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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 12:36 pm Post subject: Re: Akuma Ude Youshiki - Ozanaru Clan
OzanaruSyra wrote:
Within the forest was millions of native demon inhabitants.
Demons... Right, explain. This is some big forest. This is sounding like Inuyasha
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However, as time went on, their demonic power faded into their human selves.
Doesn't make sense. Explain. How did they get demonic power? A little sexual interactions going on...
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To counter-act this startling development a new tradition was started. At the death of the father, his demonic aura would be forced into his arm and removed, to be replaced with his son's arm during the time of their shift to adulthood.
Meh... so your passing down the same arm for generation to generation? *cough* [That's some arm]
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Demon Traits: Demons themselves have many unique traits. Physically, they're quite different from humans. They don't use jutsu like a human would; instead, they all have natural innate abilities. Although they do use chakra as well, it is concentrated in the opposite form and will stop them from using jutsu. Most demons can't or don't bother learning jutsu as it is, relying on natural powers and strengths.
They are physically different than humans.. Wow. How did they mate? [You refer to your clan as Half Demon]. Chakra is also not Natural Energy. It is spiritual, the same would be used by a demon. Though, if your saying "innate ablities" you are saying: they are born with what ever power they want.
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Demons who appear similar to humans, for example, would birth from 4 - 5 months. They also develop quickly, maturing in shorter years than what would be comparable.
So demon's are some what similar to humans? Better question, are they humanoid?
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Spoiler:
First Seal : Above Wrist
Requirements - Akuma Ude Youshiki Jutsu
Abilities - 1 D Ranked Jutsu; Weak ability strength; 1 Demonic Stat; Demonic Stat + 5%
Second Seal: Below Elbow
Requirements - First Seal
Abilities - 1 D Ranked & 1 C Ranked Jutsu; Average ability strength; Demonic Stat +10%;
Third Seal: Below Shoulder
Requirements - Second Seal
Abilities - 1 C Ranked & 1 B Ranked Jutsu; Average ability strength; 2 Demonic Stats; Demonic Stat + 15%;
Fourth Seal: Beside Shoulder
Requirements - Third Seal
Abilities - 1 B Ranked & 1 A Ranked Jutsu; Strong Ability strength; Demonic Stat + 20%
Fifth Seal: Beside Heart
Requirements - Fourth Seal
Abilities - 1 S Ranked Jutsu; High ability strength and strong physical enhancement; Demonic Stat +25%
Seventh Seal: Opposite Arm
Requirements - Fourth Seal
Abilities - 1 D ranked Jutsu & 1 C Ranked Jutsu & 1 B Ranked Jutsu & 1 A Ranked Jutsu; High ability strength; 3 Demonic Stats; Demonic Stats +35%;
More info on these seals. You don't get to skimp on this, because what stops me from creating a seal that allows me to make S-ranked jutsu. And since your demons don't expend chakra, what natural force do they use. This should be explained. [I was under the impression that demons use spiritual energy to fabricate their abilities. But under your definition, this really could be explained better.
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Any Seals used will weaken the body to some degree. This will lower speed, strength, agility, chakra pool, etc., until the person rests again. The amount of weakening and time it takes to recover is dependent on strength of the Seal and the length of time it's used.
Meh.. I don't undersand. What are the seals and how do they work. How you've made this work: I have a seal, therefore, I get access to any jutsu I want. Woot. <_< No, you don't.
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Name: The Hocca
Description: Those who can use the Hocca can instinctively sense it in others. Anyone with a demonic aura or infernal aura can be sensed. Typically, people with a demonic aura are normal demons while those with infernal auras are humans / demons that have been corrupted, or has the scent of Hell. The Hocca sense is no more powerful than sight, and requires the person to be quite close to detect them (maximum fifty feet). It can't detect any details besides whether they have a strong aura, weak aura or no aura. Ozanaru and Mi'Godh gain the Hocca as part of the bloodline limit; Mizuno must give a SA slot.
Wait... You said demons were in the forest!!! When were forests in Hell? Am I missing something? _________________
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:14 pm Post subject: Re: Akuma Ude Youshiki - Ozanaru Clan
Masakado wrote:
OzanaruSyra wrote:
Within the forest was millions of native demon inhabitants.
Demons... Right, explain. This is some big forest. This is sounding like Inuyasha
Quote:
However, as time went on, their demonic power faded into their human selves.
Doesn't make sense. Explain. How did they get demonic power? A little sexual interactions going on...
