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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:14 pm    Post subject: Kurakawa, Yuri Reply with quote

Name: Kurakawa, Yuri
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Height: 5'3
Weight: 94lbs

Appearence:


Race: Japanese
Hair: Down to shoulders, Blonde
Eyes: Almond Shaped
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Kaze no Kuni
On Back: A 4ft long container of dirt.

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure
Bloodline: n/a
Main/Favored Weapon: Short Sword
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
- 20 Shuriken
- 20 Kunai
- 30 Senbon
- 2 Short Swords

Strengths: Very Agile, Very hard to intimidate, Alot more Chakra then normal, Does not give up easily

Weaknesses: Distracted easily, Does things without thinking, Thinks to highly of herself, Emotions cloud her thoughts sometimes

Jutsus:

Jutsu #1
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
Rank: E
Description: Creates a harmless clone that cannot attack, only used to confuse the enemy. Dissapears in one hit.

Jutsu #2
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Jutsu)
Rank: E
Description: Replaces your body with a nearby object, confusing your opponent and giving you time to attack.

Jutsu #3
Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
Rank: E
Description: Replaces the outside of the body to look like someone else.

Jutsus that wants to learn:
Hidden Stones Jutsu (D rank)
Arm of Earth Jutsu (D rank)
Surrounding Spikes Jutsu (C rank)
Mud Flow Jutsu (C rank)
Earth Style Wall Jutsu (C rank)
Rock Lodge Destruction (B rank)


Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:


When Miharu turned 5 years old, she was immediately taught how to work as a farmer and grow crops to serve the village. Miharu acted as she loved doing this as she didn't want to upset her parents, but inside, she hated it and would do anything to stop working like that. Miharu decided that she was going to something that noone in her family had done, and that was to become a shinobi. After she was done with her farming work each day, Miharu would train by puching at tree's and small things, although she strongly believed that she could become a shinobi, she was afraid what her parents would say.

After all most three years of training, Miharu felt confident enough to ask her parents if she could go to the ninja academy, after all she was old enough now. When she went to ask her parents, they decided that it might be nice to have a shinobi in the family and decided to let Miharu go to the academy.


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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
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Village:
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's what's wrong, and welcome to NRC:

1.  Bring your age down to 12-13, thus adjusting your weight and height.

2.  Need an appearance.  Pics work best.

3.  Your "Race" will be your ancestry (American, Japanese, African American, etc.)

4.  Your "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from.  Seeing that you're joining Sunagkaure, it'll be Kaze no Kuni (Wind Country).

5.  You start off as a Genin.

6.  Your Clan is a Custom, so you'll have to wait before you can use it and meet the requirements to post it.

7.  Katanas are Chuunin+

8.  You only get one Element.

9.  Can't use "a lot".  You can use "above average".

10.  Need one more weakness to balance it out.

11.  For Jutsus, you start off with Bunshin, Kawarimi, and Henge.

12.  The rest of them you can put down in the "Jutsus Want to Learn" Section.

13.  You'll start off with "0" for all your Mission Ranks.

14.  Pretty good on your background, but you're going to have to edit all of it.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uchiha Katsuga wrote:
Here's what's wrong, and welcome to NRC:
3.  Your "Race" will be your ancestry (American, Japanese, African American, etc.)


Caucasian is white...
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Its Yuwea's bloodline and she said it was still open.


Roleplaying Characters:
Ballian Mizunaka
Zaraki kenpachi
Kawada Sun
N/A
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~Sannin~~~Chuunin
Village: Suna~~~Suna~~~Suna
Training Points: 240
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 88

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First thing is first, you only start with the basic three jutsu (Henge No Jutsu, Kawarimi No Jutsu, Bushin No Jutsu). And if I'm not mistaken those aren't jutsu from our site. You can not start at S rank Missing nin. You must start in a village and at the Genin rank. You may leave afterwards if you wish but you will be a D rank Missing nin. You're character's starting age is too high for a genin. Your katana is unacceptable since it would be above genin rank. You're race can't be human; it's more like Caucasion, or Hispanic or something. Ethnicity is your character's country born in. We require either a picture or a typed appearance. There is no such thing as family traits; the first part (large amount of chakra) is just a strength. The second is unacceptable. You're strengths and weaknesses are not balanced. Edit the background accordingly.

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Tetsuga Setare
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

mmk really sorry guys...i mixed this up for another site so just delete this thread...i will come back later

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We won't delete it, just come back and edit it when you can.  Also, you need a second Fighting Style, either Genjutsu or Taijutsu.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Denied

if you want this back, Kura please Pm me Or Pm me on NV!
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Yoh-Kun wrote:
Its Yuwea's bloodline and she said it was still open.


Roleplaying Characters:
Ballian Mizunaka
Zaraki kenpachi
Kawada Sun
N/A
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~Sannin~~~Chuunin
Village: Suna~~~Suna~~~Suna
Training Points: 240
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 88

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dude, it hasn't been that long.  We wait for probably a month, THEN, if not activities been done, we deny it, ok?
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uchiha Katsuga wrote:
Dude, it hasn't been that long.  We wait for probably a month, THEN, if not activities been done, we deny it, ok?


i know him, We talk on Ninja village....He said on here he doesn't want it.
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Yoh-Kun wrote:
Its Yuwea's bloodline and she said it was still open.


Roleplaying Characters:
Ballian Mizunaka
Zaraki kenpachi
Kawada Sun
N/A
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~Sannin~~~Chuunin
Village: Suna~~~Suna~~~Suna
Training Points: 240
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 88

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok guys im back...erm ball sorry i told you that i wasnt gona come back but i am now...so erm just gimme a few to edit the post

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