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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:56 pm    Post subject: Zero Ordi Reply with quote

Name: Zero Ordi
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height:   5"6'
Weight: 128 lbs

Appearance:

Race: Caucasian/ Partial Japanese
Hair: Sunswept, Silver
Eyes: Grey
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Konaha

Level/Rank: Genin
Village:  Konohagakure
Bloodline: None really
Main/Favored Weapon: His blades
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: Two Handcrafted Wakizashi, 20 Shurikens, 5 kunai

Strengths: Fast, works well with a blade, very outgoing, determined, decently smart

Weaknesses: Halting is hard at a sudden, accuracy is questionable, overly inflated ego, easily broken, hates to wait for anything

Jutsus: Kiwarimi, Bunshin, Henge

Bloodline jutsus: N/A

Jutsus that wants to learn: Cutting Sword Jutsu, Peregrine Falcon Drop, Rising Impact Palm, Roof tile Shuriken, Information Cards

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:He started out as an average poor kid with a huge ego. He was never really liked until after the one day when he was hunting a mad moose tried to kill him. He was saved by a ninja who struck down the mighty beast with one finger, when Zero couldn't with a hunting knife. Zero came back to average school the next day with a story to tell. He thought about it for months and decided that he could be who he wanted to be and he wanted to be a ninja. In the acadamy, he was naturally skilled in his taijutsu and he breezed through the basic jutsus like the wind. He graduated the first year. He is still egocentric, but at least he can prove of some use that isn't related to showing off in the mirror that is not valiance. He enjoys swordplay and battling strong enemies.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Speed makes it hard to slow down,


Don't like that and you cant have katana's only Wakazashi if you want to go for that.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Please add 2 or 3 more weakness.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay I fixed it up.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your first weakness, is that supposed to be "can't easily control his movement at high speeds"? That sounds better and is easier to understand. And what exactly do you mean by "easily broken"?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It means he is easy to get information from with torture. His will isn't strong when he feels a stronger enemies strength.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, since you can apply that to genjutsu it kind of makes it two weaknesses. I see no real problems besides an extremely confusing background. You might have to edit that a bit.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I fixed up the background a bit. How is it.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I suppose it's okay although it doesn't say much about him...

Oh wait, I forgot. You need exact numbers on your inventory.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Done
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