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 Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:36 pm Post subject: rayne soarer |
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Name: Rayne Soarer
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 5ft 1in
Weight: 110lbs
Appearence: Rayne usually wears an olive green shirt, camo pants, green gloves and shoes with metal plates on them, and an olive green ninja headband.
Race: hispanic
Hair: black, strait, and worn down
Eyes: black
Body: looks like the average guy who doesn't work out, but isn't fat
Ethnicity: light-skinned hispanic
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: kirigakure
Bloodline: N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Katana-style swords (Katana/Wakazashi/Nodachi)
Element: Katon
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
Wakizashi
Strengths: he is physically fit. he is good with swords. he is intelligent. he has a slightly above average size chakra pool. he is also pretty good with chakra molding.
Weaknesses: he has a light frame, making it easy for him to be lifted. he can go wild if he gets really angry, which rarely happens. he isn't very good with genjutsu, but he is adequate with ninjutsu. he sometimes overuses his chakra. he sometimes tries to learn jutsu that are too advanced for him, so it often blows up in his face while he's learning it.
Jutsus:
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Gennin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsus for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobi. The user uses speed to their advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsus or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Gennin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus that I want to learn:
Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu [Fire Release: Powerful Fireball Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This Katon (fire element) ninjutsu is a very powerful technique that most gennin are not capable of performing due to the high amount of chakra concentration it uses. The user must first gather chakra into his hand and mouth. The mouth then shoots out fire and one hand is placed just out of the lips to control it into one intensely hot fireball. This attack is similar to a huge devastating flamethrower.
Konoha Daisenpu [Leaf Great Whirlwind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A powerful leap forward, using the extra momentum to perform a powerful spinning kick with both legs in mid air, the second kick often being aimed lower in case the intended planned ducks. The technique is most effective at ranges of 2-3 meters, because if you miss or they dodge, you have at least made it past your opponent and have a chance to react before they can mount a significant counter-attack.
Dainamikku-Entori [Dynamic Entry]
Rank: D
Requirement: None
Description: This is simply a flying jump kick straight at the enemy. Usually used as an opening or surprise attack.
Konoha Shunshin no Jutsu [Leaf Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from previous current position in a flurry of leaves and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.
Sennen Goroshi [One Thousand Years of Pain]
Rank: E
Requirement: None
Description: An end-all Taijutsu maneuver involving just the first two fingers of each hand extended together and then driven into the ass of the ninja's opponent. Surprising and painful, this technique not only inflicts damage, but also thoroughly humiliates the ninja's opponent. Anyone with fingers and no morals can use this technique. A variation of this jutsu is also used with a kunai and explosive tags.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Rayne has lived in the mist village all of his life. He has mainly just been another face in the crowd until he graduated from the academy. Now he's just another ninja in the crowd instead! He has always loved swords, and he mainly wants to learn taijutsu to attack his enemies with. He would, however, like to learn this one katon ninjutsu, which is weird for someone in the mist village to learn. His mother works at the academy, but has had a problem with Rayne becoming a ninja ever since Rayne's father disappeared on an S-rank mission. Rayne has vowed to become a powerful ninja to find his father.
Roleplaying Characters:
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: genin
Village: kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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Yea, add another 2 strengths and balance out the weakness to them. Your appearance is lacking alot.
And he stated Wakizashi for a starter weapon, I'd assume he meant swords in general. Though a better classification would be better. Maybe like Katanas, Longswords, Shortswords, Greatswords. So forth and so on.
And I think that Konoha is closed to new genin. Not sure. I'll check.
Edit: It is. So is please pick either Kirigakure or Otogakure as both Suna and Konoha are closed. And try for a little more background, not really needed but it looks better. ^_^ Move "Adaquate with ninjutsu." into strengths.
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Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure
Training Points: 0
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:26 pm Post subject: |
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sorry. i posted the thread, and it ended up in the wrong place. 
i put katana-style swords, so i can use the other ones when i rank up.
wakizashi is stated to be genin, so that's the starting weapon that i put.
i forgot to finish up the discription, so i finished it, and i even added a picture.
i've added some strengths and weaknesses.
i'm now a mist villager (goodbye picturesque landscape T-T ) it's not so much that konoha the main village, its that it has the type of landscape that i love. oh, well. too late for me. (-_-')
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:35 pm Post subject: |
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Other the horrendously small picture, I see no other faults. So if Kat, agrees, it's Approved.
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