Zieg's new Genjutsu

Zieg · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 4:46 am Post subject: Zieg's new Genjutsu

Name: Magan (Demon illision)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Connection of the eyes from user to target. If used in a profile, the profile must be approved by Zieg.
Description: This jutsu requiers mass concentration to preform. The user first creates a hand seal, and begins to focue chakra. Once this happens the user must then make eye sight with his opponent. Once done the genjutsu takes effect. The user's concentraited chakra temporarly knocks an opponent unconscious, for about one to two seconds. During this time the user can make movements, striking his opponent, or avoiding him. The target doesn't realize he or she was put under the genjutsu, therefor not realizing it happened at all. It will only appear as if the user has teleported.

Name: Kuroima yume (Black demon dream)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: If used in a profile, the profile must be approved by Zieg.
Description: A very powerful genjutsu. The user cpncentraits his chakra, and emits it from his or her body. Anyone within the area becomes victum to the jutsu. This genjutsu confuses the brain, putting the rest of the body in a state of unconsciousness. The brain then works, as if the user is asleep. They then have a dream, much like if they were sleep. The jutsu last as long as Zieg continues to emit chakra, and hold the seal. The technique puts mental stress on the target, causing the brain to slowly tire out. If this jutsu is witnessed being done it will not activate.

Name: Genjutsu Kai kaunta (Genjutsu release counter)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: S [Kinjutsu]
Requirements: The target must preform Genjutsu kai, while being effected by a genjutsu. If used in a profile, the profile must be approved by Zieg.
Description: An extremely powerful genjutsu, developed, and created by Zieg. This jutsu counters the effects of Genjutsu kai, but a requierment must be met. First the target must be inflicted by a genjutsu. Next he or she must then preform genjutsu kai. Once the technique has been used genjutsu kai kaunta must be activated. The genjutsu fools the mind into believing a genjutsu has really been countered, and then puts an opponent in yet another genjutsu, fooling the mind into believing its making the actions the opponent wishes. This is an extremely powerful technique, which puts a large amount of strain on the user.
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 6:28 am Post subject:

isn't there already a set of GenJustu called "Magen" or "Demonic Illusion"?

I like that GenJutsu Kai Counter thingy, I have a better one though....it's called Sakashima.

Alright, I'll carefully look at this and probably accept it in less then 15 minutes. How friggin Jutsu does Zieg know?
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Zieg · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 6:29 am Post subject:

Not by itself, no. There is several Demonic illusion techniques though.
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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Actually, the Genjutsu Kai Kaunta is similar to the jutsu that puts a double illusion on the target. So we already have one, and I do not believe it is either s-rank OR kinjutsu.

But I like the other two. Well-balanced.

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Zieg · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 7:41 pm Post subject:

What your talking about 666 is way different than my genjutsu counter.
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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Not WAY different. Explain the differences. The only difference I can see is that this one can only be triggered when the opponent uses Genjutsu Kai and not beforehand like the existing one.

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Zieg · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 8:27 pm Post subject:

The Genjutsu your thinking of is the false surrounding and double false surrounding man. All they do is make you believe your in a different area from which you should be. The double makes the effect the same regardless of genjutsu kai. MY genjutsu makes you believe you really broke free from a genjutsu, but really you have fallen under a spell. Making you believe your making the movements you want to make, but really your not.
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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Ok, I see now. I guess I didn't read it properly. Thank you for clearing that up.

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Ryumaru · Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 8:53 pm Post subject:

'Oni' doesn't mean 'Demon', but is a certain kind of demon. It's an orge-like creature, much like the orges you see in Yu Yu Hakusho running around Reikai / Spirit World.

'Ma' or 'Akuma' are better words for 'Demons'... while Akuma is often translated as 'Devil', Ma is always related with Demons... such as Magen [Demon(ic) Illusion] or Hanma (the word for one who is 'Half-Demon').
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Zieg · Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:36 pm Post subject:

Are we done here?
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