Name: Inaba’s Curse
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Wind Attribute/ Meet conditions set by the Spirit - Inaba
Description: An ability gained by harboring Inaba’s curse (White Chakra) into the user’s Chakra Pool. Inaba is a Spirit that lives within a statue within Gold Country, but can invigorate others with a unique hearing ability that will allow the user to be aware of surroundings with a pitch higher than usual. The curse of this jutsu will cost the inheritor to however lose something from the beginning whether it be a combination of something vital or equal value of someone’s being. The most common sacrifice is their humanity as one must often sacrifice their physical appearance and nature to take on at least two of the mythical rabbit’s traits. (Ex. White Hair, Whiskers, Rabbit Ears, urge to eat certain foods, etc.) However, the user's arms are lighter and more agile making them almost feel like paper to them meaning thier strength when using them for physical attacks decreases. _________________ Disani Xenoharu
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0 Forum Credit Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Leaf Village Training Points: N/A Inventory: Wooden Pole (Retractable), 20 Kunai, 10 Smoke Bombs Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
These jutsu are too powerful. Considering the first is constant it should be S rank. Plus none of them have any real weaknesses and basically are just to overpower your character. _________________ Syra's Theme - 463
Roleplaying Characters: Syra Ozanaru Kidaku Itichi No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure Training Points: 185 Inventory: 1 Katana Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 5 FC
Okay, I see, the first one is the only one I'm worried about, the other two were rushed. I decided I didn't want them at school when I thought about them. I need something with rabbit traits. _________________ Disani Xenoharu
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0 Forum Credit Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Leaf Village Training Points: N/A Inventory: Wooden Pole (Retractable), 20 Kunai, 10 Smoke Bombs Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
I see that it seems like there are no weaknesses whatsoever like Syra said.
Also it seems a tad bit too strong. I would say that give it some sort of weakness and not have it be so strong _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Reileyn Itichi Ayame Daikonran Kaitsume Kaori Seigaku No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, Chuunin, Genin Village: Otokagure, Sunagakure, Konohagakure Training Points: i have no idea!! Inventory: One large scythe, 10 kunai, 100 shuriken Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 20
I think Syra was referring to the two jutsu she removed. Considering the rank of the jutsu it seems fine. But I'll wait for another mods opinion. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Caleb Uchiha Umoki Aleison Nova Mousy Dharma, The Silver Moth RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure Training Points: 240 Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 0
30 TP
0 Forum Credit Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Leaf Village Training Points: N/A Inventory: Wooden Pole (Retractable), 20 Kunai, 10 Smoke Bombs Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
wait this is active 24/7? I thought it was a in battle transformation or something..... _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Idris None None None RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank) Village: Sunagakure Training Points: 230 Inventory: Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 35
Read carefully, it's a chakra type and taijutsu style to go with it. Also the phrase, "during their life span". _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Caleb Uchiha Umoki Aleison Nova Mousy Dharma, The Silver Moth RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure Training Points: 240 Inventory: 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 0
A civil war raged out between them and the Gold and Silver Country because the country's Feudal Lord wanted to increase its supply into the country. After their defeat, the Rice Field Country became invisible to other countries. There armies having been reduced dramatically. Orochimaru, however, had a plan to expand the country.
Taken from NRC's Country description of Rice Field _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Idris None None None RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank) Village: Sunagakure Training Points: 230 Inventory: Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 35
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