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Miria · Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:56 am Post subject: Miria-Paid by balli

THIS IS PAID FOR BY BALLIAN

Name: Miria
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Height: Â 5'9
Weight: 120

Appearance:

Race:Caucasian
Hair: Black with white highlights
Eyes: Black, when she uses chakra they turn white.
Body: Slim and some what built
Ethnicity: Sunagakure

Level/Rank: Jounin, A-rank
Village: Â Sunagakure
Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Claymore
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu/ninjutsu/is studying medical jutsu's
Starting Inventory: Big Claymore( http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k167/Yamantaka/Claymore_001.jpg ),20 soldier pills

Strengths:
-Extreme speed
-Extreme strength
-stamina
-Endurance
Weaknesses:
-Her defensive skills aren't the best of among most shinobi.
-Even Among her Strong amount of stamina, She can be some what clumsy causing accidents
-She has a high endurance rate, But she Is Not very skilled in the genjutsu area.
-Being Speed Is a good thing, But Sometimes her speed exploits Â her to combat Making her somewhat lose Focus and make it harder for her to have complete exact aim of the target.

Jutsus:
Name: Rapid blade
Type:ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements:To be taught by one involved in the â€œorganizationâ€
Description: Miria attacks her enemy stabbing, slashing, and cutting at rapid speeds with powerful hits. It can slash trees into hundreds of pieces in seconds if she uses enough chakra. If she puts in enough chakra her movements can be nearly unseen. If the enemy is not good enough in defense they should move away at all costs. this technique causes the user to make their arms heavier and heavier when used.

Name: The executer
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B.)
Requirements: (Claymore
Description: Miria puts her hand on her claymore while it is still seathed. Using her extreme speed she can unsheathe her sword and dish out a complicated maneuver of stabs, cuts, and slashes. If she puts enough chakra into it she can do this so fast that it will appear to the eye as if she has her hand on the hilt of her blade the whole time. Involves little chakra but alot of stamina.

Name: Phase 1
Type: ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements:Must have Medical History and be Taught from miria
Description: Miriaâ€™s eyes change to an orange reddish color. Miria Strength increases for an amount of time as well as her speed. When she is in this phase the chakra automatically heals small wounds. this technique can only be used Once during combat...and stays active through the whole time.

Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can instantly repair physical damage done to another person or themselves.

Name:tornado
Type: Nin
Rank: A
Requirements: Claymore
Description: Miria does swings her claymore in a circular motion and then a huge tornado appears. The tornado is monstrous and will suck in anything near it. The downside is that it can go towards Miria herself. It can damage the user also in the conduction of being made and used.
Bloodline jutsus:

Jutsus that wants to learn:
Kaze no Yaiba [Wind Blade]
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a whirlwind blade around their arm with chakra. The blade slices through almost anything and cannot be easily blocked, as it is said that "nothing can stop a blade of wind."

Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can instantly repair physical damage done to another person or themselves.

Name: Sword buster
Type: Tai?
Rank: B
Requirements: Her claymore
Description: Using her incredible strength Miria draws her sword. She then gets to the enemy and hits the enemies blade with all with her strength. If the enemy weapon is bigger then usually it may take more then one hit on her claymore

after effect of the slash, Will cause the user to feel some shocks from the contact.

Name: Headbreaker
Type: Tai
Rank: C-B
Requirements: None
Description: In hand to hand combat, if the enemy throws a punch or kick then Miria will into a quick crouch avoiding the hit. She then drop kicks the enemy surprising them. When they are in mid air Miria with slam her elbow into the check or face of the enemy sending them head first into the ground.

This technique involves alot more stamina then a regular taijutsu technique.

Name: The executer
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B.)
Requirements: (Claymore
Description: Miria puts her hand on her claymore while it is still seathed. Using her extreme speed she can unsheathe her sword and dish out a complicated maneuver of stabs, cuts, and slashes. If she puts enough chakra into it she can do this so fast that it will appear to the eye as if she has her hand on the hilt of her blade the whole time.

Involves little chakra but alot of stamina.

Name: Double kick
Type: Tai
Rank: B
Requirements: none
Description:Using her extreme speed, She charges for hr enemy at full speed. When she is a yard away she jumps and extends her legs to make her body horizontal in the air. She will, with all that momentum, slam both of her legs into the chest or stomach area of her enemy sending them flying away.

can damage the User's Lower part of the legs.

