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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 10:02 pm Post subject: |
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update: Several weeks have passed, Alex is at full strength, he is currently studying a story on an idea of his ultimate genjutsu
Izanagi regains power, so does the Izanami. Although she was unable to directly break herself free, her influence could bring about events which could. Through releasing her massive power, she released powerful creatures from the Asura Realm. These tailed beasts were manifestations of chakra, which you have called Bijuu. These bijuu began to wage war on the planet, destroying all they could. Every bit of damage done to the planet weakened the prison which kept the Izanami at bay. To fight against these creatures, two divine entities were created: The God of Death the Shinigami and the Goddess of Life the Marashi-Ten. These two gods struck down these horrid demons and forced them back into the Asura Realm. Their time in the Asura Realm would only be temporary, as the Izanami’s power was growing stronger.
Watching these battles was the one and only deity of wisdom and intellegence, the master of izanami and izanagi , she was Omoikane. To combat against the two powers, omoikane was taken form, a godly creature. The power of the Izanami surged through the Naraka Realm, and made its way into the Human Realm. This power was specifically infused into a man of incredible power, and within him awoke a horrible tool. That man was known as the Sage of the Six Paths, whom held the very first doujutsu, the Rinnegan. Unknowingly this man was possessed by the power of the Izanami, and was guided subconsciously by her will. This caused problems. The Izanagi had realized this was the doing of the Izanami, and looked to put a stop to the Sage of Six Paths. The Sage of Six Paths proved powerful, as three gods were created to combat him: The Goddess of the Sun Amaterasu, the God of the Moon Tsukuyomi, and the God of the Sea and Storms Susano. Hence the uchiha's main mangekyou jutsus was formed the tsukuyomi ( ultimate genjutsu ) , amaterasu ( ultimate ninjutsu ) , susanno (ultimate weaponized taijutsu). To rival this Alex had though that the omoikane's power could be crafted, thus this would be the most foulist, terrible and destructive genjutsu ever made.
At this heightened level of Seishitsu Henka, the user is able to freely create large amounts of their mind chakra for use of their technique. This ability to the omoikane was strong if it were to come to existance. Alex intended to make a genjutsu like this, though it would require a large ammount of training, and he knew he wouldnt reach it unless he was a high leveled jounin. But at least he could do was jot down the notes needed for this.
ooc: i know its more of a story, rather then training but it gets better, i know my story sucks -.-
Roleplaying Characters:
Alex Itichi
Renji kazikan
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level) Fame: 0 ; 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 10:07 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: Don't forget to post in the "Template Change" section, ok? Also, are you Rank Training again? _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:26 pm Post subject: |
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ooc: somone gonna grade it so i can post my next post? _________________ Those without power, fear power. Those with to much power, Fear their own power, now which is a greater fear?
Roleplaying Characters:
Alex Itichi
Renji kazikan
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level) Fame: 0 ; 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: + 1.5 _________________ Kai Inuzuka
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****Midnight Shadow****
Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka-Niju, Tamotsu
Mitsuk, Seiko
Hyusahi, Daisuke
Daito, Tsubaki
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Shinobi Rank: SS-Missing, S-Jounin, S-Genin - A-Genin - B-Genin Village: Iwagakure x2, Konoha, Kumogakure, Missing Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: Mangekyo Sharingan Right Eye, Madara's Armour.
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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ooc: ty
[Alex had come to the training ground at the request of his fathis. They were going to be training in taijutsu today.. Right Al today I'm going to teach you a couple dirty tricks, cause quite frankly your genjutsu is good, your ninjutsu is not needed, your bowmenship is mastery, but your taijutsu sucks worse then a monkeys ass Alex nodded as his fathis started to explain the curriculum for the day and techniques.
Alex stand just in front of me and try to kick me with your left leg! his fathis said said as they started to train in the ways of taijutsu. Alex stepped forward with his right leg first and twisted to the left bringing his left leg up and around to kick at his fathis's head, but as his kick got half way towards its destination ,his fathiss left leg came up, forward and stamped down hard on the right foot of Alex. Alex felt a massive shoot of pain on his foot and something snapped and felt like it broke and a second later he tumbled backward. as he fell his fathis removed his foot from on top of his and let him fall, if he did not he probably would of twisted or broke something in his leg as well as in his foot. Alex crahed into the floor screaming in pain.
Alex's hand shot down to his foot and gripped it, the second he did an even bigger shot of pain rose from his foot and shot through his body Damn it! fathis you broke my foot! He said in the middle of his grunts of pain. Don't be such a baby! his fathis replied as he fell onto his perfectly formed ass in front of him, he formed a hand sign and his hand began to glow green and he pressed his hand on top of his sandal and began to rub from side to side over the top of the foot for a few seconds before it instantly started to feel better
After a few minutes alex felt the normal function come back to his foot, healed by the person that broke it. alex stood up and shook his foot about, it was strange how it was fully functioning and not painful at all. The way he suspected that the medical nin-jutsu worked was that it used chakra to speed up the regeneration of the bone itself, maybe overloading the limit of calcium at one time and done so much quicker. alex jumped up and down a few times making sure it was fully better then he sent some chakra to his feet and ran up a near by tree, he flipped and fell back to the ground landing on his feet i see why you wanted me to train my taijutsu retorted alex .yes, but i see you have no taijutsu skill at all, so lets work on that bow of yours i guess, then later we can work on your horrible taijutsu
I found myself jumping from tree branch to tree branch, moving through the wilderness just outside of Konoha's walls, looking like a blur of colours. I was moving through the trees so fast now that even if I passed by someone, they wouldn't see me, but instead just feel the wind hit them. Everything moving around me just looked like a tunnel of blurred colours, but strange enough, I understood it all, and it could probably change directions on the drop of a dime while maintaining this speed. Bow was drawn, there was over 25 targets in the konoha forestt, i had to hunt and kill each one. They also had sensory beekins on them, so if i got too close they would shoot kunia towards me. The first that i came by, i poped an arrow right into its sensory eye. Then after what seemed like a couple hours i was down to 3 arrows. Alex's father was eager to make him lose, for the last three was protecting each other, and there was a exploding tag trap so the only way was to be stealthy. Quickly grabbing a rock and threw it into the middle, the dummys would quickly look , as i drew three arrows and fired, each hit through the neck of the dummys, killing them if they were shinobi.
