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Aleison Nova (Second NRPC)
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:32 pm    Post subject: Aleison Nova (Second NRPC) Reply with quote

Name: Aleison Nova
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 125

Appearence: She wears her hair just past her shoulders, and proudly wears her headband as hairband. She wear a red shirt and skirt combo with a white jacket over it. The back of the jacket bares the symbol of Falling Star, while the front left part has the family crest. Around her hips is a wide black belt that has her quiver attached. She's a bit skinny, but if you look her arm and leg muscules are well developed. Her eyes are wide and stay open, she's constantly looking around.
Race: Half Caucasian/ Half Chinese
Hair: Bright Red
Eyes: Brillant Blue
Body: Lithe yet healthy
Ethnicity: Hi no Kuni

Level/Rank: Chuunin
Village: Leaf
Main/Favored Weapon: Bow & Arrows
Element: Lightning
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: Bow, Quiver of 30 arrows.

Strengths:
Her rate of fire is amazing high
She's quick and evasive
High chakra amount
Good Chakra Control
She's a sweet person that gets along with everyone just about

Weaknesses:
She lacks good physical strength
She's squishy (can't take physical blows well)
If she likes someone alot she will follow them around and start depending on them
Annoying at Times

Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi, Kinobori

Gatsuga [Double Piercing Fang]
Rank: C
Requirements: Approved Dog Pet
Description: The user and his partner spin at a ferocious speed and deliver many powerful beastlike attacks when contact is made with the target. This attack can also be done alone although it is less effective.

Jujin Bunshin [Beast Human Clone]
Rank: B
Requirements: Approved Dog Pet
Description: In coordination with an animal, the user creates a perfect likeness of that creature, and vice-versa with the beast assuming the form of the person. This makes it impossible to tell the two apart until the jutsu is broken, usually by damaging one of the participants which then reverts to their original form.

Name: Star Shower Style
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Bow, Good Chakra Control
Description: Practice of this style greatly improves the shinobi's rate of fire when using a bow. Also it lets them channel chakra into each shoot. This can be a quick charge that add a little when shooting rapidly, or alot into a single shot. This chakra increase the range of the arrow and adds extra damage. Lastly practioners of this art can add a flash of light at the end of a Flicker technique (or anything like it) rather than dirt or leaves. This is only a visual effect.

Bloodline Jutsus:

Name: Starstream
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Starkin
Description: This is a speed technique, which has two uses. It's primary use is a sudden burst of speed used to travel a few feet in any direction. It takes chakra but can be used alot. However, if you use it too many times without a break your physical stamina will wear down faster. It's second use may only be used as a Chuunin or higher. It utilizes handseals and more chakra to enable you to travel greater distances, much like Shunshin. This is only far enough to carry you out of a battle and shouldn't be used to travel long distances (unless you have a large amount of stamina and chakra, and don't intend on fighting that day).

Name: Semiauto
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Ginrei Kojaku, or another Chuunin Stage Starkin Bow
Description: This improves the damage potential by multipling how many arrows are shot in one pull of the bow. This takes the addition amount of chakra needed to produced the extra arrows, but any effects that apply to a single shot apply to all of them. The shinobi may choose not to launch multiple arrows, or just a fewer amount.

Chuunin - 2
Jounin - 3
Gonin / Kage – 5

Name: Kojaku no Satsujin [Murder of Sparrows]
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Ginrei Kojaku
Description: Allie scours a single enemy or a close group with hail of arrows. These are about one third the size of normal arrows, but her fire rate triples for up to a minute. After a minute she has to rest because this tires her arms.

Jutsus that wants to learn: Konoha Shunshin no Jutsu [Leaf Instantaneous Body Skill] (her own variation), Kage Bunshin [Kage Bunshin], YaKage Bushin [Arrow Shadow Clone], Kawara Shuriken [Roof Tile Shuriken],  anything speed related.

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:1
C-Rank:1
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: She's from a long line of prestigious Archer Nin. They didn't originate The Falling Star style, but did master it. The Fallen Star archery style use the stars as a symbolic theme for there archery. It teaches clarity in sight and relationship of spaces between objects. Aleison, or Allie as her friends call her, is a bit hyperactive. As a result she's not as good with long range shots and instead focuses more on the rapid fire shots of the Celestial Arrow style. She has been taught by her mother and grandmother about the ways of the bow. She stays away from taijutsu user because she can't take hit as good as most shinobi. Her birthplace was in a small neighborhood of Konoha that her family bought so they and the extended family could stay close together. She live a simple live at a young age, filled with school and archery practice. She's extremely outgoing, even to the point of sometime being annoying. She is currently working on he on archery style.

After becoming a genin, Allie got better at her chakra control. It was thanks to her grandmother, who is probally the most known archer nin in Konoha. A few months passed by and she proved her skill in the forest of death, earning her the rank of Chuunin. The Hokage could see potential in her and sent her to go train with a doctor. Allie is now well versed in medicine, and it a good support for anyone she may team up with.

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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, I only have a problem with 2 things: arrow and kunai amount. No normal quiver can hold that much, and it would weight way too much. Same with kunai.
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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




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Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Wahrheit Aria
Frederick
Mutou Kazuki
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage ~ Chuunin ~ S-rank Missing-nin ~ Jounin
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
Training Points: 35
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 66

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes they can up to 60 arrows. Arrows are small and light but hold on I'll research it real quick. I'll remove the kunai.

EDIT: It can but i changed it to 30 because it's on her hip and not back.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 3:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sench-san, you suck!  Kidding!  Here's what I see wrong:

1.  You need at LEAST two more strengths and weaknesses.

2.  For your "Ethinicity", since you're doing Konoha, it'll be Hi no Kuni (Fire Country).

3.  Is this supposed to be a 2nd NRC for you?  If so, did you get permission to make one, or did you buy it?  If you bought it, please provide proof, ok?

That's all!  ^_^
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
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Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I said those are the only things I have a problem with since:
1. I don't care about strength/weaknesses amount as long as they're even
2. I don't care if ethnicity matches village
3. None of my business really ^_^
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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




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Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Wahrheit Aria
Frederick
Mutou Kazuki
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage ~ Chuunin ~ S-rank Missing-nin ~ Jounin
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
Training Points: 35
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 66

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sench, if you really didn't have anything to say, then why did you....?  I'm being very serious here, actually.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
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Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see nothing wrong. Give him time to develop his character

Roleplaying Characters:
Reileyn Itichi
Ayame Daikonran Kaitsume
Kaori Seigaku
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, Genin, Genin
Village: Otokagure, Sunagakure, Konohagakure
Training Points: i have no idea!!
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rei-chan, you're not a Mod., so please don't post here, ok?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 23.5

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, neither am I... please accept my apologies ^_^ and stop being such a hard-ass
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[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]




I-no

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Wahrheit Aria
Frederick
Mutou Kazuki
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage ~ Chuunin ~ S-rank Missing-nin ~ Jounin
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
Training Points: 35
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 66

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm.. not everyone going to have multiple weaknesses and strengths. Ever hear of jack of all trades? As long as there even is should be fine...

Rei bought me a second character before the net went out that section is no longer on heere so ask Lava for proof.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Chouso Churitsu Kaichio
Dharma
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin ~ Chuunin ~ Sannin ~ Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Otogakure ~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 30
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 110

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