Name:tornado
Type: Nin
Rank: A
Requirements: Claymore
Description: Miria does swings her claymore in a circular motion and then a huge tornado appears. The tornado is monstrous and will suck in anything near it. The downside is that it can go towards Miria herself.

It can damage the user also in the conduction of being made and used.

Name: Rapid blade
Type:Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements:To be taught by one involved in the â€œorganizationâ€
Description: Miria attacks her enemy stabbing, slashing, and cutting at rapid speeds with powerful hits. It can slash treeâ€™s into hundreds of pieces in seconds if she uses enough chakra. If she puts in enough chakra her movements can be nearly unseen. If the enemy is not good enough in defense they should move away at all costs.

this technique causes the user to make their arms heavier and heavier when used.

Name: Arm drill
Type:Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: Miria twists her arms 21 times, this takes time. About 2 seconds for each rotation. When she is done she directs her arm at the target. She then jumps at them and releases her arm cuasing it to twist back at a very fast pace. This drill can go through flesh like butter.

Name: Wind clone jutsu
Type: Nin
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: Miria creates clone that can take about 1 or two weak hits. When they disperse they let out gusts of wind capable of knocking down or wearing out an enemy.

Name: Phase 1
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements:Must have Medical History and be Taught from miria
Description: Miriaâ€™s eyes change to an orange reddish color. Miria Strength increases for an amount of time as well as her speed. When she is in this phase the chakra automatically heals small wounds.

this technique can only be used Once during combat...and stays active through the whole time.

Name: Phase two
Type:Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements:Must have Medical History and be Taught from miria
Description: Miria gets cuts that grow on her cheeks and move to her mouth she also has her eyes turn completely red. She gets the strength of 10 men and has the extreme speed. Miria can only maintain this state for 25 minutes before she has the risk of letting her yuma take over.

The after effect of this Technique causes the enemy to Lose focus and make them weaker and can only be used once during battle (aka one topic)

Name: Phase three
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements:Must have Medical History and be Taught from miria
Description: Miriaâ€™s teeth become those of a monsters, her faces turns green and ragged, and her bodyâ€™s muscles mutate at a fast rate. She has the strength of 20 men and the speed that is unmatchable. Her voice becomes deepened and her hair turns gray, this is the closet thing to a yuma Miria can get before she loses control and will attack her team mates

The after effect of this Technique causes the enemy to Lose focus and make them weaker and can only be used once during battle (aka one topic) also Can kill her self in the process, After three or four times using this, it will kill the enemy!!!

Name: Summoning jutsu
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Claymore
Description: Miria bites her finger and then writes the names of three names on her claymore. The names â€œDeneve, Clare, Teresaâ€. Once those are written three women of the â€œOrganizationâ€ appear in a puff of smoke. They have the same strengths as Miria and have teleportation like movements. The downside is that they can not use jutsu. http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa82/Rinouchi/Claymore.gif
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:
Miria was born into a small village in the middle of nowhere in a small town. She was raised alone and taught the art of combat by her mother and father. The town specialized in swordsmanship, and when a country needed swords, they would call upon them. Soon miria was on small contracts with other women, men werenâ€™t aloud on missions with women. Many times they would sexually harass or rape the women when alone, women in the village were born very pretty, and almost always found husbands with an easy time.

Miria didnâ€™t pay attention to boys, she focused on training. Because of this she was advanced in all of her classes and was always wielding bigger and better blades. She was able to wield her gaint blade with ease and grace becuase of all the years of extra training.She was basically the role model for the entire village to go by. Soon she graduated and was on full fledged missions; mostly they were escort or assassination missions. The village refused to take the heads of anyone above Jounin status, if was less risky and safer.

Miria didnâ€™t pay attention to the people she killed or captured, it was just her job, and plus it was less pain for her. But soon she couldnâ€™t take this life style anymore. So she packed her claymore, food. She ran away, she soon met a shaman, an old woman. Miria stayed with her for months, just resting and finding her true self. Then the village came for her. The shaman implanted a beast into her, she named it yoma. She could only use it during dire times.

