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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:43 am Post subject: Otamai Clan(unofficial) wind jutsu |
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Name: Innengon - Fated Eye
Type: Ninjutsu (Kin)
Rank: C-B
Requirements: Otamai Jun only
Description:
Lvl 1 A white pupil appears in Jun's completely black eyes. When activated, the Innengon allows for the user to combine their chakra and their element outside of their body, opening a window to unique jutsu. Innengon heightens vision by making the peripheral as clear as main site, and allows him to "zoom" in and out with his vision, like looking through a telescope. Can zoom in to see a person clearly up to 1 1/2 miles, as if the person was right in front of him.
Lvl 2 Same affects as Lvl 1, but if the opponent or ally looks directly at the white pupil, then it begins the process of draining their chakra by having it flow out of their body. Can only be deactivated if the Otamai deactivates its, passes out, gets caught in a genjutsu, or dies. But keep in mind it is hard to activate a genjutsu with their body costantly expelling chakra. Also widens his vision to 300 degrees, leaving a 60 degree gap behind him when looking straight ahead. The blind gap gets wider the further the distance (wish i knew how to make like some kind of visual)
Name: Fantomu Debari - Phantom Projection
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Innengon activated (lvl 2 activated in order for attacks to connect)
Description: By infusing the chakra into the air around him, he can create a 'phantom' image of himself. Looks just like the user despite being transparent. Be it only an embodiment of air, the phantom is 2X faster, and can jump 2X higher, but the physical attacks are only half as strong. The user is unable to move and must hold the sheep hand sign. When let go of the handsign the phantom disperses. The Otamai are connected to his phantom by his Innengon. When he closes his eyes, he can see what the phantom sees, while at the same time allowing him to be completely aware of whats happening around him. Especially useful for spying, or infiltration, or intel, without the risk of harm to the user. No distance limitations, just time limitations (each phantom gets 3 posts). When dispersed into an opponents expelled chakra, it thickens the air and slows down his moments. The more phantoms that disperse in his chakra, the slower his movements. If this technique tried to attack an opponent without his chakra being expelled, the phantoms attacks are nothing but air brushing against his body, thus must have lvl 2 Innengon for the phantoms to attack.
Name: Tafantomu Debari - Multiphantom Projection
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Innengon activated. (lvl 2 activated in order for attacks to connect)
Description: Same as Fantomu Debari - Phantom Projection, but he can make as many as ten phantoms. These phantoms being embodiments of air, are two times faster, and can jump two times higher, although their physical attacks are half as strong. The user can see through the eyes of all the phantoms connected through his Innengon. When attacking an opponent who's not expelling his chakra, the attacks would be just like wind brushing the body.
Name: Tafantomu Debari A-mi - Multiphantom Projection Army
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Innengon activated. (lvl 2 activated in order for attacks to connect and slow down opponents)
Description: By continually molding his chakra with the air outside of his body, he is able to send out a high number of unlimited phantoms. There is too much to control each individual, so its wise to use this technique to slow down an opponent, or opponents. Its possible to make the air around the opponent so heavy, that it stops their movement completely.
Name: Fantomu Munashii - Phantom Void
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B-A-S (depending on number of phantoms)
Requirements: Innengon activated. At least one phantom projection.
Description: When a phantom is out on the battlefield, with a few more handseals, he turns that phantom or phantoms into a vortex. Anybody around it is forced towards the epicenter and cut repeatedly as it gets closer. The vortex only happens for about 5 seconds before the chakra that it was molded with disperses. Nothing happens when you touch the epicenter, but to clarify the technique, the air that was to form the phantom begins spinning rapidly, cutting the opponent repeatedly, while the wind is spinning in such a way it tries to suck you in for more cuts. If used in conjuction with Tafantomu Debari A-mi, this considered an S-rank jutsu, with hundreds of vortex's shredding the opponentses body while being sucked into many epicenters, can litterally tear shinobi up into pieces.
Name: Sanryoukyou Kire - Prism Slice
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S (kin)
Requirements: Lvl 2 Innnengon must be activated.
Description: After a short set of hand seals, he inhales as deep as he can, makes the required one-handed seal, and exhales a strong gust of wind. When the wind hit the opponents expelled chakra, the wind condenses and become minuscule triangles (resembling prisms) that cut into the opponent and enter their bloodstream. These tiny prisms cut up the opponent from the inside, constantly spinning in the bloodstream throughout the body, leaving minuscule cuts throughout veins, organs, arteries, which can cause serious internal bleeding. The opponent wont know what this technique did until it causes major damage. Meaning when he starts feeling the effects, its too late because theres already too many prisms in his blood. Insanely torturous after 2 posts. Can only be deactivated if the user deactivates it, when Innengon is deactivated, passes out, dies _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Otamai, Jun
Nikko Coloso
Ikego Yokosuka
Noko-ido, Minari
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: C-Genin/C-genin/B-genin Village: Kirigakure/Konohagakure/Iwagakure Fame: 200 Reputation: Training Points: 85 Inventory:
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Lvl 2 Same affects as Lvl 1, but if the opponent or ally looks directly at the white pupil, then it begins the process of draining their chakra by having it flow out of their body. Can only be deactivated if the Otamai deactivates its, passes out, gets caught in a genjutsu, or dies. But keep in mind it is hard to activate a genjutsu with their body costantly expelling chakra. Also widens his vision to 300 degrees, leaving a 60 degree gap behind him when looking straight ahead. The blind gap gets wider the further the distance (wish i knew how to make like some kind of visual) | Is it me, or does this seem like a version of the Byakugan...? _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Uchiha Katsuga wrote: | | Quote: | | Lvl 2 Same affects as Lvl 1, but if the opponent or ally looks directly at the white pupil, then it begins the process of draining their chakra by having it flow out of their body. Can only be deactivated if the Otamai deactivates its, passes out, gets caught in a genjutsu, or dies. But keep in mind it is hard to activate a genjutsu with their body costantly expelling chakra. Also widens his vision to 300 degrees, leaving a 60 degree gap behind him when looking straight ahead. The blind gap gets wider the further the distance (wish i knew how to make like some kind of visual) | Is it me, or does this seem like a version of the Byakugan...? |
It was his bloodline but instead he's trying for a set of SA. _________________

