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Shui Hinotama
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 Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:38 am Post subject: Dominanto, Shui [D-rank Missing Ninja] |
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Name:Dominanto,Shui
Age:15
Gender:male
Height:5'9
Weight:103
Appearence:5'9 103lbs has long black hair blue eyes.Shui is wearing a fishnet shirt underneath a Dark Blue sleeveless shirt with a pair of black jeans.with a leg back staying on his side and on his belt.
Race:American
Hair:Black
Eyes:Blue
Body:slim/athletic
Ethnicity:Fire country
Level/Rank: D-rank Missing Ninja
Village: Otogakure no Sato (formally Konohagakure no Sato)
Bloodline:Dominanto Kaze
Main/Favored Weapon:Bo
Element: Fuuton
Fighting Type/Style:Ninjutsu and Genjutsu
Starting Inventory:Kunai x10 ,shuriken x10,Senbonx20,80ft of wire,
Smoke Bombx30,Bo
Strengths:Shui exceled in Ninjutsu as well as spotting Genjutsu.Shui has taken to the Ninjutsu vary well with the ninja arts and even excelled in the genjutsu arts aswell.Shui could always spot the illusions when ever he walkedin to one and releses them.His ninjutsu is even better knowing the different jutsus of he ninja arts.
Weaknesses:Shui lacks some of the main strength of his taijutsu making him a bit weaker at hand to hand combat. Shui is slower then most in his taijutsu.Shui also has low chakra but just enough to use his jutsus.Shui lacks on his accuracy with his shuriken and kunai throwing .
Jutsus:Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi,
Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user creates hundreds of clones that phase in and out of the ground as if they were made of blackish oil-like liquid. The user can then hide the projectiles they throw within the illusory ones that the clones throw at their opponents. )
Bloodline jutsus:
Jutsus that wants to learn: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion ,
Doton: Doruki Gaeshi [Earth Release: Earth Land Deflection] ,
Fuuton: Daitoppa [Wind Release: Grand Blast] ,
Fuuton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa [Wind Release: Infinite Sand Cloud Great Breakthrough]
Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial]Breaking Floor Jutsu
Friend of My Enemy Jutsu Illuminating Rose technique Kankaku Gyoutai [Sensory Delay]
Magen: Jigoku Koka no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique] All of the clans jutsus Name: Kaze kunai (wind kunai)
Rank: C
Range: melee
Requirements: dominant wind clan
Description: The user focuses wind chakra into his hand, and compacts it into the shape of a kunai. The wind kunai can be used as a melee weapon that pierces through armor and weapons and slightly damages them, but doesnt do a severe damage to humans and requires large quantities of chakra to use for a extended period of time. If holding a weapon when using this, the air circles around the weapon, increasing impact damage.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:Shui has been on the move from country to country looking for his place to fit in.He came to the fire country when he found the ninja acadamy where he learned of his ninjutsu and his genjutsu skills. When it cam to the taijutsu he got below the average class when he went on with his ninjutsu and his genjutsu skills makeing him top ofthe class with his chakra and his keen eye to spot genjutsu. Shui has inhearted the clans bloodine power known as the Dominanto Kaze (Dominant Wind).
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Shinobi Rank: D-rank missing nin
Village: None(formerly Konohagakure no sato)
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Here's what I see wrong:
1. In a sense, there IS a Custom Bloodline here that did kinda combine the Uchiha and Hyuuga Bloodlines together, but I can't recall who had it. I think it was Air, but don't quote me on that.
2. Your "Race" is going to be your Ancestry (Japanese, American, African American, etc.)
3. Your "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from. Since you're wanting to be in Otogakure no Sato (Village Hidden in the Sound), then your "Ethnicity" is going to be "Ta no Kuni (Rice Field Country).
4. Need detail on your Strengths and Weaknesses, and have 4-5 of each.
5. Since you're probably going to have take the Bloodline out, or take another one, you're going to have to change your "Bloodline Jutsus".
6. Explain "Friend of My Enemy Jutsu", "Illuminatin Rose Technique", and "Breaking Floor Jutsu".
7. All that said and done, you're going to have to edit your background nearly completely.
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Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
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Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
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