The Lost Kirigakure Scroll

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Sucal · Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 2:45 am Post subject:

This might be me nitpicking again, but aren't the seven swords of the Mist (what I'm assuming you mean by the phrase 'the seven blades of Kirigakure' one of the canon things that aren't currently allowed at this time and/or destroyed? If so, then perhaps you should change it to just being seven generic swords or replica's of the seven, just to save any potential problems that could occur in the future. Not quite as cool as your idea I must admit, but less likely to cause problems. It is also interesting that this technique is a Ninjutsu, considering that its stated to require strength speed and stamina, something that Ninjutsu users aren't usually noted for. Perhaps make it Nin/Tai, though then that would require you to have a character with Ninjutsu or Taijutsu as a major with the other as a minor.

I can see two main problems with the second technique, both of which are rather minor, but I better state now. With this jutsu being an improvement of the basic one, the Sharingan wouldn't get any real benefit for seeing through it, considering that the basic Hidden Mist jutsu was stated in an earlier drop box thing to block the Sharingan the same way as it blocked normal sight (which makes sense if you think of it), unlike a natural mist which wouldn't. My Second small problem with it is Requirement of Main Style: Ninjutsu. I wasn't here in the old days, so I'm not sure exactly what that translates too myself, but I think that it would it be Ninjutsu Major or Ninjutsu Spec under the new system.

Besides what I have just stated, I have no real problems with the jutsu, though I admit to a little bit of bias when it comes to the latter two as I would like to learn them with one of my characters.
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IamCanadian · Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:12 pm Post subject:

Jeez I'm Nin Ijutsu tho... Im kidda getting the idea thats bad for a Hyuuga anyways. The new system doesn't really like Hyuuga healers. Well I switched it, I added the description that they were replica's a bit of history and a note saying they would evantually break against the original blades, just as powerful, far less durable. I also added in that two scrolls, and deleted the part about sharringun, well they can still see 10ft I guess, also I forget to include 2 things before so I added em, normal ninja can barely see a foot and that if byakagun isnt full developed it can only see a quater (before it only said fully developed u can see half-way through)
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:22 am Post subject:

Ninjutsu / taijutsu would mean that nobody could use this technique. After factoring in the style requirements and village.
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IamCanadian · Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:38 am Post subject:

Well I droppd Ijutsu on my character, but I want this technique to be somewhat available to other member of the hidden mist. So I made it Taijutsu & Ninjutsu specialist, meaning Tai/Nin or Nin/Tai these are fairly common. Sucal made a good point, this technique does require a lot of strength.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:44 am Post subject:

I meant for the S rank kin, nobody can have that.
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IamCanadian · Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:53 pm Post subject:

Ok I didn't understand what Syra meant, thanks to Angel for explaining it to me. Ok I changed it from Nin/Tai since its impossible to have an S-ranked technique that requires both, then I added into the requirements that it requires both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu styles with-out mentioning major or minor but as a ninjutsu technique it will require a ninjutsu major for the s-ranked version. I should've known that just got a bit conflicted by what Sucal told me.
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:36 pm Post subject:

No, what I mean is bloodline characters can't learn the S rank kinjutsu.
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IamCanadian · Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:08 am Post subject:

Thank you Syra for the clarification I was wondering why summons were lowered to B-rank.
The jutsu is changed to B/A Kinjutsu.
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