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Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:30 pm Post subject: |
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Meeeeeeh, not really liking it... _________________ Shigane, Makoto
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No 4th RPC
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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He's right, now that they're SA you're going to need more special requirements. _________________

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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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sure it has characteristics of byakyugan, vision wise
but what really makes it different is the main aspect of the doujutsu, its not all for the vision, the visions just a plus (and it is way below byakugan vision wise)
the main affect of this doujutsu is the given ability to mold chakra and their element outside of their body
thats what really makes the said techniques possible
not the vision and begins draining the chakra of the opponent also allowing for more powerful jutsu
I'll take the vision field if i could keep these two abilities _________________

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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 8:24 pm Post subject: |
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| jyuuken01 wrote: | sure it has characteristics of byakyugan, vision wise
but what really makes it different is the main aspect of the doujutsu, its not all for the vision, the visions just a plus (and it is way below byakugan vision wise)
the main affect of this doujutsu is the given ability to mold chakra and their element outside of their body
thats what really makes the said techniques possible
not the vision and begins draining the chakra of the opponent also allowing for more powerful jutsu
I'll take the vision field if i could keep these two abilities |
The Byakuga has near-360 vision. Your SA has 300 vision. That's not that far off really. I'm just mostly wondering how they're able to do that. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
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Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:26 pm Post subject: |
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*sighs* I'm still not liking it at all... But, oh well, what can I do? I'm only an Admin... Need to specify how far one can see outwards before it becomes too much strain to them. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
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