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 Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:56 pm Post subject: Vayne Kanekage [missing nin C ranked] |
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Name: Vayne Kanekage, 'Dark Yondaime'
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3
Weight: 114
Appearence: Vayne is a 5'3 male, with black hair, that spikes out, at the top. His long spiky bangs fall almost to his neck, where they come to rest. He has small shiny black eyes, that show his enemy, the depth of his skill. His tan skin complextion, complement his dark colored hair and eyes. Vayne's blue and silver Leaf village headband is tied tightly around his forehead. The look of Yondaime is sketched on the face of Vayne.
Vayne wears a long sleeved sky blue under shirt, that fits tightly around his arms. Over the shirt is a long white cloak, with yellow, red, and orange flames, etched at the bottom of it. On his hands, he wears tightly wrapped bandages, to cover the bruises from his training. On his legs, Vayne wears baggy black pants, that have bandages wrapped around the ankle. Basic ninja toe shoes, complete his outfit.
Race: White
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Konoha
Level/Rank: Genin C ranked Missin Nin
Village: Leaf
Bloodline: Kanekage
Main/Favored Weapon: Hands
Element: Kaneton
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu (Strong Fist) , Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: 2 pocket fulls of Iron Powder, 20 kunai, 30 senbon
Strengths: Vayneis very quick, agile, and flexable, making him a good close combat combatant. Experienced in the art of Strong Fist. Has a very quick-witted tongue, that helps him get under the skin of his competitors. Has a very charming personally, but knows how to be serious, when it is needed.
Weaknesses: Often times when Vayne erects a plan, it it long half way thought out, and generally doesn't good as well as planned. Sometimes his on the field personality, and regular personality conflict, causing some, not to like him. Can be very competitive, which often ends up, with him in a tight situation. Horrible at the art of Genjutsu, and defending against it. Low pain tolerance, which makes rushing in aimlessly, a bad idea.
Jutsus:
1.) Henge
2.) Bushin no jutsu
3.) Kawarmi
4.) Kinobori
Bloodline jutsus:
Name: Metal Possession
Type: Nin
Rank: C
Req: Kanekage Bloodline
Description: Metallic Possession allows the Kanekage Clan to manipulate the three different types of magnetic metal. The size of the object that can be controlled is dependent on the shinobi's rank and chakra use.
Name: Iron Wall
Type: Nin
Rank: C
Req: Iron Powder and Kanekage Bloodline
Description: Using the powder made famous by the Third Kazekage, a Kanekage Clansmen can make a solid wall of iron. This wall is a good way to protect oneself if there are attacks coming from one or multiple sides.
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Hayabusa Otoshi [Peregrine Falcon Drop]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: The attacker grabs a falling opponent by their ankles, wraps his legs around their waist, and drives them head first into the ground.
Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance]
Rank: C
Requirements: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Description: An attack which on its own does pretty much nothing yet can inflict great damage when in combination with other jutsus. This jutsu is an aerial set-up, meaning the enemy has to be in the air for it to fully function. Once in the air, the shinobi positions himself just below the opponent while in the air. Thus, the ninja becomes their opponent's shadow, leaving the opponent unable to escape from a follow-up attack.
Konoha Daisenpu [Leaf Great Whirlwind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A powerful leap forward, using the extra momentum to perform a powerful spinning kick with both legs in mid air, the second kick often being aimed lower in case the intended planned ducks. The technique is most effective at ranges of 2-3 meters, because if you miss or they dodge, you have at least made it past your opponent and have a chance to react before they can mount a significant counter-attack.
Konoha Gouriki Senpuu [Leaf Herculean Whirlwind]
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: A taijutsu technique where the user spins with all of their strength and delivers a powerful, spinning, heel kick, blasting their opponent back. This kick can also be used to disarm an opponent since this kick is powerful enough to easily knock a weapon out of the opponent's hand. It is a much stronger version of the Konoha Daisenpuu [Leaf Great Whirlwind].
Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu attack uses a combination of speed, strength, and the element of surprise. It is a perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. The opponent, obviously, is totally confused. However, seconds later, the attacking shinobi appears just below their opponent, and by raising his dominant leg, kicks the enemy right on the chin. This would send the victim flying up into the air. The attacker can then proceed with an even more devastating follow-up attack. Leaf spinning wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know about the attack until he gets kicked and is already high up in the air.