Roleplaying Characters:
Alex Itichi
Renji kazikan
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level) Fame: 0 ; 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:35 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: +2; Tota: 3.5/5 _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:07 pm Post subject: |
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ooc: ya know, when i made my first rank training post i thought i'd get a .5, now i see i'm gettting 2's, lol either i'm getting better or ya being nice.
The day grew longer. Alex expected his father to come and get him , after all he had slayed all the dummys. Yet this was the next test. A shadow clone appeared in front of Alex, stating it was a shadow clone. "your next test is stamina training, its a survival excercise , along with a camo test. Go north, untill you reach a town, you notice you have no money i allready took it off of you so you can't go buying food, you gotta live off the land. From that town take the white flag located in a tree. Then return to our house. Dont return till then, this should be a three day trip for you. the rest of today to get half way. The next day to get to the other village, and search for the flag. then the last day to head home. " . Alex would then sneer.
=====day 1======
Heading north he would grow tired. The sun was setting as an array of orange to pinkish red colors hued the sky above. Alex would have allready went and got his arrows back from the dummys. wandering through the wilderness of Konoha looking at the landscape and jotitng down various notes in his note pad which for potential traps he might wish too do. For night would be here soon, he must be ready. After setting numerous traps , Alex would sleep in the tree using vines he created as a sling bed between large branches in the canopy would turn over causing his arm to fall out and hit a mass of slightly dried out loose bundle of leaves. The leaves would fall down dancing on the light breeze that rolled by quickly forcing them to it the trunk of the tree. Alex would shift and then open one eyes before sighing in annoyance realizing he didnt build his camp good enough. It was high in the trees, yes, yet he felt the need to camo it a little better next time.
====day 2 ====
After what seemed like hours. Alex would fall back to sleep only to be woken up by a twig snaping next to his ear. It was a wire trap. " 50 kilometers south. In the trees . . . . . ninja . . ." he would mumble, he would grab a kunia, put it in place and thread it with wire, heading northern , he would tug on it and his whole camp would collapse and 2 smoke bombs would go off. By this time Alex was allready too far away to have to worry about if the ninja was friendly or not. After a bit, he would reach the village. He was tired, and hungry. He would set up multiple snares with what ninja wire he had left. then he would search for the white flag. Alex knew his father too well, if it was put in the village then it would stand out. If he put it in the forest, it would be like putting a FIND ME sign. So Alex thought logical " GOT IT . . .. . He would leap to a tree and walk up it, from the tip he would look around. Noticing somthing hanging from the very tip of a very high tower, useing the tree as a catapult, he would launch himself, flying through the midnight air, swooping towards the tower, he would grab the flag and head back to the forest. He would notice a fruit stand and take some fruit on his way. Good thing too, because all his wire was shreaded , somone had disarmed them. Alex would sigh, then head out , he would rather do a 48 hour day then sleep now. Bunshin jutsu! he would call out as he made hand signs. the clone would be visable from him, and the clone would lead the way. Sure enough it randomly poofed . OR DID IT!. He was under attack, a shady man appeared as the clone poofed. Grabing an arrow nearly instantly Alex would have allready fired one getting the next one for the ready. The first pierced the right knee of the man. State your name, and your bussiness or die! Alex was ready to kill the person. I'm.. ... .(winces in pain) . . . Aijou kumo, i'v come to scout on konoha, your prob here for the same reason right?. . Alex would smirk, pulling the string back farther, releasing it would pierce Aijou's heart, he would most likly have a minute to live " I'm from konoha you fool " Alex would smirk as he said this, pulling his head band up from around his neck, it revealed the leaf symble. After this he would head home.
====day 3=====
He allready had a head start for this day, nearly at the half way mark, it was little past midnight, around 2 or 3 in the morning. He would get ready to return home, his father waiting for him. Alex would make another bunshin and do as he did before it got attacked. The sky would start to glow with the radiant sun's color. Apon this shadowed the konoha gates. Alex was relieved when he saw this, he knew his survival training was done.
Roleplaying Characters:
Alex Itichi
Renji kazikan
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level) Fame: 0 ; 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:20 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: You're doing very well for a newbie. +1.5; Total: 5/5. Training finished! Same as before, post in the "Template Changes", while following the Template accordingly. Also, keep in mind that you can no longer Rank Train with this RPC, unless you buy more Rank Trainings. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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please lock this i'm leaving the thread since i never can rank train again with this rpc
_________________ Those without power, fear power. Those with to much power, Fear their own power, now which is a greater fear?
Roleplaying Characters:
Alex Itichi
Renji kazikan
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level) Fame: 0 ; 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **
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