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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:13 pm    Post subject: Eagle Boss Reply with quote

Name: Ookagitori "The Roc"
Age:  Unknown
Gender: Male
Height: Approximately 85' high (when perched). Wingspan is Approximately 200' wide.
Weight: 7,000 lbs.

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Race:Eagle
Hair:Feathers, Brown throughout the entire body, except at the tail and the head, where the feathers are white.
Eyes: Red
Body: Large, muscular, and covered in giant feathers. Its beak is yellow, and it curves just slightly down at the tip, giving it the perfect effect when it comes to ripping things apart. Its legs are yellow, tipped with three black talons whose size could crush ships.

Level/Rank: Boss
Type: Solo
Contract: Eagle Summoning Tattoos

Main/Favored Weapon: Talons/Beak
Element: Wind, Water
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: N/A

Personality: The Roc is a noble and magnificant creature of legend, he will not obey just any shinobi, only those who have proven themselves as powerful and a force to be reckoned with may command his alliegence. If the summoner has earned his respect then The Roc will gladly fight by his side until death, he would never run nor leave his summoner in harm's way, he will protect the summoner with all his might by seeking to quickly finish the opponent whom he shows no mercy. Ookagitori also serves to ferry the summoner all over the world, though he would not take kindly to being summoned for every trip.

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Name: Fuuton: Collossal Winds
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: The Roc only
Description: With a beat of its huge wings The Roc creates incredibly strong winds which swirl around in a massive whirlwind with The Roc at its centre, the strength of the wind can match any great storm, it also serves to greatly increase the strength of katon jutsu used and makes it difficult for katon jutsu to be used against The Roc due to the direction of the wind. These winds last for 5 posts.


Name: Feather Barrage
Type: Special
Rank: A
Requirements: Feathers
Description: This jutsu requires the user to have feathers. Using their chakra to harden the feathers to the strength of steel and a cut capable of slicing tough rock, the user then fires the feathers towards the opponent in a dense shower which makes it difficult to completely dodge. Obviously the more feathers are used the more chakra needs to be used.


Name: Chakra Shield
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: The Roc only
Description: The Roc creates a dense shield of chakra around his wings which causes them to be surrounded by an intense purple glow, this chakra is then used as a shield and can block techniques of up to S-rank non kinjutsu, proving to be a very useful jutsu in the heat of battle. This technique can block the same amount of chakra that is put in; so 1 S-Rank, 2 A-Ranks etc. (Can only be used twice per thread)


Name:  Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi - Great Cutting Whirlwind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: A weapon that can create a flow of air, like a fan
Description: This technique creates a powerful wind in a wide area, but its main part is that this wind has cutting properties. Basically, it's the same as Kamaitachi, but covering a larger area and more powerful. As most techniques that utilize weapons, this one does not require hand seals.


Name: Fuuton: Pressure Ball Cutter
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: After inhaling deeply, the user will expel a rather large ball of compressed air at their opponent from their mouth. This projectile deals considerable pressure damage and bursts upon contact, creating a strong cutting wind in close proximity to further damage the target.





Background: The Roc has existed for countless lifetimes, it is very possible that he was here since the dawn of time, one of the oldest and most incredible creatures in the world today, it is known far and wide as the "Flying Mountain". Ookagitori is prominent in many legends and myths, most believe it does not even exist however there are those select few who have witnessed its majesty and have no choice but to believe. Some believe Ookagitori to be a demon, whilst others believe it is a god, indeed it is definately an other worldy sight, something normally only seen in dreams. All but The Roc's most recent background is shrouded in mystery, over the past millenia it has been known to have travelled around the world many times, it has faught battles which are now legends sung accross the lands and also ravaged ships at sea creating just as many terrifying myths, some even say that Ookagitori is the source of all storms, that when it beats its giant wings a great monsoon blows up around it and lasts for 7 days and nights before finally disspating.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks fine to me.  Objections?
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's fine, but ew, Japanese / english names....
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

200 feet? That's a pretty damn big bird, even for a boss summon. Plus, that weight wouldn't fly.

First jutsu, instant tornado kill, no.
Third, S beating an unlimited number of S rank jutsu, no.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meh, sorry.  I only glanced through it, and it looked ok, heh...  ~_~
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Iunno, it's an epic bird so it can fly o.o

And that first jutsu is only really to make fire techs stronger, the third I don't quite see your problem with.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Take out the destroys buildings and just add in very powerful.

And like I said, unlimited blocking of S rank jutsu is too powerful.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Edited, and the second was meant only to block 1 S-Rank so I edited that in.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Name: Fuuton: Collossal Winds
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: The Roc only
Description: A mighty fuuton jutsu capable of destroying an entire village, with a beat of its huge wings The Roc creates incredibly strong winds which can match any great storm and which also serves to greatly increase the strength of katon jutsu used. These winds last for 5 posts.

Can you re-word the bold bit please?

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Name: Chakra Shield
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: The Roc only
Description: The Roc creates a dense shield of chakra around his wings which causes them to be surrounded by an intense purple glow, this chakra is then used as a shield and can block techniques of up to S-rank non kinjutsu, proving to be a very useful jutsu in the heat of battle. This technique can block the same amount of chakra that is put in; so 1 S-Rank, 2 A-Ranks etc.

Still don't like that really. I mean, there's the possibility for severe abuse of the technique. Perhaps add in a count of how many times it can be used per thread. (No more than 3)
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How's that?
I edited the first one quite a bit and the second I limited to two uses per thread.



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