Takatsu Fengsheng, Done

Tantis · Status: Offline Member Joined: 06 Dec 2007 Posts: 10

I guess the three weaknesses I have now are good. Any suggestions for two more?

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 12:03 pm Post subject:

Don't know. Maybe you should just remove one or two strengths.

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Tantis · Status: Offline Member Joined: 06 Dec 2007 Posts: 10

Now I should be done. That was some pretty tough harping, I was begining to think I was redoing a whole research paper. Hopefully in the RP it will be much better. Very Happy

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:31 pm Post subject:

I still need you to take out those bloodline jutsu.

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Tantis · Status: Offline Member Joined: 06 Dec 2007 Posts: 10

Done and would you be able to elaboarte to me on the Dormant State of the Bloodline you talked about on page 1.
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:48 am Post subject:

Here's what I still see wrong:

1. Put down one or two more Strengths and Weakness (you're only a Genin, you'll have more than just three of each....)

2. You still didn't fix your Jutsus. You only start off with Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi, please put the others down in the "Jutsus Want to Learn" section.

3. I don't know how the "Dormancy" of Bloodlines work, but I don't see a problem with that.

Anything I missed?
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Tantis · Status: Offline Member Joined: 06 Dec 2007 Posts: 10

Finished the above.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:19 am Post subject:

God damn it Katsuga, stop putting that. Unless you have a good argument or precedent that specifies 4-5 strengths as necessity stop telling people to do so. And dormancy of the bloodline means you show no signs, have no jutsus nor the limit. However it does exist and you can talk about it.

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Tantis · Status: Offline Member Joined: 06 Dec 2007 Posts: 10

Anything else that I must fix on the profile.
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Kaeor · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 8:51 am Post subject:

Hmm.. I don't think genins can have both:

Above-Average Chakra Contol
Above-Average Chakra Pool

One can be above average and the other can be considered below average

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