Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:18 am Post subject: [Rank Training] The Path of a Shinobi
As Kaeor briskly walked outside the gates of Kirigakure, a sudden urge of adventure spurred inside of him. To his mind it seemed that he had spent too much time at home laying around when he could have been participating in some other activity. Yet he was in a sad state after learning that Saya was now in a coma. She was his only and closest friend that he ever had in his life after the death of his parents. Yet he decided he would move on forth and hope for the best. He knew he couldn't allow himself to become "attached" to his past life even though he was feeling a lot of pain in his heart. But what was a life without pain? Nothing at all. Pain only made one stronger than before. As he continued walking as leaves below him scampered because of the harsh winds he remebered what his father had once told him.
"Only the strong survive....the weak only exist to feed the strong."
He was surprised that he remebered the quote and smirked to himself silently in self praise. He ran his tan fingers through his spiky silver hair. He took a deep breathe in and exhaled as he prepared himself to begin training. He knew and expected it to be a long tough day. As his caramel eyes surveyed the landscape around him his face lighted up vividly. He was ready to perfect himself and to show others he was strong. As he got ready he allowed his mind to simply drift as somehow the thought of seeing Ukyo appeared. His once enlightened face quickly twisted to a sour one. It was simply that Ukyo didn't like him and vice-versa. He wondered if he could change his sensei since Saya was sick.
"Aaah! Cmon focus!" he yelled to himself impatiently not pleased with the progress he should have attained by now. As he stood face to wood with a tall oak tree he took a fighting stance and readied himself.
"1! 2! 3! 4! ..." he said as he continued to deliver a mixture of low strikes with his legs and high strikes with his arms.
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As beads of sweat dripped from his head and he felt his muscles begin to ache his pace began to go slower. "145! 146! One hundred for-." He was breathing hard now as his body began to vent out all the CO2 that he had worked up. He collapsed on the ground as he decided to take a short break so he could recover his stamina. "Damn... So this is what extreme training does to you..."
He wiped some sweet off his forehead with the sleeve of his dark shirt. He decided that he would return to training his arm and leg muscles later. He crossed his legs and closed his eyes as he could feel his chakra flowing around him. Now he was attempting to build up his chakra and keep a steady amount of control over it while increasing it. This was the way that he was going to increase his chakra control. As wisps of the blue chakra appeared and disappeared the force that he was rising at was so great that the wind pushed away from him a bit. Yet the chakra buildup ceased as he lost control over it. "Damnit! C'mon!" he said to himself as he began to try once again. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
Decent Detail for what you have but you could have done a lot more with it. Still your not exagurating your character abilitys and going slow enough to improve it. If it wasnt for that fact I would give you a .5. Try to show some character development but mainly focus on the training its self even it its just mental. Do as much as you can to make your self as strong as you can before you rank up. Then you can honestly say you have a excuss for being exselent in a area instead of just putting it like most people. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Renima{infamy: 5000} Kishi {infamy: 2500} Raiton, Ensu No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin Village: Wind Shire Training Points: 180 Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask. Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 264
IC: Kaeor sat on the ground more focused than ever. His eyes held a quite determined glow as he attempting the second time. His chakra points once again bended to his will and opened to release and build chakra. He could feel its flow slowly buildup and felt its pressure rise. The chakra spiraled around his body as if it was shaping him like her were clay. It wasn't strong yet it was steady and very easy to manage. He gritted his teeth as he took his training up a notch and raised his chakra.
"Ugh!" he said as he clenched his teeth harder.
He couldn't see it since his eyes were closed but his chakra was like a vortex that was spinning around him like before. Yet it was going at a much faster pace. He opened his left eye half way as he felt himself struggling to keep control. He could already feel himself losing it. But he clinged to it as if it was his dear life. He was weary now as he was using all the strength he had to gain control over the chakra. Sweat now fell from his head as if it were rain and he felt like his teeth would shatter if they were clenched any harder. Yet he finally felt that cling turn to something stronger as he felt more control over the chakra and its vortex returned to its spiral without dispersing. Exhausted, he finally released his newly attained hold over his higher level of chakra and fell face first in the grass with his eyes open.
"Success..." he said wearily. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
+1 You increased your chakra control and some of your stamina in the last two posts so you can put that in your strengths.
Total of 2 _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Renima{infamy: 5000} Kishi {infamy: 2500} Raiton, Ensu No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin Village: Wind Shire Training Points: 180 Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask. Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 264
IC: Kaeor lied motionless on the ground. A person just passing by would think of him as dead but he wasn't. He simply was regaining all the energy that had been drained for him to control his chakra. He remained there for at least two hours half asleep. If there was an enemy nearby, he was sure he would be a easy kill. But at the moment none of that mattered to him. He finally pushed himself off the forest floor and onto his knees. He had recovered well from that two hours and was ready to start again. This time he would succeed where he had failed at first. As he finally stood, he begin to walk through a nearby forest. He found himself a grassy clearing and decided it was the right spot.
