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 Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:35 am Post subject: Zaara Shiraku [Sand] |
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Name: Zaara Shiraku
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8
Weight: 110
Appearence:
Zaara has three distinctive features, his sleepless eyes, his black lavish hair and the black tattoo marked ever so bluntly on his forehead. Zaara’s hair isn’t long or spiky, but relaxed and more lavishly hangs from his head. Zaara’s eyes are a burnt gray. Zaara’s emotions are commonly found, showing hatred to hope, even if not always distinctive. Zaara doesn’t have any distinctive muscle mass on his body, but from glimpses you can tell he has some, because of the curves on his arms and legs and chest. Zaara is exactly 148.1 centimeters tall, a rathis large growth from his younger age but still is above average in his age group. Zaara also weighs exactly 40.2 kilograms, without the weight of his gourd. His body is normally fitted with muscle and everywheree with the lack of body fat othis than his face, he tends to have a very slight chubbiness to his face, othiswise she stands tall and tough.
Zaara’s jaw line is hidden amongst the small amount of fat on his face, and curves like a heart at the bottom of the chin. Zaara is defiantly not short or bulky but instead tall and sleek. He has an intimating appearance with his muscular outlook. A Unique part of Zaara is his lack of eyebrows, he noticeably lacks them, it not that he shaves them, and they are simply non-existent. Zaara’s nose isn’t odd, not very pointy or long nor short and stubby just about the only normal part about him. Zaara’s earlobes hug tight to his head and are neatly curved.
Zaara’s eyebrows bring depth and interest into his character’s appearance. Most people and shinobi have commented on his eyeliner marks around his eyes not truly understanding it. The Tanuki black rings around his eyes are from a major lack of sleep, for the one who bears a past like his, is forced to stay awake or dream terrible nightmares. Finally Zaara has a black tattoo on his head, that has the word “ Death“ written in Kanji, it is located right above the right eye, on the right side of the forehead.
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Clothing: Zaara wears a white t-shirt, over which he wears a long jet black robe. The robe falls about four inches below his knee, whise it comes to a sudden halt. Around the robe is a white sash, that wraps around his torso, and falls between his legs. The sash covers the many silver buckles, that are meant to be strapped, so they could seal the robe. Instead they lay lifeless. Kyro wears long baggy black pants, that are wrapped with bandages, at the ankle. On the front side of the sash, is whise is Sand Village headband is held, showing his loyalty, to his village. his cloak , is made out of a soft, silky material, complements of his fathers wealth. On the othis hand, his pants are made out of a plain mesh like material, that is made to stretch. On his back is a large clear gourd, which holds a large quantity of crimson liquid.
Race: White
Hair: Red
Eyes: Burnt Gray
Body: Slim/Athletic
Ethnicity: Sunagakure no Sato
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Sand
Bloodline: Shiraku
Main/Favored Weapon: Gourd of Blood
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style:
Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Zaara is a skilled ninjutsu specialist, who exceeds in several types of ninjutsu styles. The first style is called Offensive, which is simply attacking. Aided with his blood, his jutsus are even stronger. Zaara was blessed as well as cursed to have such an affinity for using blood; no one has ever had such a power to this degree other than the First Hokage with his abilities to control trees. The way that this style of blood ninjutsu is used is not to be dexterous or hidden, but rather to let the opponent think he/she has the upper hand and use the sneaky assailant of his blood. The possessor (Zaara) needs no specific stance (Eight Trigram Sixty Four Palms) or activation (Sharnigan for techniques such as Tsyukomi). Zaara usually allows his blood Gourd turn into the strongest weapon in his possession, and then quickly uses a long range attack. Or simply letting his blood whirl and hover around the opponent Zaara then allows the blood to consume and crush the opponent and is followed up by a stronger immobilizing jutsu or something fatal to kill his opponents in his tracks. This style is simply based on distance and his opponent, because this blood will turn into a shield as quickly as it turned into a weapon.
The other forum of ninjutsu, Zaara has mastered is defensive ninjutsu. A majority of Zaara’s attacks are based around keeping him perfectly safe, for example when simply in need of defense from an attack, expected or not his blood Shield will come to his aid without him as much as moving a muscle. Or if he’s feeling the need to completely protect himself he will use his technique were he envelope himself in a ball of condensed blood. Even a flesh Clone is created for a distraction or for saving himself from a threatening blow.
So commonly during a battle Zaara will rarely move, usually standing there, guarding and attacking with his blood from a simple and single location and is barely seen using Taijutsu. But if Zaara is in any danger, Zaara’s primary defense protects him from all harm, bust as explained earlier is only destroyed by a few methods.
Starting Inventory: Gourd of Blood
Strengths:
-Smart
-Excellent amount of chakra
-Looks at life from many points of veiw, giving him a well rounded mind.
-Zaara has great leadership qualitys, and often makes wise decisions for him, and his team.
