Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:09 am Post subject: Takatsu Fengsheng, Done
Name: Takatsu Sachi Fengsheng
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: "5'3"
Weight: 135lb
Appearence: Takatsu wears Long Black pants and black boots. His shirt is Light Blue with a black vest he waers open all the time. the Long sleeves torn off. His hair is messy shoulder length, his eye color is one red and one brown.
Race: Hispanic
Hair: Shoulder Length Black
Eyes: Brown and Red
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Mizu No Kuni
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Village Hidden in The Mist
Bloodline: Mizugama and Kirasama.
Main/Favored Weapon: None
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Needles x20, Shuriken x15. Needles are placed in holders around his vest and his shurikens are placed in easy to reach holders on his pants legs.
Strengths:
Above-Average Chakra Contol
Strong Will
Above-Average Hearing
Weaknesses:
Needs Body of Water to channel his chakra
Not very good with Genjutsu
Sight is Very Poor
Jutsus:
- Henge no Jutsu
- Kawarami no Jutsu
- Bushin no Jutsu
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus that wants to learn:
- Suiryuudan no Jutsu
- Kanashibari no Jutsu
- Kirigakure no Jutsu
- Mizubunshin no Jutsu
- Narakumi no Jutsu
Background: Takatsu is the youngest member in the Fengsheng Clan main branch is also part of the main family, being the son of its Former-Leader Takara Fengsheng, and the brother of the current Leader Tenma Fengsheng. Takatsu started his training with his parents and brother learning to control his chakra and put some in reserve. Takatsu's unique ability to reuse chakra is one the Clan has been trying to duplicate for the longest. Being able to control his chakra at his highest level without overdoing it Takatsu's training brings him to working on his Bloodline Mizugama which his brother teaches him. Being the youngest in the clan gives him his advantages. The Clan will protect the youth at all ends. The elderly look at him as a man and teach him all their valuable wisdom. Takatsu is know 14 and is allowed to attend the accademy to further his skills as a shinobi hopefully one day to live his dream as leader of his caln as his brother is now and father before him.
Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
I'm not going to harp you until you've completely finished, but I suggest you tweak those strengths and weaknesses. Roleplaying Characters: Syra Ozanaru Tetsuga Setare No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure Training Points: 185 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 5 FC
Five strengths and weaknesses should do it, also, like Syra-san pointed out that you're not done, tone down your height and weight a little, ok? At 14, trying to keep it a little realistic here, that's a little big..... _________________ Lammergeier (Pet-Nin) Roleplaying Characters: Uchiha Katsuga Shikami Aoshi Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 23.5
1. What are "Mizugama and Kirasama" Bloodlines......?
2. Exploding Tags are Chuunin and up. And put down approx. how many Kunais/Shurikens you're carrying.
3. Tweak your stengths down. You can't have "enhanced vision", great Chakra control, large amount of Chakra, nor very intelligent. You CAN have, however, above-average Chakra control/pool, and intellegence.
4. Jutsus you start off with are "Henge", "Bunshin", and "Kawarimi". And you'll have to take out any of your Bloodline Jutsus that are above D-Ranked and place them in "Jutsus Want to Learn".
Rejected due to inactivity. PM a moderator to have this returned. Roleplaying Characters: Syra Ozanaru Tetsuga Setare No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure Training Points: 185 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 5 FC
Back, Un-Reject Please. _________________ "I am Takastu Fengsheng Leader of the Fengsheng Clan and keeper of its secrets. I am a Warrior who knows no boundaries and will stop at nothing, untill my destiny is fullfilled." Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
Done, now work on the profile (see the other mods' posts) _________________
Spoiler:
[quote="YuweaCurtis"]Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".[/quote]
[quote="Red Mage"]There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.[/quote]
[quote="Greg"]It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.[/quote]
[quote="Grace"]Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy![/quote]
[quote="Sarda"]Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.[/quote]
I-no Roleplaying Characters: Tachibana Ukyo Wahrheit Aria Frederick Mutou Kazuki RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Hokage ~ Chuunin ~ S-rank Missing-nin ~ Jounin Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto Training Points: 35 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 66
kk _________________ "I am Takastu Fengsheng Leader of the Fengsheng Clan and keeper of its secrets. I am a Warrior who knows no boundaries and will stop at nothing, untill my destiny is fullfilled." Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
As well as what rank do I have to be to use poison? _________________ "I am Takastu Fengsheng Leader of the Fengsheng Clan and keeper of its secrets. I am a Warrior who knows no boundaries and will stop at nothing, untill my destiny is fullfilled." Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
Those bloodlines don't exist. We're not accepting custom bloodlines at the moment but we will allow you to have a dormant version for now. Your ethinicity would be Mizu No Kuni. You're strengths and weakness are not balanced; there is too many physical strengths compared to social weaknesses. Roleplaying Characters: Syra Ozanaru Tetsuga Setare No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure Training Points: 185 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 5 FC
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