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 Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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| OzanaruSyra wrote: | Stick with B rank; it's similar in the fact that it drains chakra and without IC knowledge of how to defeat it they can't just realize it, so the weakness is shaky.
3. Those sound fair; put one of those in there.
5. More description than that. |
You could say that the weakness is shaky, but it is a crippling effect.
3. I did. I changed it around a bit.
5. I've added more to the process of how it is injested. Application is up to the user. :/
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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5. I wasn't talking about how it works, I was talking about what it does. As it stands if that's all it's too powerful.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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| OzanaruSyra wrote: | | 5. I wasn't talking about how it works, I was talking about what it does. As it stands if that's all it's too powerful. |
See, I do not understand.
I've told you what it does. If you have an issue with it, please clearly define what you have a problem with. Otherwise, your not helping me much to understand what your saying.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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Essentially without limitation you're allowing them to absorb literally any attack, which is obviously too powerful without levels.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Masakado wrote: | | OzanaruSyra wrote: | | Essentially without limitation you're allowing them to absorb literally any attack, which is obviously too powerful without levels. |
So, why didn't you say that in the first place? *grumbles about your roundabout methods* |
Because I'm empathetic and quick to understand things and I expect that of others. No offence  .
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:04 pm Post subject: |
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| OzanaruSyra wrote: | | Masakado wrote: | | OzanaruSyra wrote: | | Essentially without limitation you're allowing them to absorb literally any attack, which is obviously too powerful without levels. |
So, why didn't you say that in the first place? *grumbles about your roundabout methods* |
Because I'm empathetic and quick to understand things and I expect that of others. No offence . |
I hate you some times... XD Just kidding... Ok, I'll put that in later, but it will be based on times.
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| Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:50 pm Post subject: |
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Anyhow, while you're working on that you can get some members, unless someone else sees more problems.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:07 pm Post subject: |
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I didn't even read the history. I usually skim over the top parts then focus on the bloodline description, limit and jutsu.
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