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Kawada Status: Online!  Head of Forums

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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:43 am Post subject: |
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| Sench wrote: | | Sench wrote: | | Everwill that's kind of given. You can have great taijutsu skills, but they're great for a genin etc. The strengths are not absolute (like an extremely fast genin could outrun a jounin), but relative (like an extremely fast genin MIGHT be evenly matched in speed with a chuunin) |
Cite what kind of a dumb f***ing b***h are you? not only it is assumed that all strengths are relative and not absolute, I even pointed it out and you still had to whine about how unfair the world is to you. go kill yourself you loser
the rest of you people - sorry for my bad language. just pisses me off when people are rude towards me for no reason |
Sench calm down you sound like me almost XD lol i love my language so calm down...so don't get worked up over it XD plus you treat ladies with respect not with dishonor you twat lol. _________________
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"Alot of the things I say is to carry on an image to uphold.. I am not really an asshole all the time." - Sean Avery
It is done I am the Alpha and the Omega, the beginning and the end. Revelation 21:6
Mitsu says:
lmao wow, of course my little bro is the ladies man in the family
Mitsu says:
you know I've never seen anybody go through girls like you do
Mitsu:
You have the same amount of girls, as I have money
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:48 am Post subject: |
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| Sench wrote: | | Sench wrote: | | Everwill that's kind of given. You can have great taijutsu skills, but they're great for a genin etc. The strengths are not absolute (like an extremely fast genin could outrun a jounin), but relative (like an extremely fast genin MIGHT be evenly matched in speed with a chuunin) |
Cite what kind of a dumb f***ing b***h are you? not only it is assumed that all strengths are relative and not absolute, I even pointed it out and you still had to whine about how unfair the world is to you. go kill yourself you loser
the rest of you people - sorry for my bad language. just pisses me off when people are rude towards me for no reason |
Bah its ok Sench!
Before I joined this forum I looked at a couple of threads and etc. and your probably my favorite person on this forum. 
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:02 am Post subject: |
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O.O Calm Down Everyone. Have we forgotten the reason we are all here. To usefully criticize Saya's application so she can get accepted.
Cite and Sench,
If you two are going to continue your argument and etc. then please dont post it here. Either PM eachother or make a thread in the Town Center board. _________________

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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:11 am Post subject: |
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| Cite wrote: | | He just lost all my respect, cause he's talking about shit he doesn't understand, ol' whinin' cock lickin' bitch. |
come on cite don't be so uptight...hes trying to help and the way hes doing it is getting on your nerves your Like me...zieg said that which for some reason scares me because its quite true....but ya Sench just let her help an refain from trying to smack her around lol _________________
| Quote: | No one in this world is perfect. Heaven knows I'm not. But I love her more than anyone else possibly could. In the end, that's all that matters.
"Alot of the things I say is to carry on an image to uphold.. I am not really an asshole all the time." - Sean Avery
It is done I am the Alpha and the Omega, the beginning and the end. Revelation 21:6
Mitsu says:
lmao wow, of course my little bro is the ladies man in the family
Mitsu says:
you know I've never seen anybody go through girls like you do
Mitsu:
You have the same amount of girls, as I have money
Psalm: 46;10
"Be still, know that i am god." |
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 12:58 pm Post subject: |
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Alright, this is getting out of hand. I'm checking it now, so anyone who is not a mod shut the hell up. _________________ May the shadow embrace you and guide you unto death.
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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Alright, I still see you haven't put any physical weaknesses. I'm sorry, but I require them to balance out. You also need at least one mental strength. You could remove thick-skinned, and move "resistant to pain" to weaknesses as "feels pain more acutely". Perhaps say that experiments made her partially photosensitive too, and she can't operate at full power during the day. These are just examples, but you have to even them out. As you increase in level, you can remove the physical weaknesses and more them to strengths, but in that case only put one mental strength now. _________________ May the shadow embrace you and guide you unto death.
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmmm.......................
The sadest thing I can see here is that I was not even a part of this XD
But moving on from the...deliberations, I sorta agree with you fyodor thats not a bad idea...being photosensitive and all, I expected to have her more of a night person anyways so I like it myself.
And yeah...the strength is NOTHING like Tsunade, for some reason I word it to where you think big and not small....she has above human strength...above human means where she can pick up more and do more generally than what a normal full adult male can. Of course punching a rock is not going to break right away o.o
As for the physical and mental thing...I want her mentally weak and impressionable, but I guess I can come up with something real fast. *goes to edit and hopes no one posts with something else* _________________
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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*cracks knuckles hard, looking at everyone that's posted on here*
Ok, first-off, if people would KINDLY read the rules.... IF YOU'RE NOT A MOD., DON'T POST ANYWHERE IN THE APPLICATION SECTION! I'm going to leave the posts up, and thank you for the help, but stop posting on here. The only exception to that is if this is YOUR RPC. Now then...I shall speak on this matter.
1. Why are we going to allow an RPC that has been experimented on? I haven't seen a single char., here or on the show, that went through something like that.
2. If you're going to want to heal yourself, unless you have a Demon inside you, you're going to have to become a Med-Nin, and they don't specialize in Taijutsu.
3. I can see that you editted your Strengths and Weaknesses, but you didn't put any Jutsus under "Jutsus Want to Learn", please put the ones down that I suggested under there, ok?
I'll look to see if anything else needs done.
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