Itichi, Masura Completed

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:28 pm Post subject:

Well, that explains it. Personally I wouldn't bother making a fuss about it, it's a little god-modded of a clan. There's many other alternatives plus no clan whatsoever.

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Masura · Status: Offline Member Joined: 19 Nov 2007 Posts: 21

But Zieg gave me the ok to use it. And when i chose to make this character it wasn't closed. I am going to let you know now, i am going to fight this as He has given me permission to use it via pm.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:00 pm Post subject:

We'll need him to PM me or post here in confirmation. Also, please continue to work on this.

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Masura · Status: Offline Member Joined: 19 Nov 2007 Posts: 21

I am.. just having trouble with choosing my jutsus and dont' know what my inventory will be. Not used to this kind of template so if you want to help me please do. Or contact me via my msn. abarirenji@hotmail.com
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:14 pm Post subject:

You only start with the three basic jutsu. And you have a limited selection of weapons as it is.

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Kaeor · Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:26 pm Post subject:

Hmm.. Syra is it possible to get a review of a bloodline/clan. Because seeing through any genjutsu at stage one seems quite overpowered.

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:37 pm Post subject:

Hm... I don't know. We probably should look into that. How about for now you have a dormant version?

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Masura · Status: Offline Member Joined: 19 Nov 2007 Posts: 21

I will take it.. I was meaning to have it right off the bat. I was going to like have it dormant and it get awaken in a very needy situation.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:59 am Post subject:

This is quite well done. I only see to minor problems. First of all, I suggest you put wazikashi into your inventory if that's your favoured weapon.

And secondly, I'd like for you to change your physical weakness. The stop and go thing doesn't really equate to a high speed.

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Masura · Status: Offline Member Joined: 19 Nov 2007 Posts: 21

made the needed edit.
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