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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:38 pm Post subject: |
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Ok so you are able to use water in that clan jutsu, but what your talking about is outside your clan abilities, take the itichi clan for instance because of the clans jutsu my second rpc could be able to use that fire element jutsu but that's it since he's a water element character. He isn't able to learn any of the other fire jutsu that are outside his clans techniques. But I'm not a mod I'm just giving my opinion so I'll let a mod give approval. _________________


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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:17 pm Post subject: Re: Shins Kenjutsu and Wave |
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| Shin wrote: | Name: Keep up (Weird I know)
Rank: C
Description: Slamming his Sword of Chaos into the ground, and adding in his chakra the genin would then run forward of course he'd be ya know he'd be stopped by the blade,but instead of stopping he would throw the blade,and follow after it as he runs the blade would move the air away from him making his speed increase in a straight path. When he reaches his opponet he can either attack with the Sword of chaos or other blades |
Ok, this one doesn't make ANY sense...a sword can't POSSIBLY move enough air to make a difference...and it would get to the point where the chakra does all the work so you might as well just toss chakra in front of you...
About the underlined/bolded/italicized...You have to create this weapon in the customs weapon section before you can include this in jutsu's. So this one would be rejected because it's based on this unknown "Sword of Chaos"
| Shin wrote: | Name: Illusionary blade
Rank:C
Description: Running at his enemy Shin would raise the blade as if to strike,but instead of striking when he swings the blade it dissapears along with Shin almost, and a heavy mist sets in and hundreds of shadowing figures are spotted running towards the enemy while Shin concentrates his energy into keeping himself in the air by standing on his blade, and using the element of wind to keep him up until the Mizu clones(Shadows) swing their blades in each different body part except for the head only to miss on pourpse and do a back kick and send them into the air with Shin coming down standing on the dull side of his blade. |
Ok, this is just completely above C-ranked...with all the chakra used, I would even say this could be considered A-ranked kinjutsu. And now you're assuming control of water and wind...mizu clones = clones made from water...and your flying with air element... _________________ Tegatus Hirokimi/|\Aisu Kokuou
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 7:36 pm Post subject: |
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And how large were these alleged naruto forums? (I don't think they'd be THAT big with jutsu's like that for ranks that low...) or else they'd be humongous at one point, then die out...anyway, we're different from any other Naruto forum, so what passes in one, might not (and probably won't) pass here _________________ Tegatus Hirokimi/|\Aisu Kokuou
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:04 pm Post subject: Re: Shins Kenjutsu and Wave |
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| Tegatus Hirokimi wrote: | | Shin wrote: | Name: Keep up (Weird I know)
Rank: C
Description: Slamming his Sword of Chaos into the ground, and adding in his chakra the genin would then run forward of course he'd be ya know he'd be stopped by the blade,but instead of stopping he would throw the blade,and follow after it as he runs the blade would move the air away from him making his speed increase in a straight path. When he reaches his opponet he can either attack with the Sword of chaos or other blades |
Ok, this one doesn't make ANY sense...a sword can't POSSIBLY move enough air to make a difference...and it would get to the point where the chakra does all the work so you might as well just toss chakra in front of you...
About the underlined/bolded/italicized...You have to create this weapon in the customs weapon section before you can include this in jutsu's. So this one would be rejected because it's based on this unknown "Sword of Chaos"
| Shin wrote: | Name: Illusionary blade
Rank:C
Description: Running at his enemy Shin would raise the blade as if to strike,but instead of striking when he swings the blade it dissapears along with Shin almost, and a heavy mist sets in and hundreds of shadowing figures are spotted running towards the enemy while Shin concentrates his energy into keeping himself in the air by standing on his blade, and using the element of wind to keep him up until the Mizu clones(Shadows) swing their blades in each different body part except for the head only to miss on pourpse and do a back kick and send them into the air with Shin coming down standing on the dull side of his blade. |
Ok, this is just completely above C-ranked...with all the chakra used, I would even say this could be considered A-ranked kinjutsu. And now you're assuming control of water and wind...mizu clones = clones made from water...and your flying with air element... |
That weapon was given to me by Haldur.
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