Raiku the Thunder Ninja

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jyuuken01 · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:35 am Post subject:

looks good
just gotta give some time for a mod to check it out
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Roleplaying Characters:
Otamai, Jun
Nikko Coloso
Ikego Yokosuka
Noko-ido, Minari
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-Genin/C-genin/B-genin
Village: Kirigakure/Konohagakure/Iwagakure
Fame: 200
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Training Points: 85
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 12:56 pm Post subject:

You get a C-Rank Raiton Jutsu. Also, going to need more on your "Background" as to why he's an 18-yr.-old Genin. O.o Also, with your "Bloodline" being "Dormant", I'm going to assume that it's for a Custom Bloodline, right? If so, you have to wait until after you post the Bloodline, after you meet the "Requirements" to do so, then get it accepted before you can use it. Just letting you know.
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Shikaru · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:24 pm Post subject:

I did explain why he is an 18 year old Genin. The Raikage had a problem with his parents, and took it out on him.

Roleplaying Characters:
Tsuchi Sunakaze
Raiku
Shikaru
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank genin
Village: Suna~~Kumo~~Iwa
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 215
Inventory: 30 Shuriken, 20 kunai~~1 Wakizashi, 1 Katana, 15 Shurken, and 15 Kunai~~2 Nekode

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:27 pm Post subject:

You need to add a bit more to it, why exactly did he/she hate them?

Other than the obvious of them being crap nin.
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:30 pm Post subject:

He's got a point. Either add more to the "Background", or dock his age down to between 12-15.
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Shikaru · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:40 pm Post subject:

I docked him down to 16

Roleplaying Characters:
Tsuchi Sunakaze
Raiku
Shikaru
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank genin
Village: Suna~~Kumo~~Iwa
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 215
Inventory: 30 Shuriken, 20 kunai~~1 Wakizashi, 1 Katana, 15 Shurken, and 15 Kunai~~2 Nekode

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:43 pm Post subject:

Meeeeeeh, not quite in the average Genin age range, but I guess that'll work.
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:55 pm Post subject:

Isn't 40 kunai a bit much?
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Shikaru · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:58 pm Post subject:

I reduced the number

Roleplaying Characters:
Tsuchi Sunakaze
Raiku
Shikaru
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank Genin~~E-Rank genin
Village: Suna~~Kumo~~Iwa
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 215
Inventory: 30 Shuriken, 20 kunai~~1 Wakizashi, 1 Katana, 15 Shurken, and 15 Kunai~~2 Nekode

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:58 pm Post subject:

Didn't even notice that, heh. Yeah, that is a bit much. Dock it down to 15-20.

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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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