Quote:
To counter-act this startling development a new tradition was started. At the death of the father, his demonic aura would be forced into his arm and removed, to be replaced with his son's arm during the time of their shift to adulthood.
Meh... so your passing down the same arm for generation to generation? *cough* [That's some arm]
Quote:
Demon Traits: Demons themselves have many unique traits. Physically, they're quite different from humans. They don't use jutsu like a human would; instead, they all have natural innate abilities. Although they do use chakra as well, it is concentrated in the opposite form and will stop them from using jutsu. Most demons can't or don't bother learning jutsu as it is, relying on natural powers and strengths.
They are physically different than humans.. Wow. How did they mate? [You refer to your clan as Half Demon]. Chakra is also not Natural Energy. It is spiritual, the same would be used by a demon. Though, if your saying "innate ablities" you are saying: they are born with what ever power they want.
Quote:
Demons who appear similar to humans, for example, would birth from 4 - 5 months. They also develop quickly, maturing in shorter years than what would be comparable.
So demon's are some what similar to humans? Better question, are they humanoid?
Quote:
Spoiler:
First Seal : Above Wrist
Requirements - Akuma Ude Youshiki Jutsu
Abilities - 1 D Ranked Jutsu; Weak ability strength; 1 Demonic Stat; Demonic Stat + 5%
Second Seal: Below Elbow
Requirements - First Seal
Abilities - 1 D Ranked & 1 C Ranked Jutsu; Average ability strength; Demonic Stat +10%;
Third Seal: Below Shoulder
Requirements - Second Seal
Abilities - 1 C Ranked & 1 B Ranked Jutsu; Average ability strength; 2 Demonic Stats; Demonic Stat + 15%;
Fourth Seal: Beside Shoulder
Requirements - Third Seal
Abilities - 1 B Ranked & 1 A Ranked Jutsu; Strong Ability strength; Demonic Stat + 20%
Fifth Seal: Beside Heart
Requirements - Fourth Seal
Abilities - 1 S Ranked Jutsu; High ability strength and strong physical enhancement; Demonic Stat +25%
Seventh Seal: Opposite Arm
Requirements - Fourth Seal
Abilities - 1 D ranked Jutsu & 1 C Ranked Jutsu & 1 B Ranked Jutsu & 1 A Ranked Jutsu; High ability strength; 3 Demonic Stats; Demonic Stats +35%;
More info on these seals. You don't get to skimp on this, because what stops me from creating a seal that allows me to make S-ranked jutsu. And since your demons don't expend chakra, what natural force do they use. This should be explained. [I was under the impression that demons use spiritual energy to fabricate their abilities. But under your definition, this really could be explained better.
Quote:
Any Seals used will weaken the body to some degree. This will lower speed, strength, agility, chakra pool, etc., until the person rests again. The amount of weakening and time it takes to recover is dependent on strength of the Seal and the length of time it's used.
Meh.. I don't undersand. What are the seals and how do they work. How you've made this work: I have a seal, therefore, I get access to any jutsu I want. Woot. <_< No, you don't.
Quote:
Name: The Hocca
Description: Those who can use the Hocca can instinctively sense it in others. Anyone with a demonic aura or infernal aura can be sensed. Typically, people with a demonic aura are normal demons while those with infernal auras are humans / demons that have been corrupted, or has the scent of Hell. The Hocca sense is no more powerful than sight, and requires the person to be quite close to detect them (maximum fifty feet). It can't detect any details besides whether they have a strong aura, weak aura or no aura. Ozanaru and Mi'Godh gain the Hocca as part of the bloodline limit; Mizuno must give a SA slot.
Wait... You said demons were in the forest!!! When were forests in Hell? Am I missing something?
So we're playing the annoy me game... Fine, I'll humour you. Keep in mind if you actually review a clan, anything aesthetic does not need to be commented on. Ever.
1. Millions put since there's no actual way to count the number of demons, though hundreds of thousands would probably be closer, it's purely aesthetic.
2. It's called genetics. If you breed a white person with a black, you get half white. If you continue breeding them with white people, the line will eventually become white yet still have the genetic traces of black people.
3. Yes.
4. No. They simply don't have the same kind of natural / spiritual energy. And yes, I do get to decide that.
5. Yes and no. I should specify that there are animal-like demons as well to the humanoid demons.
6. Did you miss the fact that I removed the entire bloodline description and limit? Obviously going to rewrite it.
7. Read it again. If you have the first Seal, you get 1 D rank power. No jutsu. Ever. It specifies one. How did you interpret that differently?
8. Hellbound demons. Once again, rewriting the bloodline description. _________________
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