Mirai fled once again, she knew the shaman wouldnâ€™t live to see tomorrow, she wept and kept going until she reached the sand village, she met the kazekage and he gave her the rank of jounin based on her skill, and thatâ€™s where she is right now. Finding her way.
sample post:
Kibou rested in the hot spring with her head resting against a rock. She was taking her nap when Minde saw a bird in the air. She made a puff then put her head back into her paws. Minutes later a young man arrived on the other side of the springs. Kibou lifted up her head and saw the young man. When he went into the water she thought she saw his penis for a split second before it was covered with water. Kibou looked around and didnâ€™t see more then 2 other women in the water. She made her way to the boulders that separated the two water area's. She rest against them and laid back on those rocks instead. She acted like she didnâ€™t notice the guy.

Kibou groaned in relaxation hoping to get the mans attention. She had to hear her. Kibou felt a little horny today.

"A back rub would feel so good right now" She said to herself hoping the man would reach over and rub her shoulders. Kibou smiled showing her large canines. She noticed Minde shaking her head over in the corner on the side walk. She always disapproved with Kibou's actions. She wanted a man. Her brothers never let her get a chance to have one. So Kibou would make sure she would have some sort of sexual activity with a guy so she could show her brothers she was a grown woman.

â€œHey better catch onâ€ She said with a slight smile.

Roleplaying Characters:
Miria
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
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Village:
Fame: 0
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Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Kawada · Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:04 am Post subject:

Alright, Love.

This isn't like NV, You must post your jtusu's In the jutsu section to get accept, Same with your weapon.

Other then that, It looks pretty good.
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Sench · Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:24 am Post subject:

Pretty good?! This is close to the worst profile I've ever seen >.< you character is excellent at almost everything and half her weaknesses aren't even weaknesses! This needs a lot of work. Ok, here's a list:
1. Re-balance your strengths and weaknesses
2. You need to post all those jutsus to have them
3. You have to learn all those jutsus, you only start with clone, replacement and transformation
4. No demon form. We do not allow demons, and as far as I disagree with this rule, it's unlikely it's going to change.

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 1:38 pm Post subject:

And, not to sound crude, evil, or like an ass, but could you, or Ballian provide some proof that it was bought by him? Mostly why I'm asking is because you're just starting out, and you're getting a Jounin, and a bad, not "good" bad, one at that...

1. Need to balance your Strengths and Weaknesses, really just add more Strengths and/or take out Weaknesses.

2. You start off with Bunshin no Jutsu, Kawarimi no Jutsu, and Henge no Jutsu. IF you get to stay as a Jounin, you'll need to add those, along with ALL of the Basic-named Jutsus, as well as, a bigger Jutsu Arsenal. That's a very big "if" though....

3. You're going to have to re-do your background nearly completely. As Sench said, you're not going to have a Demon RPC, not even a Half-Demon. Also, if you're going to get Medical Jutsus, you're going to have to have a much longer history of using it, not just saying "she started studying medical Jutsus." That's a no-go. If you're wanting them, you'll either have to start off at the Academy learning it, or learn it from a Med-Nin, but it'll take a long time either way, especially if you want the "Healing Hands".

4. Going back to the first one, if you can provide some kind of proof on this, you'll have to start off as a Genin and pretty much re-do the entire RPC.
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Miria · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:46 pm Post subject:

So accepted? I wanna RP with ballain about now...

Roleplaying Characters:
Miria
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
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Village:
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:59 pm Post subject:

If he did buy it for you, we're going to need proof of this, and proof of how you got the Jounin Rank.
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Sench · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:00 pm Post subject:

You start with only three basic jutsus (Bunshin, Kawarimi, Henge) unless you paid for auto-learning others. Other than that, looks good. Oh, and you still need proof that balli paid for the rank-ups

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:01 pm Post subject:

Didn't I just say that.....???? Â ~_~
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Kawada · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:12 pm Post subject:

http://narutorpcenter.com/sutra55768.php#55768

there!
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:13 pm Post subject:

Alright, now that we have proof of this, she still needs to go in and fix some of what we told her. Â Primarilly, putting in the Basic-named Jutsus, fixing her Strengths and Weaknesses, and taking out those other Jutsus, unless you/her bought them, and put them in the "Jutsus Want to Learn" section. As for the "Healing Hands" Jutsu, she's going to need more than just "she just started learning Medical training" in her background if she excepts to have that, being it's a high-Ranked Medical Jutsu.

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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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