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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

looks good
just gotta give some time for a mod to check it out
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 12:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You get a C-Rank Raiton Jutsu.  Also, going to need more on your "Background" as to why he's an 18-yr.-old Genin.  O.o  Also, with your "Bloodline" being "Dormant", I'm going to assume that it's for a Custom Bloodline, right?  If so, you have to wait until after you post the Bloodline, after you meet the "Requirements" to do so, then get it accepted before you can use it.  Just letting you know.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I did explain why he is an 18 year old Genin.  The Raikage had a problem with his parents, and took it out on him.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You need to add a bit more to it, why exactly did he/she hate them?

Other than the obvious of them being crap nin.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He's got a point.  Either add more to the "Background", or dock his age down to between 12-15.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I docked him down to 16

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meeeeeeh, not quite in the average Genin age range, but I guess that'll work.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Isn't 40 kunai a bit much?
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I reduced the number

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Didn't even notice that, heh.  Yeah, that is a bit much.  Dock it down to 15-20.



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