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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 7:49 pm    Post subject: HadouRyu Ken Reply with quote

Name: HadouRyu Ken (Surging Dragon Fist)
type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
requirements: Good amount of Stamina, speed, strength, and Chakra,
some sort of elemental affiliation.
Rank: A(Kinjutsu)
description: This jutsu has the user put a lot of his chakra into his/her arm, primarily his/her fist, while the rest is used to protect the user from dangerous side effects. The user uses their element in the chakra to create their own unique Dragon Head that would be shown on their fist, where most of the chakra is. From there, the user rushes at the enemy with a lot of speed, and go in for an uppercut. Depending on the Element, the results will be different should it hit.

Fire: Enemy has a good chance of being burned badly, and does good damage to the enemy

Water: The pressure can crush the enemy, and will likely knock them out. More defensive then offensive, since the wall of water can be used to defend various parts of the body.

Wind: More or less the same as water. Its more supportive since using wind will increase the users speed until the hit has gone through or missed

Lightning: This element does the most damage. Not only will it shock the enemy with a lot of electricity, the dragon will continue out of the uppercut, bite the enemy(the chakra will surge and implode), and then let them fall to the ground hard. Most offensive version

Earth: Best defensive with an excellent offensive. To use earth the best, the user should have their fist touch the ground, and have the earth cover their arm, covering it as well as making a stone fist ready to crush the enemy. Will slow user down.

This attack will tire the user out, and puts him in a bad situation should it miss. It is recommended the user have a soldier pill with them if they use thus move. It will be hard to dodge, but its not impossible. You can do this with both arms if the user desires, just cut the chakra you use for one arm in half. If used properly, even the feet can be used. You can also chain it with other techniques as well.

Origin: Eric accidently discovered the technique. He was trying to learn the chidori on his own with no help, and instead of all the chakra going out of his hand, it was in his fist. His target, a tree, got blasted by electricity when he hit it, signinfying that this technique can be used to kill. He discovered how to use this into a powerful move.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The lightning one seems to be the most effective. Hope that has nothing to do with the fact your main element is electricity. Wink

Anyway this seems like an elemental chidori or rasengan. This would probably be an A ranked kinjutsu, and it seems more ninjutsu rather than taijutsu, considering all the happenings done with the elements.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 8:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well, I thought of it as Taijutsu as it all depends on the hit. If it's A rank Kinjutsu, than only Eric can teach it to someone else, I guess.
Actually, I was thinking, can I make a little origin of how this move came to be?
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 8:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well you have to do kinjutsu training for it. Then you can teach it to others. Also an origin is fine I guess, as long as its brief. As for the taijutsu thing yes it does all matter on that one hit, but chidori and rasengan all matters on one hit as well, yet its ninjutsu. This technique just seems like ninjutsu to me.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seeing as earth would be hard to carry, you should add it slows the user down. And for electricity, it would harm the user much like fire would, because electricity already is in your body, you should also state if the energy molecules ((the name eludes me right now)) are positive or negative. Negative would be the easiest to produce and would do lesser damage, still a lot. Where as positive you leave you depleted of chakra and would kill whoever was hit with it.

things like this are needed for that element.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you're going too indepth with this. I think what you are looking for are ions or atoms or something like that. The reason there I said why MOST of the chakra should go to the fist is because the rest of the chakra used in the move is used to protect the user from dangerous side effects, as you stated. I will update now and put an origin.

Also, Zieg, the way I did the strength of the elements I got from Final Fantasy. Fire was used, hoping to burn the enemy, and is strong. Water was defensive, and was often the use of healing spells. Wind is focused on speed. Lightning was mostly focused, raw power. Earth was the best defensive and did good damage.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see, and does this involve hand signs?
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

none. Zip, Zero, Nada. Don't need signs. Just put your chakra into your fist, concentrate on the element your using, and your chakra and body do the rest.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

then this will definitely be a kinjutsu. and an A rank, since it's more like rasengan since it requires no hand seals.
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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I already put that on there. Is it accepted though?
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