-Strong in Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
-Physically weak
-Below average chakra control
-Subject to fits of rage
-Usually silent, making him seem unapproachable by others
-Weak Taijutsu
Jutsus:
-Kawarmi no Jutsu
-Bushin no Justu
-Henge
Bloodline jutsus:
Malice Ball Jutsu
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Genjutsu Kai
Art of Walking on Water
Kinobori
Name: All the King’s People
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Kaguya or Shiraku Bloodlines or must have been trains by Shiraku, Coffin for the corpses, corpse or Kuchiyose no Jutsu and Dance of the Witches Forest technique
Description: Slamming the open palm onto the ground before you, the user sends out a wave from within the surface they touch. This manifests itself in a wall of bodies, sow together with simple cord. Once it surfaces, the wall looses momentum and stopped a few meters from the user. A perfect detraction or defense, the wall is curved outwards to a third of a circle, providing cover for the user. A good 10 meters high it would be difficult for anyone to jump, and the knife like bones piercing through it’s carapace of bodies makes sure one wrong move would be unwise.
Name: Bad Blood
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Target must be extremely close, training under Shiraku or Kaguya, one post to accumulate blood and breath.
Description: A short range breath based weapon. Drawing in the dead cells into his lung, a Shiraku can expel a highly fine spray of contaminated blood into the air in front of him. Although it settles quickly, the effects are more then worth its short range. If an enemy is caught in the cloud and breathes in some of the bloody air; they are immediately infected. While the effects are slow acting, they are varied and in some cases very deadly to those who do not seek out medical treatment. Ranging from acute blindness, hallucinations, burning fever, paralysis of the diaphragm, respiratory problems and sever muscle atrophy. In other cases untreated effect can cause a madness that renders the victim in a ravenous state of hunger. The body becomes so hungry it starts to reject normal foods; effective starving the infected to death over a period of days.
Name: Wire in the Blood
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Wire lines, Shiraku Bloodline, trained under Shinku
Description: By a method of regeneration, one can “hide” wires inside the bones of the arms, leg and sometimes ribs or spine. While not all together comfortable, the right tensing of muscles or with simple hand gesture; the wire can be shot out at a surprisingly high speed. Treated with the blood and bones of the Shiraku, this new wire can cut into an opponent’s skin and rip through to the bone, used as a whip or other such weapon.
Name: Life bleeder Serpents.
Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Must have experience fighting Shiraku or have been trained by a Shiraku.
Description: Several spines emerge from spots anywhere on the user’s body. Looking like the skeletons of snakes, these undead tentacles are sharper then any kunai and should they implant themselves into the opponent they reanimate and living tissue will fill up the empty bones, creating a sort of flesh link between the user and their opponent. The nervous system of the now fleshy tendrils becomes one with that of the opponent. Should they be cut in anyway, it would feel just as painful as having you arm or leg sawn off. This Jutsu is intended to keep an opponent in arms reach for other, more deadly Taijutsu as well as drain they opponent stamina.
Name: Corpse Summoning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Must be capable of Red Beast Style, 2nd Helix.
Description: Trying desperately to satisfy their hunger for blood and violence, the Shiraku who could not control their undead urges created this Jutsu. It simply summons a lifeless, featureless corpse. While this is a worthless tactic to anyone else, under the powers of 2nd Helix Red Beast user this is possibly the most horrific thing anyone has had to fight against. The corpse is not only animated by the shear will of the Shiraku, like a puppet with no strings attached, but they can be twisted and warped into weapons of monstrous design. Shiraku have been known to grave rob in efforts of using this Jutsu as well.
Name: Dance of the Witch’s Forest
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Shiraku, must have tasted Kaguya blood at some stage.
Description: After absorbing the blood memories of a Kaguya the more complex Jutsu of the Shiraku becomes apparent. This is much like the Dance of the Pines of the Kaguya, save that the users summons up a number of bone trees, far more elaborate then merely large spikes. Spines that grow like the branches of trees protruding from the sides of the original bone tree and from the branches hang Summoned Corpses. Calling on the countless victims of both Kaguya and Shiraku, the dead bodies hang like rip fruit ready to be plucked and twisted as all flesh and bone is by Shiraku. The initial summoning of the trees can also tear apart an opponent foolish enough not to move….fast.
Name: Flesh hook puppet strings
Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: Creates and fired from the forearm and palms, lines of flesh like leather, as durable as any metal, tied to vicious bone hooks, barbed at every point possible, design to dig deep and stay deep in the flesh of it’s target. The idea behind the Jutsu is to hook your opponent and restrict their movement, having them at the mercy of the user and their other Jutsu and leave their opponent vulnerable to Taijutsu assaults. (Can be used with other Jutsu.) This tears up the opponent, leaving scarring and splitting a lot of blood.
Name: Blood Blizzard
Type: Taijutsu/ Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Can only be use in conjunction with Red Beast Style
Description: The user begins to spin at an inhuman rate, enveloping them in a curtain of blood, transforming into a nightmarish tornado. This spits blood out across the battle area, sowing panic and making it hard for the opponent to walk or stand. It also helps Shinku to hide amidst the blood stained arena as he too will be covered in to, blending it with his surroundings for more efficiently.
