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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Strengths are weaknesses are more or less ok, she's a jounin after all

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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
Strengths:
-Extreme speed
-Extreme strength
-stamina

Weaknesses:
\-She is weakest against genjutsu
-She doesn’t weight much, therefore can be flung around easily
-For some reason can’t heighten her senses for smell.
-When overwhelmed she panics
-weak against long range fighters
-Rushes into things when pressured


You call that balanced?!  A Jounin is supposed to have a LOT more than that.  Mostly, as a Jounin, they're going to have one or two more Strengths than Weaknesses, maybe.  But still, that's not balanced.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is not genin level, strengths are supposed to outweigh weaknesses
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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




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Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Post deleted for leading to an arguement!

Refrain from arguements In RPC please.

also, Love, edit them so katsuga becomes as silent as the night.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, but you're dumb to the point where you can't properly judge things. Her strengths do outweigh her weaknesses just right for jounin.
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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey stench...Cool it and dont start drama.

And Uchiha, my jutsu list, is in the process f being accepted so thats why i olny have two up there. As for the strengths...I had more up there but someone else told me to limit them, so i will add one or two more. I added of the medical history thing.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Approved

Moved some jutsu's to the training list.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Unapproved due to not meeting requirements.

Jounin rank does not give you automatic jutsu. You need to balance those strengths and weaknesses. Race is not human, it's like being hispanic or caucasion or Asian or something. We can't approve this until your weapon has been approved (if it has please post the link).
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-She doesn’t weight much, therefore can be flung around easily
-For some reason can’t heighten her senses for smell.
-When overwhelmed she panics
-weak against long range fighters


None of those are weaknesses, and in general you only have one physical strength compared to your five or so extremely powerful physical traits. I don't like the history but it'll be fine. Just don't god mod.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://narutorpcenter.com/about4207.html

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see. Well then that part is fine, but I should mention that she wouldn't be able to fight with it well considering her size.

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