"Now.. a tree.." he said with his finger to his lips as he began to survey several trees. Finally, he found once that matched his personal preference as he walked over to it. He widened his legs as he began to stretch, preparing himself for this new exercise. After five minutes he decided he was ready. He went up to the tree and began to kick at its right side with a slow pace. His aim was perfect as he kicked. His goal was to put some type of "dent" in a tree, even though he had never seen a tree with a "dent" in it. After the 15th kick he could see a red spot begin to develop on his leg. Yet he ignored it and continued on. Each strike was slow and he applied an equal amount of force. Once he reached his 27th he began kicker quicker. His kicks were harder now as the curved blur his leg seemed to take became imprinted in his head. His eyes were locked on the tree as if it were a foe he was determined to beat. He was on his 40th kick when he could feel pain shoot up in his leg. He only squinted his eye and continued ignoring it. Yet he couldn't forget it. The pain seemed to be embedded in his leg. But now he couldn't stop. He could see some of the wood peeling off and becoming weak. Now on his 53rd kick he increased the force but the pace stayed the same. Now he was seeing significant improvement as the bark where he was kicking slowly began to fall to the ground piece by piece. Now the pain really sparked as he reached the 69th kick. He knew if he kept going this way the bone in his leg would shatter so he decided to stop at 75. At his 75th kick, he did what he promised himself and inspected what he had done. The "dent" wasn't what he wanted to be yet he was satisfied with his results. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
+1 Increased the Speed and strength of your kicks, also a small bit of pain tolerance or mabey will power.
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No im renima12@yahoo.com on MSN _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Renima{infamy: 5000} Kishi {infamy: 2500} Raiton, Ensu No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin Village: Wind Shire Training Points: 180 Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask. Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 264
As he gripped his leg momentarily he observed the red spot that was a bruise on his leg. He rubbed the spot as if he was making it better but was truthfully on rubbing it as a common instinct. He smiled as he reached in his backpack and pulled out some tape. He sat and carefully wrapped the tape around his hands as he continued midway past his wrist. He bit down on the remaining tape and cut it. As he put his tape back in his pack, he punched the air quickly twice.
"Perfect." He commented as he faced the same tree. With his palms open as if they were two sharp knives, he began to chop at the tree. As he chopped he stayed in a balanced fighting stance as he carefully transmitted his power into his arms. It was all about his formation when he swung his arms. He never took notice about how exceedingly strong his chops were. As he become more attuned to his hits he felt his ears also become attuned to the vibrations that were made. He continued on going harder and harder until his hands hurted and then went from open palm to closed fist. He punched at the with strength as he thrusted his wrists increasing the force. He could feel the splinters beginning to gather on his red knuckles but he didn't care. The only thing he cared about was more power... More power, through pain. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
Total 3.5 _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Renima{infamy: 5000} Kishi {infamy: 2500} Raiton, Ensu No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin Village: Wind Shire Training Points: 180 Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask. Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 264
As Kaeor stood the pain in his leg melted and was no more. His training so far brought him great advances upwards quicker then before. His eyes looked upwards as it made direct contact with the rays of the sun. He decided for his next training odyssey, he would go deeper in the words to a place where a large crater had been formed. It was a construction area for some large mall supposedly. As he walked deeper into the forest it only took him a few minutes to catch sight of the construction site. His eyes were locked upon it. He was already prepared to start. For all we didn't know the site was abandoned and unfinished. The wooden planks with nails with them held the structure. Yet the problem was that the spaces were so small and that the wood had nails on the side of them that construction workers had embedded for when the time came to connect more wood. As he entered he made sure to jump on the flat side of the planks and did his best to avoid the nails. He was running full speed and was working on building up his speed, reaction, and quickness. He jumped from one plank to the other as he went up the building that was almost like a skyscraper in its size. He looked at his sleeve and could see it was cut. He had to be more careful in this place. He folded his hands down to his side to make him a skinnier target for the nails. He had reached the 11th story of the 30 story building. As he jumped quickly off of each foot like a pouncing tiger he still remained calm as he knew he was rising higher in the atmosphere. As he got to the 20th floor there was now glass squares. He would have to be gentle if he didn't want it to break and he would either be impaled by nails or fall to his death. He jumped off his tippy toes on the glass making sure not to put all his weight on it. He had clearly loss his force but now was precise and accurate in his steps. It didn't take long for him to reach the 29th floor as he smiled. As he jumped to the 30th, he had just noticed there were nails all over the ceiling. He couldn't do anything as he watched his feet go towards it. Luckily, his wooden sandals had protected him as he jumped off but miscalculated the direction. He was now free falling in the air from 30 stories. Death seemed certain as he plunged towards the earth. With quick yet clustered thinking, he pulled a kunai out of his bag. And saw he was near the wooden planks flat surface that kept the right side of the building up. At 7 feet he stabbed the kunai while in the air and it exceedingly slowed his falling speed as he held on to it as it sliced through the wood. He fell against the ground as he rolled, not taking nearly as much damage as he truly would without the kunai.
"Whew..Close one." he responded as he grabbed his kunai from the wood and began to leave the forest. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Kaeor Arumashi Sesshomaru Ozanaru No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 14
total of 4 _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Renima{infamy: 5000} Kishi {infamy: 2500} Raiton, Ensu No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin Village: Wind Shire Training Points: 180 Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask. Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 264
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