Name: Flesh Breaker
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None.
Description: Fires a number of diamond shaped, fist sized bone shards anywhere they wish. Even if not at the opponent these shards can be detonated at the users will; creating explosions of bone shrapnel. Can be used in conjunction with other Jutsu.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:Zaara is one of only a few people to know and be born to the Shiraku bloodline. They were a kind of cross breed between the Kaguya and another group whom dealt with blood and rot. This other, unknown group, seemed to use flesh and death like Gaara would use sand. A truly nightmarish group who where eventually hunted down because they were addicted to killing…no not just killing; they were addicted to that instant of death at which one is neither dead nor alive. When their opponent is filled with nothing but fear. So much did they kill that they. Like the Kaguya were hunted and killed down the last one.
However a brunch family, a cross breed between the two was created but 5 generations before the destruction of the two host families. It was this new family that assumed the name of Shiraku in order to save itself the persecution of its founding families. The Shiraku found themselves useful to many in terms of mercenary work but eventually found a home base in the Hidden Village of Sound under the Kage, Orochimaru. They were however for the most part not too happy with having to take orders from someone outside their family. But they were content to do so as they now had a place to call home for once. The Shiraku family, especially some of the younger set, reminded Orochimaru of an old servant of his, Kimimaro. This servant had proven to be most powerful and useful to him and it was to be the same with the members of the Shiraku family.
Over time, however, a family fund had emerged between two factions within the family. The violence and hatred ran deeper and deeper until it could not be contained and there was all out war between the two. Unfortunately the two factions all but wiped each other out. One side developed a disease type jutsu amid at killing off the other side; this back fired and killed them as well. Only a handful of younger Shiraku member’s were found to be immune to the virus jutsu and present day it seems only a few members, Zaara and Shinku actively participates in ninja work. However such observations can be wrong.(This is Shinku's background, I felt it was needed in mine)
Though Zaara and his father had resided in Oto, they moved to Suna to escape the 'soft' ninja of their family. Zaara's mother had died, when Orochimaru sent a ninja to raid their home. Orochimaru thought they were hiding something, of importance. His mother tried to persaude the ninja otherwise, he just removed a kunai and slit her throat. Zaara witnessed his mothers death, and was impaired for life, and destined to sleepless nights. Zaara's father had rushed out, throwing a shuriken at the ninja, impaling him in the head.
During the move to Suna, the once cheery Zaara had become anti-social, keeping to himself. His father had noticed this and confronted Zaara about, but in return, he only recieved silence. In order to get Zaara to speak, Zaara's father had given him a gourd, made out of their Kaguya ancestor's bones. Afterwards, Zaara had became a little more animated, feeling that he had recieved something of great power. But he still couldn't shake his mother's death.
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Well you're in the Shiraku Clan already, so I to put it clear, you can't have a Byakugan or Jyuuken. The Uchiha Clan is closed for good.
Also, it is by Rule to have 2 Styles. Just Put TaiJutsu. But since you're physically weak, put GenJutsu since it matches you. Who knows, perhaps in the future, you'll want to add a small change to your character here and there.
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Zaara is a skilled ninjutsu specialist, who exceeds in several types of ninjutsu styles. The first style is called Offensive, which is simply attacking. Aided with his blood, his jutsus are even stronger. Zaara was blessed as well as cursed to have such an affinity for using blood; no one has ever had such a power to this degree other than the First Godaime Hokage with his abilities to control trees. The way that this style of blood ninjutsu is used is not to be dexterous or hidden, but rather to let the opponent think he/she has the upper hand and use the sneaky assailant of his blood. The possessor (Zaara) needs no specific stance (Eight Trigram Sixty Four Palms) or activation (Sharnigan for techniques such as Tsyukomi). Zaara usually allows his blood Gourd turn into the strongest weapon in his possession, and then quickly uses a long range attack. Or simply letting his blood whirl and hover around the opponent Zaara then allows the blood to consume and crush the opponent and is followed up by a stronger immobilizing jutsu or something fatal to kill his opponents in his tracks. This style is simply based on distance and his opponent, because this blood will turn into a shield as quickly as it turned into a weapon.
The other forum of ninjutsu, Zaara has mastered is defensive ninjutsu. A majority of Zaara’s attacks are based around keeping him perfectly safe, for example when simply in need of defense from an attack, expected or not his blood Shield will come to his aid without him as much as moving a muscle. Or if he’s feeling the need to completely protect himself he will use his technique were he envelope himself in a ball of condensed blood. Even a flesh Clone is created for a distraction or for saving himself from a threatening blow. |
You may wanna edit that. I understand if you want a Character that looks and acts like Gaara, but that's okay. But the First Godaime Hokage? First Fifth? Doesn't make sense? Shodai?
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