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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 1:32 pm Post subject: |
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Yea but since they aren't the user it could mean that they have less strength then the user thusly making it harder to hurt or whatever, but meh your right getting slashed is an ouchie regardless >D
The question is how well can they do it is what I was saying. Only commenting cause I like that jutsu XD _________________

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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 1:37 pm Post subject: |
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Name:Senkou
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: After utilizing Bushi no Me, the user will move at high speeds to create five after images that all attack the target at the same time. While the speed of this attack is more impressive than the strength; each after image produces a very strong attack. Even though these are after images they can be blocked or dodged if the target is of sufficient skill. |
Will this description do I wonder? _________________

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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 1:38 pm Post subject: |
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Similar to question i asked before then. Though personally i thought they were after images. They weren't real. Thinking they surround the enemy and give almost 0 reaction time to stop the attack, at least from all 5 and the person can be 1 of the 5. _________________

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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 1:42 pm Post subject: |
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well after images could attack if left with chakra so that's what is so cool about it. The user doesn't need to attack, or anything, and I think you should say is the after images are weaker than the user or not, but that is just me, like they are faster but not stronger kinda thing. _________________

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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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Oh yea duh lolz, alright yea that works I suppose >D
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was i wrong? Are the after images being made real? _________________

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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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[quote]Name: Sennen-Ryu
Requirements: Taijutsu Major or Taijutsu Specialist, each level must be trained separately as a jutsu of your character's current rank (S-rank with twice the post amount for SS-rank characters) and in order. Additionally, this style requires a katana and to have genjutsu as a minor style.
* Level 1: Taijutsu Specialist: E-rank; Taijutsu Major: E-rank
* Level 2: Taijutsu Specialist: D-rank; Taijutsu Major: C-rank
* Level 3: Taijutsu Specialist: C-rank; Taijutsu Major: A-rank
* Level 4: Taijutsu Specialist: B-rank; Taijutsu Major: SS-rank
* Level 5: Taijutsu Specialist: A-rank
* Level 6: Taijutsu Specialist: S-rank
* Level 7: Taijutsu Specialist: SS-rank
Description: This Taijutsu style revolves around sword techniques from various mundane styles, combining battou styled assaults with standard streamline kenjutsu. However this style combines something unique when compared to other taijutsu styles; It combines the use of basic genjutsu to throw off opponents and disable one's ability to read the movements there in. This style's main starting stance is with the sword in the sheath with the legs spread and knees slightly bent.
* Level 1: Speed and Agility +5%
* Level 2: Speed and Agility +10%
* Level 3: Speed and Agility +15%
* Level 4: Speed and Agility +20%
* Level 5: Speed and Agility +25%
* Level 6: Speed and Agility +30%
* Level 7: Speed and Agility +40%[quote]
Looks good to me.
| Quote: | Name: Bushi no Me
Type: Genjutsu - visual
Rank: D
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: This is a basic genjutsu that requires eye contact with an enemy. Once eye contact has been made, the target will be placed under a sight based illusion and will view the user of this technique in the same position they had when eye contact was first intiated; this allows the user to move without the opponent realizing that they have. Bushi no Me lasts only a moment after it is used before it disperses on its own. |
English translation of this would be nice. Looks good otherwise.
| Quote: | Name: Battou
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user draws their blade from its sheath and arcs it so that it will slash an opponent at a high speed. |
This is an actual Sword Style, so no need for it. And it's Battoujutsu (Sword-drawing Art)
| Quote: | Name:Burst Break
Type:Genjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user stands at a ready stance with their blade drawn. The target will suddenly see 100 different strikes all being performed by the user at the same time. Only one of the strikes will be a real attack, but which one? |
B-Rank at least.
| Quote: | Name:Genkiri
Type:Genjutsu - visual
Rank: B
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The user molds chakra around their katana. The moment that an enemy's eyes lock onto the weapon they will be trapped in an illusion. The target will see the user suddenly break through their defenses and slice off their legs. For as long as this jutsu is maintained the target will think that their legs have been cut off. The Target will not be able to feel their legs and will feel pain as if their legs had really been cut off. |
English translation please? S-Rank Kinjutsu. This is more along the lines of what Tsukiyomi can do.
| Quote: | Name:Senkou
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: After utilizing Bushi no Me, the user will move so fast that they suddenly appear near the enemy and perform a battou strike. The speed of this attack gives the opponent little reaction time to avoid or block this attack. |
English translation please? S-Rank most likely.
| Quote: | Name:Zanmoto
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Sennen-Ryu
Description: The Target will see a giant chain shatter the sky and burrow into the ground. The chain will then begin to retract and seemingly pull up an alter with a katana stand on it. They will then see the user drop their current weapon and pick up this new katana. Cherry blossoms will then begin to fall as the user pulls the blade from its sheath. They drop the sheath and at that instant the user appears in front of the target and stab them through their chest. This hostile Genjutsu will drain a target's stamina as it puts a lot of stress on the target's heart. If the target does not have the stamina to withstand the jutsu they will die of a heart attack. |
English translation please? What kind of Genjutsu is it? S-Rank Kinjutsu.
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