knives

Strengths:
Fighting in water
Swimming
Ninjutsu
Her agility
A very deturmined person

Weaknesses:
Her genjutsu
Isn't as strong as she wants to be
Can't hurt an animal
Dosn't pay attention alot
Gets bored easily
Dosn't take injury well
Afraid of snakes

Jutsus:
Name: Suisei Hane [Aquatic Wing]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Nekojin Wings
Description: This improves the nekojin's ability to swim by temporarily mutating their wings. The feathers withdraw into the skin, and a slick membrane grows between the left behind bones. These new fins allow for faster travel by to taking the rapid flapping normally used for hovering to propel you through the water. This can be combined with Hane Seicho to help swim against strong tides. You can swim quick longer with normal sized wings, but the large ones can provide a quick boost in speed.

Bloodline jutsus:
Wind Control- Daikonran can control the wind to a small degree. It allows them to deflect small projectiles and blow people off their feet. It gets stronger the more experienced the shinobi becomes.
Flight (2 feet per rank)
Strong Lungs - Can breath underwater a long time

Jutsus that wants to learn:
Name: Kosei no Kobushi [Fist of the Just]
Type: Taijutsu/ Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Bloodline strongly attuned to earth and some kind of natural earth control.
Description: This style allows the user to create small portion of temporary armor and teaches them elaborate grappling maneuvers. When used, this style you can turn dirt and other lose earth in armor. This is usually just around the fist in order to hit harder, but may be used to defend limbs and portions of the body. The armor can be formed quickly, considering there's lose enough earth around. This armor is shabby and will brake in one to three hits. Being law enforcement, the Horitsu added in grappling technique, because sometimes you just need to apprehend the foe. These grapples and pin are also couple with a few pressure point techniques, immoblizing then paralyzing the target. Finally, at the peak of this style is bone breaking and spine snapping skills, usable only by Jounin and higher.

Name: Yureru Nami [Swaying Waves]
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Bloodline strongly attuned to water and some kind of natural water control.
Description: This style increases the users water control and teaches them counter style techniques. It's movements mimic waves, receding like the tide and crashing upon the enemy like waves. It's evasive techniques are designed to keep one close to the enemy and take advantage of the small opening created by them missing. This is then normally followed up by a blow to a decently vital spot or to knock the opponent down (and possibly away in any direction). It motions are wide sweeping blows and quick throws.


Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Migota was born in the deep forest near Konoha. Several other families in the clan lived near them and as soon as she could talk and walk at the same time Migota was making friends. She was a very likable person and still is. As a child she found an intrest in being a ninja because her elder brother was a part of the anbu. She never was one for the throwing weapons but was very agile, more agile then most clan members her age. Migota began going to village more and more, because she wanted to attend the academy. She was a good ninja but didn't really pay attention in the classes, but luckly she passed. She moved in with her older brother in the village but still very often visits her family.


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No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
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Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty
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Forum Credit: N/A

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

For bloodline limits it should be

Bloodline Limits:
Wind Control- Daikonran can control the wind to a small degree. It allows them to deflect small projectiles and blow people off their feet. It gets stronger the more experienced the shinobi becomes.
Flight (2 feet per rank)
Strong Lungs - Can breath underwater a long time

And as a Daikonran you'd only be able to learn Kaze Dansu. You only get one element, those other two are for Horitsu and Churitsu, respectively. Also if you want to you can start with this jutsu


Quote:
Name: Suisei Hane (Aquatic Wing)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Nekojin Wings
Description: This improves the nekojin's ability to swim by temporarily mutating their wings. The feathers withdraw into the skin, and a slick membrane grows between the left behind bones. These new fins allow for faster travel by to taking the rapid flapping normally used for hovering to propel you through the water. This can be combined with Hane Seicho (Wing Growth) to help swim against strong tides. You can swim quick longer with normal sized wings, but the large ones can provide a quick boost in speed.



If you want to use water you would be a Churitsu and you get

Water Molding- Churitsu can control water to a small degree. This allows them to cause people to slip, or they can shoot out streams of it (enough to cause kunai like damage). Stronger shinobi can block things with water and hit them with waves.

rather than Wind Control.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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Forum Credit: 0

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

please be more specific towards your strengths and weaknesses.
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Sunagakure
Training Points: 230
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Forum Credit: 35

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 3:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh my god, if one person does the race / ethinicity wrong I'm going to kill myself. Your race would be Japanese; ethnicity the country of which you're born. You have more strengths than weaknesses and we would prefer if you detail your physical / mental weaknesses better. Put actual numbers for your inventory and just generally finish up.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think the race would be Nekojin. That's what I've been putting on mine, and so have the others approved. And they aren't quite human but it's your decision....
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Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nekojin is a Race, yes, but Syra's right on about the "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from.  Seeing that you're in Konohagakure, then you're most likely be from "Hi no Kuni (Fire Country).  Also, anything in "( )", take them out, not to sound mean, but it makes the profile look tacky.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Changed it alittle


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So you're a Churitsu (Water User), but you appear as a Daikonran (wind user) because of one of your parents?
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had meant to put wind as her element. I changed it


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you can't learn Fist of the Just or Swaying waves. But other than that I think this can be approved.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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