Konoha Reppuu [Leaf Violent Wind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This is a very simple, yet effective technique, which can be used for anybody who comes charging with a direct attack. Using his leg, the shinobi swipes the attacker's feet off the ground by moving his dominant leg across the opponent's feet, tripping him. This sends the opponent flying away from the defender in an awkward position, and probably smashing into another object such as a tree.
Konoha Shofu [Leaf Rising Wind]
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: Using quickness and agility, the user will do a swift upwards kick at his opponent or at a weapon his opponent is wielding thus knocking it out of their hand or grip.
Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu [Sakura Blizzard Technique]
Rank: B
Requirements: Kunai / Explosive Notes
Description: The user hurls several kunai at their opponent, each with a small sack of miniature explosive tags attached. The opponent, while deflecting the kunai, will cause the sacks to break and scatter the tags on themselves and the area around them. The user merely has to throw another kunai with an explosive tag to ignite them, thus catching their opponent in an immense explosion.
Shishi Rendan [Lion Combo]
Rank: B
Requirement: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind] / Kage Konoha Buyou [Shadow Leaf Dance]
Description: A Taijutsu technique following the Kage Konoha Buyou [Shadow Leaf Dance], putting both the ninja and their opponent in the air, giving the attacking ninja the advantage. Four separate blows are delivered: a roundhouse kick, followed by a powerful backhand blow, followed by a driving blow to propel them towards the ground faster, and finishing with a hard-hitting axe kick into the ground, reinforcing the blow. This technique puts a great deal of strain on the user's body, which is why it is concluded that it is not a technique one could come to rely on
Name: Metallic Shifting
Type: Nin
Rank: A
Req: Kanekage Bloodline and a magnetic metal
Description: This jutsu allows a Kanekage member to manipulate the shape of any magnetic metal. This jutsu is useful in making, a useless item, useful.
Name: Iron Sand Drizzle
Type: Nin
Rank: B
Req: Kanekage Bloodline and Iron Powder
Description: A jutsu made popular by the Third, Iron Sand Drizzle allows the Kanekage member to shoot small bullets made of the Iron Powder. These bullets are fast to make, but require a bit of concentration for a Kanekage to aim steadily.
Iron Sand World Order
Type: Nin
Rank: S
Req: Kanekage Bloodline and Iron Powder
Description: Creates an expanding sphere of spikes that engulfs the entire area it is used in.
Missions Completed: (All 0 For Now)
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
Vayne was born and created in the village of the Sand, but was soon exported to the Village of The Leaf. As he grew, Vayne knew not that he was different, but by the time he turned six, he realized that he was extremely different. Like most people with a strange Kekki Genkai, Vayne was rejected by his peers, and somewhat feared. But this did not hinder his feeling in wanting to be a shinobi, in some ways, it made him want it more. He wanted to show, that even a 'freak' that could control an element made famous by the Third Kazekage, could become a champion in the village.
At the age of ten, Vayne had entered the academy..as nothing but a street rat, without any knowledge of the shinobi world. This would soon show, as he failed the exam over four times. But even with failure, Vayne wouldn't give up..he would show everyone, that 'Iron' will, and training, could overcome natural talent. He began to train hard in the jutsu that stopped him from passing several times, Henge. With hours of training, Vayne mastered the jutsu, and went on to achieve Geninship. As excited as he was, Vayne knew he could do better, if he had a team and a sensei. At the age of fifteen, the 'failure' still searches for the team that will make him stronger.
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Village: Otogakure no Sato
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Ok, looks really good, but there's a few things that caught my eye.
1. (Nothing major) A few typoes sythe=scthye, quick witted=quick-witted, it (second under first weakness)=is (?), half way=halfway.
2. How are you carrying an 8' scythe as a Genin? Me personally, (and I've seen real scythes), make it around 5 1/2-6' (Up to you on that one)
3. How much Iron Powder are you carrying?
4. (Not sure how this works) For you Bloodline Jutsus, you may be able to have one of the C-Ranked ones, but you can't have the other ones until you're at least a Chuunin. Please put the others down to "Want to Learn" section.
That's all I can see.
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Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage; Genin; Genin; Genin
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
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Forum Credit: 23.5
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